I, Hikigaya, am just a light novelist
Chapter 3
To his surprise, the background display finally showed comments.
For creators, especially new creators like him, it is good to have one more interactive comment, and it is best to be recognized.
Of course, the biggest fear is that no one cares.
But when he opened the comments and saw what these readers were talking about, his face suddenly darkened.
These guys are a bit too arrogant!
"I don't understand. What does the author want to express?" Are you writing in a foggy way, are you showing off your writing skills or something? 』
"It feels like reading a textbook, there are too many preachy lines. 』
"I thought it was some cool article, but it didn't meet my expectations at all. It's a bad review. 』
"The author must be a newcomer, right?" The processing of some plots can obviously be very simple, but they end up being so complicated. 』
"Stop dreaming, you are not suitable for writing light novels. 』
"I suggest you read what other people have written. I recommend..."
"What an ugly article. There are too many personal items. The author must be very unhappy, right?" 』
"What the hell did you write? It's nonsense. Go back to the countryside and raise pigs...!" 』
After reading all the comments, Hikigaya Hachiman was immediately impressed.
I feel like my life has been denied, I feel worthless, and I feel like I'm falling into the abyss.
"However, even though my writing is poor, you shouldn't criticize me like this!"
He felt his heart was broken, he was so unhappy, and wanted to vent and take revenge.
『NMSL,WSND. 』
There was this extra paragraph in the reply chat box.
"never mind."
But after enduring it for a while, he silently deleted it.
If he started to quarrel with these people, he would be completely without talent and virtue, and even though he was weak and weak, he would not be able to quarrel with these people.
In this way, Hikigaya Hachiman went to class with a depressed mood.
I was in a bad mood. I didn't sleep well last night. As a result, I accidentally fell asleep while the homeroom teacher was in class. The most terrifying thing was that I was found to be punished by standing still. It can be said that misfortunes never come singly.
This incident caused the existence of the individual named 'Hikigaya Hachiman' to increase by at least 10 percentage points. Even several classmates he met in the class used this incident to make fun of him.
"Sure enough, I'm just a loser. I spent a failed life in my previous life. This time I deliberately chose a simpler path, but the result is still not good? Even the first level is so difficult..."
Hikigaya Hachiman was lying on the table, feeling very depressed.
In addition, it is really stupid to use the precious memories in your mind when you can obviously use them to save your face.
You can completely describe yourself as "a mediocre person with a tendency to be proud".
After a period of frustration.
"No! I can't think like that! I haven't even celebrated my 13th birthday in my life, so why do I start talking about success or failure?"
He propped up his body with his hands and suddenly became energetic.
Believe in yourself and become a future warrior!
One day, use facts to prove to those trolls that young people should not be bullied into poverty!
At noon, eat lunch.
He logged into the Immortal River Library Newcomer Award page again. He did not look at his own information, but looked at other people's submissions to see if there was anything worth learning.
It turns out that he had been guilty of arrogance before and thought he was talented before he started writing. After he sobered up, he began to be down to earth.
Swiping the page, he saw a work with good data. The title was "The Reincarnated King of Goblins" and the author's name was...
"Huh? Yamada Fairy?"
Hikigaya Hachiman rubbed his eyes, thinking he had seen it wrong, so he confirmed it again.
Could it be the one in his memory?
With some curiosity, he clicked to enter the page of the work. Because he had limited lunch break, he first planned to take a look at the other party's comment area.
It turned out that the comment area below this book was almost exactly the same as his, with all kinds of disparaging remarks emerging in an endless stream, but the authors of the two books handled it differently.
5 Miss Fairy
"How old is the author?" You can make grammatical mistakes ten times in a paragraph of several hundred words, right? 』
"Could it be that the author slipped through the compulsory education net? Damn, what the hell did you write? 』
"Except for the author's writing style, at least he understands what everyone wants to see. Those who don't know think they are looking at the P station. 』
"Did the author travel back in time from twenty years ago in the plot development of the dian-within-dian?" It made me feel embarrassed. 』
"I enjoyed watching it. I can't compliment the author's skills. He wrote such a fat and obscene article. 』
"Speaking of which, after looking around, I feel that the level of this year's Newcomer Awards is completely inadequate. Is the industry going to be finished?" 』
Negative comments accounted for the absolute majority, and even the good reviews seemed to have a yin and yang flavor. However, under these comments, the account named "Yamada Fairy" had a high-intensity interaction and the words they said were very unpleasant. However, speaking from it reveals the fact that his mental level is not very high.
So next comes another soul comment.
"Is the author an elementary school student? 』
Yamada Fairy commented below——
"What's wrong with primary school students? Who says primary school students can't write novels?" 』
What followed was another string of mocking words.
Seeing this, Hikigaya Hachiman's lips curved into a smile.
There is no doubt that this Yamada Goblin is the Yamada Goblin in his impression, the best-selling author who will sell millions of books in the future.
It's just that he's just an unknown person now, and he hasn't even finished his debut work yet.
After reading the comment section, he even felt like he was in the same boat as the other person...
He quickly shook this stupid idea out of his mind.
Even if he is in trouble now, he will be a best-selling author in the future
What about yourself? Maybe nothing.
"Ah."
He laughed to himself.
Just when Hikigaya Hachiman was about to close the comment section and see if there were any weaklings in the same situation as himself, he suddenly had another thought and sent a private message.
"Teacher Yamada Fairy, I read your novel and I think you are very talented. I hope I can have the opportunity to communicate with you. If you are interested, then add me. My line account is..."
In his failed life in his previous life, he discovered that one of his clumsiness was that he was almost always passive and rarely took the initiative.
Since he decided not to repeat the same mistakes in this life, he had to make changes accordingly.
As a mediocre person, it may be difficult for him to realize breakthroughs and improve his creative abilities by himself. Perhaps he can seek help from others.
It is very common for authors to communicate and improve with each other. Even if Yamada Fairy's writing style is criticized, as a best-selling author in the future, there must be something, although it may not be much, just a little bit.
After sending the private message, he secretly glanced at the comment sections of other works and found that everyone seemed to be no different. They were criticized a lot. There are always a few people who reach their peak when they debut. Most people have to fall several times before they can grow. stand up.
For example, the writer who is temporarily ranked first this time is an author who has contributed for three years. He did not win any awards in the previous few times, but this time his new work has received rave reviews. It can be said that the chance of debut is very great, as long as the next period of time There aren’t many dark horses emerging.
After realizing this, Hikigaya Hachiman felt much better.
Maybe he is not a genius, but neither are most people, and they are not at the level where talent is needed.
Therefore, there is no need to be discouraged at all, and even if it is a piece of waste wood, it should burn more fiercely!
The young man secretly clenched his fists and made up his mind.
Even if you go through a storm, you still have to forge ahead to live up to this life.
Not long after returning home in the afternoon, Hikigaya Hachiman received a friend request. After clicking on it, the Yamada Fairy immediately sent a message.
"Are you my fan?" 』
This was the first sentence that came up, so impatient that he could even tell the other person's emotions from this sentence.
If you think about it, if you could be recognized, I would probably be very happy.
However, the other party obviously misunderstood something.
"Sorry, I'm not your fan. 』
After he typed this sentence, before he could explain further, the other party's answer came quickly.
"Then why did you ask me to join you?" 』
The question was full of resentment, which was obviously different from the attitude just now.
"This is too true."
Hikigaya Hachiman complained softly, and then continued typing.
"Actually, I am also a fledgling author. I am currently working hard to officially debut my novel. The reason I want to communicate is because I think we may have some common topics and can make progress together. 』
He expressed it kindly, but that didn't mean he would get a friendly response.
"It's a good idea, but only weak people choose to stick together, right?" Moreover, your level of playing chess will get worse and worse if you play with a bad chess player. Why should I, the young lady, make progress together with you? 』
He was silent for a moment and wanted to type something to say, but found that he didn't know what to say and his fingers stopped in mid-air.
"However, you can see that this young lady has the potential to become the savior of the light novel world in the future. For the sake of your discernment... I will give you this opportunity today to see if you can keep up with this young lady." Miss’s ability, tell me, what is the light novel you wrote? 』
Next, another message was sent.
Although it was a rebellious tone, it also expressed an attitude.
Hikigaya Hachiman's hands that couldn't be moved suddenly became flexible, and he sent the web address of the novel he had submitted.
At this moment, he felt inexplicably nervous.
What kind of evaluation will the other party give to me?
6I’m going to debut!
"To be so swayed by the evaluation of a primary school student, I have really fallen."
He shook his head and laughed, covering his forehead with his right hand.
When Yamada Fairy contacted me again, two hours had passed.
This actually shows that the other party is taking this matter seriously.
Yamada Fairy: I’ve finished reading. To be honest, I’m very disappointed. I can’t tell you are writing a light novel at all. Except for your writing style, which is a little bit readable, the rest is almost a mess. With your talent, well, you can consider other jobs. , no need to dream.
Hikigaya Hachiman looked stunned.
Was he actually ridiculed by a primary school student?
Although this kind of evaluation is expected, it is still an unbearable pain for the soul.
So, he said something harshly.
Me: I took a look at your comment section, and it seems like the response isn’t very good either.
Yamada Fairy: Can that be the same? This lady just wrote it casually on a whim. If I were to take it seriously, it would definitely be different, and I am still young.
Me: I am also young and a future warrior.
Yamada Fairy: Oh? So how old are you?
Me: I am thirteen years old in October this year.
Yamada Fairy: Real or fake? If that's the case, you're just a little more than a year older than me, then your writing style, which is slightly better than this lady's, can be considered an advantage.
Obviously, he is not a little bit stronger. The Yamada Fairy is indeed a primary school student, but he is not. Even if he is a useless person, he has been born in two lifetimes.
Probably a little better than ordinary high school students, right?
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