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61 critical comments

Failure always runs through life. This is the life of most people, but for some people, life is always smooth sailing.

Kasumigaoka Shiu, is now a first-year student at the private Toyosaki Academy. Ever since she was a child, she has done everything smoothly. She can do whatever she wants, and she has always ranked first in her grade in studies. She has achieved good results and was asked by the drama club to write a script. She is already a well-known talent.

Just some time ago, she accidentally learned about the existence of light novels while browsing the Internet, and she immediately became interested. It is not as troublesome as other work hobbies. After successfully submitting the article online, she can also have free time to write.

As a result, she created the work "Metronome of Love" and participated in the Novel Newcomer Award.

Just like her previous life, when others thought it was difficult to write novels, her "Metronome of Love" quickly soared to a high level, and the comments below were all rave reviews.

"At this level, debuting won't be a problem at all, right?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu checked the final review of previous years, judged this result as it should be, and treated it as normal.

Because no one else knew that she was writing novels online, she didn't see what happened in her comment section until she accidentally checked it a few days later.

"This is a very good youth romance novel. Reading it is like tasting honey, making people indulge in that beautiful fantasy world. However, such perfection is flawed. I would like to provide some suggestions. I hope the author can see that first of all, the sweetness is too high, the stamina is not enough, and it is difficult to savor it. It is like taking a sip of sugar and getting tired of it easily. Secondly, the plot of the story is still naive and is used for the shining point of the characters. The shaping of the film is not enough. The author probably has not had much exposure to the light novel genre before. Although his talent is very strong, he cannot bring it into full play... If there is a chance to debut, I hope the author can work hard on these aspects. In this case, the next The road will go smoothly, otherwise it will be easy to fall from the mountain top to the cliff. Of course, this is just my family's opinion, and the author does not need to refer to it. 』

Although Hikigaya Hachiman did a good job for himself in the end, the power of this critical review is still real. He suppressed it first and then raised it, and pointed out two very big shortcomings.

Such sincere words cannot be exchanged for treating him differently, especially for Kasumigaoka Shiyu.

Of course she was very proud at this time and believed in her own abilities even more, and now her ranking in the Newcomer Award has become the basis for her confidence.

So after reading this piece of advice, Kasumigaoka Shiyu immediately felt that her hard work had been wasted.

"You actually said that what I wrote was too naive? Too sweet?"

She couldn't understand that the stories in fantasy could come as they wanted. All of this was the author's own will.

If a love story is not sweet and innocent, can it still be a love story?

The emotional and rational thinking of both parties are colliding, but it is difficult to change people's will when they are preconceived.

However, although Kasumigaoka Shiyu disagreed, he still remained polite in his reply.

"Thanks to this teacher for his suggestions. I have seen it, but creations are diverse and everyone should have their own ideas. 』

From the comments below, she already knew that this was a light novelist who had already debuted and sold well. This did not mean that the other person's views were necessarily correct or suitable for her.

Being denied by someone for the first time in her life made her emotional. After the emotion passed, she understood rationally that the other person's intention in providing her with advice was indeed a good one.

When a popular writer gives advice to an unknown creator, it also means he is optimistic about the author's approval. Otherwise, he will simply exit the page.

Out of curiosity, she searched for the other party's information.

"The moonlight is so beautiful. Your debut work "Summer Returns" is now a popular author with sales of nearly one million copies?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu murmured.

She didn't know what the level of this achievement was in the industry, but thinking about it, this number was not a small number.

Close the browsing page.

"At least he's right about one thing. I should know more about light novels."

After Kasumigaoka Shiyu thought about it carefully, he became thoughtful.

Regarding light novels, she actually refers to the works submitted for the Newcomer Award that are the same as hers. The value of such a model is indeed not high enough.

It is indeed a very arrogant idea to think that you can see the whole light novel in this way.

So, she decided to start to truly understand light novels from "Summer Returns".

…

Hikigaya Hachiman also saw Kasumigaoka Shiu's reply later, and he could feel the other party's firm belief and pride from his words.

He could understand this, after all, their lives were different.

As for whether the other party can hear his suggestions, he doesn't really care, not to mention that what he says may not necessarily be suitable for the other party.

In his eyes, wanting to do something is a process of self-satisfaction in itself. You do it just for the sake of enlightenment, and the specific results are not important.

…

the next day.

Kasumigaoka Shiu bought a total of six volumes of the light novel "Summer Returns", which cost a lot.

"This is my first time buying a light novel. I hope it won't disappoint anyone."

She started reading with the intention of appreciating it.

After a while, she finished reading the first volume.

"Is this a work with an average sales volume of more than 100,000? It's a bit unexpected. It is indeed much better than those who won the Newcomer Award, but that's it."

Although Kasumigaoka Shiyu was a little surprised and saw some bright spots, it did not exceed her imagination.

If that was the case, she believed that as long as she could maintain the level of "Love Metronome", she could achieve it.

Even so, at least the quality of the work had not disappointed her, and the money spent was not in vain, so she continued to read on.

Soon, Kasumigaoka Shiyu discovered something, and the look and feel of the work improved.

This shows that the author has made progress, which is not surprising.

Then Volume 3, Volume 4...until I finish Volume 6.

Incredible.

During this time, when she looked back, she realized that she was not distracted at all. Apart from eating, she was almost immersed in the story and had no intention of preparing a critical review at the beginning.

"This story is very good, and the author is even better...Teacher Moonlight?"

Kasumigaoka Shiyu opened his eyes with deep eyes.

Although she does not have the divine eye skills of Yamada Fairy, she can still see certain things from the works.

She admitted that she was somewhat impressed by the teacher whose pen name was "Moonlight is So Beautiful" and had a more concrete understanding of it.

But that doesn't mean she has changed her mind.

I just feel that if I can chat with such a person, I might gain something very special.

62 Recommended messages

Summer vacation is coming to an end.

At this time, Hikigaya Hachiman suddenly received another call from the editor.

"Teacher Moonlight, do you want to write a recommendation message for "Silver Season"?"

The so-called recommendation messages are the first means for seniors in the industry to support their juniors. Promotional pictures will contain book reviews by popular writers, using the reputation of popular writers to call on readers to support them. To a certain extent, it is equivalent to the Internet era. PY, just not that cheap.

Because this is actually risky. If you promote the work blindly, it may lead to negative reviews.

But if you recommend "Silver Season", then there will be no such worries. The quality of the work is definitely worthy of recognition.

What made him sigh was that now he was qualified to do such a thing.

"sure."

Hikigaya Hachiman agreed immediately.

Not to mention his current acquaintance with Nayuta, even if he didn't know him, he wouldn't refuse after seeing that kind of work.

"Then, send it to me when you think about it."

Machida Enko immediately cut off the call.

Not long after, he received another message.

Kanayuta: Thank you, senior! If this continues, I will never be able to repay the debt I owe to my seniors for the rest of my life! Senior, if you have any requests, please tell me!

Me: There’s no need to be so serious about it, don’t take it too seriously, I’m just doing what I want to do.

Kanayuta: Really, senior, you will only make me more embarrassed by saying this!

Me: I understand. If I need anything, I will come to you.

Knowing that the girl was very stubborn on this topic, he had no choice but to agree to avoid further awkwardness.

Kanayuta: Yeah! As long as I am for my seniors, I will give everything!

"Why."

Hikigaya Hachiman sighed, feeling a little headache, and rubbed his temples.

If the girl gives it to her for free, what should he do?

Helping for the sake of strategy is really not his original intention!

Just one week after the school started, the announcement of "Silver Season" began. There were a lot of resources. As a newcomer, only the original Qianju Village Zheng could reach this unprecedented level of recommendation.

Of course, no matter how strong the propaganda is, potential readers will not be able to identify with it before seeing the actual content.

What really caught their attention was the recommendation message above. In the corner of the promotional picture was his painted back, with the name "The moonlight is so beautiful".

"Under the lonely moonlight, wandering travelers, you and I are all the same, like mayflies in the world... After reading it, I realized what the most desperate feeling in the world is, the pain of loneliness, the beauty of hope, you want to be with me Feel it together? 』

"It's so embarrassing, Onii-chan! What on earth are you talking about!"

When Komachi went home, he saw this brochure posted at the station. When he came back, he found his brother to complain about it.

"Komachi, you are still too young. After all, you have not really entered the otaku culture circle, so you don't understand that this taste is just right! If you talk too seriously, there will be no topic, young Readers like this feeling.”

Hikigaya Hachiman crossed his arms, closed his eyes, and said with a slight smile on his face.

"I really don't understand. I wonder if Onii-chan is trying to fool me."

Komachi looked suspicious.

"Uh, half and half."

He suddenly opened his eyes and moved his eyebrows.

"So it's just to fool Komachi!"

My sister's mouth dropped.

It's the weekend again.

Today is Ms. Yamada’s cooking instruction class.

Compared with the loopholes in the first teaching, Hikigaya Hachiman is now very comfortable using a kitchen knife. He can easily and quickly cut potatoes into shreds using the strength of his wrist.

After all, this was obtained in exchange for dozens of band-aids at equal value!

In addition, he has also learned many kinds of cooking, which allows him to have the same three meals a day for a week, and he thinks the taste is to his liking.

At this point, the cooking tutorial is almost over.

After the instruction, he talked about it.

"It should be over a long time ago! It actually took me so long to learn it. If I had known better, I wouldn't have agreed to teach you, you idiot, and I wasted countless hours of gaming time."

Yamada Fairy sat up straight, crossed his arms, and hummed.

"At most one day a week, not even classes, of course it won't be that fast. Besides, Ms. Yamada, you are also playing games when you are coaching me, so there is no waste at all, okay?"

Hikigaya Hachiman argued vigorously.

"Anyway, thank you very much, Miss!"

She didn't care.

"Of course, I must thank you for your help, Ms. Yamada. Just think of it as a favor that I owe you."

Hikigaya Hachiman said with a serious expression.