Lin Bai nodded with satisfaction and closed the book. Hugging Xingqiu, who was still crying, he said with a smile: "Still crying, you see that everyone passing by is watching us."

"I told you not to read it, it's obviously badly written, you still have to read it hard, how embarrassed I am."

"Actually..." After the two words came out, Xingqiu immediately looked at Lin Bai with an expectant expression.

"Actually, I can understand why your book was rejected, it's really not very good..."

I thought that Lin Bai could praise his book, but when Xing Qiu heard it, he could only sigh.

"I'm not finished. The disadvantages are great, but the advantages are equally prominent!

"What merit?"

"The setting is novel, but the subject matter is old-fashioned. If you change this theme to a few, you will definitely be able to fire this Divine Sky Folding Halberd. Lindbergh assured with a pat on his chest.

Xing Qiu didn't really believe it.

"But this Divine Folding Halberd also has martial arts elements."

"Yes, the problem is here, although Shenxiao Folding Halberd has martial arts elements, it is not his main selling point. You look at his settings here, some of them are not as good as yours... What is it called

..." "Shen Qiu picks up the sword record..." "Xingqiu people are stupid, you read it for a long time, don't you read the title of the book..."

"As soon as I look at this Shen Qiu Sword Picking Record of yours, I know that you have substituted yourself into it, right?"

Xing Qiu nodded, and Shen Qiu picked up the sword and wrote it with reference to some of his own experiences.

"It's good to have real-life references, but it conflicts with your setting. Plus you are a little obsessed with the theme of martial arts, and people who are used to watching martial arts will feel that there is a play. Listening

to Lin Bai's analysis, Xingqiu nodded frantically, feeling that this was the case.

"Then may I ask Brother Bai, how do you think it should be changed?"

"Change what, just rewrite a new one." Lin Bai said with a smile, his idea is very simple, Xingqiu this person writes the book, Albedo continues to illustrate, he comes to be the editor, guiding the general direction of Xingqiu's novel.

Although I can't say that I have crossed over what Tang poems and Song poems are remembered, hundreds of poems, and what to copy. However, he didn't watch and play less anime games.

Although it is a little difficult for you to recall a game or novel in its entirety, the general main story can still be remembered.

Sort out an outline, revise and revise, and then let Xingqiu write a book, Albedo's illustrations, originally the top level, when the time comes, add them together, and the book will definitely sell out after it is published.

He has this confidence, because the Divine Folding Halberd is the best proof of this. Shenxiao Folding Halberd Record put this thing in the world before he crossed, that is, just an ordinary light novel.

Xing Qiu heard what Lin Bai said to write a new book, and he was a little hesitant.

"What's wrong?"

"I don't want to write it, what if I write it and no one reads it?"

Lin Bai looked at Xingqiu's expression and understood that Shen Qiu's sword picking up the sword record was not a small blow to Xingqiu.

After thinking about it, I had an idea. Lin Bai smiled and said, "I have an idea, you listen to it first."

Xing Qiu nodded.

"In the past two days, I have encountered something..."

Lin Bai said the disappearance of Boss Jin that he and Yanqiu investigated, and Xingqiu listened with relish, and nodded his head all the time.

After speaking, Lindbergh asked: "How, is it interesting?"

"Interesting, you can really turn into a bird?"

"Dragons can be good! If you don't think about whether it can change or not, the reader won't care.

"But it's amazing that you can turn into a bird."

Good guy, you don't understand the core of Shuangwen.

"Logic and reason, it doesn't matter, as long as the story is interesting, can let the audience see the novel setting, plot, make him feel interesting." Readers are not stupid, of course they know that they can't change birds, but the matter of changing birds itself is interesting, just because they can't change, so they think it's interesting to change birds?

Xing Qiu chewed Lin Bai's words thoughtfully for a while, and then nodded.

"I probably understand, what readers can't do, they see in the book, think it's interesting?"

Lindbergh was very relieved and gave a thumbs up.

"That's probably it. I see that your writing is good, as long as you change a novel theme and add Albedo's illustrations. Rest assured, absolutely sold out. At that time, you will be the number one literary hero of Tivat! "

The first great writer!" When Xing Qiu heard this, his eyes lit up. But this light only flashed for a moment, and Xingqiu held it again.

"However, if you think about it, it is not the same thing to write it. At first, I also thought that my book was very well written, but..." Lin

Bai frowned, it seemed that this guy Xingqiu lacked confidence.

Thinking back, there seems to be a book in the game that says that Yukiaki exploded in Inazuma by chance. But now Inazuma is closed to the country, and she can't go. Beidou is also gone, otherwise he can let Beidou come back with some proof.

Xing Qiu asked at this time: "Since Lin Bai, you seem to know how to write books, why don't you write it?"

"Laugh to death, who has nothing to do, write novels and play." Who does not know, writing a novel is a dead end.

Xingqiu's face was shocked, and he was frightened by Lin Bai's words.

"Well, you yourself think that writing a novel is a dead end, and you still ask me to write it!"

Lin Bai looked embarrassed, finished, accidentally said his heart, and quickly made amends: "No, I mean, people who can't write, insist on writing, that is a dead end..."

In the world before Lin Bai crossed over, it was indeed such a truth, because his place was already at the end of the online article. Various topics have been written, and there is no way out.

But Tivat is different, the fantasy here has just emerged. If nothing else, what subsequent crossing, other worlds, cool text routines, etc. are all directions that can be expanded.

We must convince Xingqiu that although Fenghualou escaped yesterday and pit some money, this money is completely insufficient for Lin Bai. After all, the devil knows when the next time it will be pitted by Wendy...

This part of Tivat's novel, which is now virgin land, waiting to open, if you do not seize this opportunity to earn a handful, it is a waste.

Lin Bai pulled out a pile of paper in his hand and dangled it.

"Although you said you didn't want to write, what are these?" Lin Baithief laughed.

The paper in his hand was brought out when he took out the book from Xingqiu's bag just now, and it was the manuscript of some essays written by Xingqiu.

"You..." Xing Qiu was slightly angry.

"Well, you see if this works. Just now, the investigation process between me and Yan Huang, you also think it is very interesting, right? Rather, in this way, you will write a manuscript of tens of thousands of words according to this theme, and we will try it first. Xing

Qiu listened and gritted his teeth and hesitated, just listening to Lin Bai's story, he really had the idea of wanting to write.

"Do you know Smokey? As a lawyer, she must have taken on a lot of strange cases, if you think this incident is not enough, let's ask her more.

"Miss Yan Qiu, although I have heard her name, I am not familiar with her..."

Let's go, go to the office! Lindbergh pulled up Xingqiu and ran to the office.

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