I, Hikigaya, am just a light novelist

"Who is better? Stop arguing and let someone judge for themselves."

Gokou Ruri, who had been watching from the sidelines, suddenly spoke up with an elusive tone.

Hikigaya Hachiman frowned.

As expected, he still couldn't stay out of it... and he shouldn't stay out of it.

"Senior."

"Hachiman."

Kari Nayuta, Senjumura Masaru and Yamada Fairy all looked at him.

Gokou Ruri also tilted her head slightly and looked at him with the corner of her eyes.

"Sorry, I can't get an answer now."

Facing their expectant eyes, Hikigaya Hachiman finally said something that disappointed them.

Perhaps there is another possibility, that is, he doesn't want to get a result at all.

Everyone had different expressions.

Although this answer was not the answer they wanted, it was barely acceptable.

Because this answer showed that at least they were actually on the track, not insignificant passers-by.

Hikigaya Hachiman also noticed the changes in everyone's expressions, and couldn't help feeling a little guilty, and quickly looked away.

Although he has determined this path, it is still difficult to face it with a clear conscience.

After all, this does not seem to be an equal trust.

When can he swear to make everyone happy like KEY did?

It is indeed not an easy thing to start a harem.

…

Occasionally taking a sunbath, or soaking in the open-air bath to rest, in such a pleasant and busy rhythm, time has passed in a blink of an eye for nine days.

On the tenth day, which is the last day, everyone's works of faith have been completed, and now it is time to taste them.

In the living room, Hikigaya Hachiman and Gokou Ruri each sat on a separate sofa chair, and the other three sat on the sofa. This distribution is to avoid discordant disputes.

"I'll go first." Gokou Ruri spoke first and put several copies of the novels she printed on the table.

Everyone took a copy to read.

At this point, her breathing suddenly became disordered.

Among them, the most vulnerable self should be the most eager and concerned about this evaluation.

"Let's start with me and proceed in order."

After everyone finished reading, Yamada Fairy began to lead the meeting.

"First of all, I think your writing is still so mediocre and lacks spirituality, such as these points... But your foundation is still OK, barely an advantage."

Miss Fairy began her sharp review first.

This was not a nitpicking attitude, but simply speaking the truth.

So this time, Gokou Ruri chose to accept it humbly.

Then, the problems seen by Senjumura Masaru and Kani Nayuta were similar, but the suggestions given were different, which made her feel very beneficial.

Hikigaya Hachiman's eyes condensed.

The two novel masters before him had basically explained the problem, so he needed to look at the problem from a different angle.

So he thought about it and said: "I think it's time for you to change your mindset, Ruri."

Hmm? Why do you say that... My mindset is pretty good. "

Gokou Ruri was puzzled.

Although she was a mediocre light novel writer, at least she was not cut off, and the royalties she received were considerable for someone from an ordinary family like her.

"I'm not talking about this... I mean that you are now bound by the 'framework'. The real reason is that your mentality has not changed, just like when you first debuted, which also caused your 'evolution' to be very slow. "

He used his own perspective to analyze and draw conclusions.

As the saying goes, writers of our generation need to be confident. If you are not confident enough, you will not even be satisfied with the articles you write, so how can you satisfy others?

Of course, this is just an idealistic statement. In fact, no matter how confident you are in writing, it is impossible for everyone to agree with your articles.

However, this statement is indeed useful. The current Gokou Ruri does lack this mentality.

125 Hikigaya is testing

Hikigaya Hachiman can see Ruri's lack in this aspect, mainly because the two are familiar with each other.

In addition, his start was not as smooth as the others. In the process of building confidence, he also experienced certain psychological changes, so he can better grasp the influence of mentality.

"Are you saying that I lack confidence? "

Gokou Ruri's eyes changed as she pondered over this.

She did lack confidence, because she was originally a person who could not even pass the final review of the Rookie Award, and she was able to stand on such a stage entirely with the help of Hachiman.

Looking at the people in front of her, no matter who they were, their sales were far stronger than hers, so how could she have confidence?

But she also figured it out, true confidence comes from the heart, not from comparison.

"Hachiman, I understand what you mean, thank you."

She thanked him with a light in her eyes.

"I hope you can become stronger."

Hikigaya Hachiman sent his blessing.

He also watched Ruri grow up all the way, and he would feel a little relieved to see her become successful.

"It's my turn next, I will shock you!"

Yamada Fairy confidently raised the printed novel in his hand.

Hikigaya Hachiman and others began to read.

The content of the story is not complicated, and is even surprisingly simple. It can be said that it has consistently continued the style of Miss Goblin, pulling out the harems in "The Dark Goblin of Fire" one by one, and bringing them into reality, such as fireworks displays. Such confession events create a harmonious and beautiful harem atmosphere.

"It's really boring, too childish, and all the female characters have empty minds and no ideas of their own."

"There are so many girls together. The subject matter alone makes people uncomfortable. It turns out that you are doing this kind of style. It's really unexpected."

"Miss Yamada's style is still the same as before. She is as flattering to your readers as ever. She actually imagined such a future. Those who didn't know it thought it was created by some disgusting fat nerd."

The three girls gave their own evaluations based on this, and their attitudes were not very friendly.

Just when Miss Goblin looked embarrassed and wanted to fight back, she heard him continue.

"Really, don't you all like it? I think it's good. A future where everyone can be happy and a simple life is enough... But maybe this is the difference between different perspectives?"

Hikigaya Hachiman then added an explanation, trying to keep his expression normal.

This is a temptation!

"Is this what senior thinks?"

But Nayuta frowned.

"I see. Is this why all the demihuman books are sold?"

Qianshou Village Zheng is thoughtful.

"Make everyone happy, oh, you are so philanthropic."

Wu Geng Liuli's smile was a little playful.

If there was only one person who was surprised, it was Miss Goblin.

This sentence is undoubtedly a recognition of her.

"Hmph, Hachiman, you still have a good eye."

Touching his cheek with his fingers, the Yamada fairy laughed proudly several times, then turned to look at the others.

"You guys really don't understand. Since it is a fantasy world, there must be things that reality cannot ask for. Such a happy ending is what readers want!"

In this regard, the other three people were too lazy to express their opinions, lest Miss Goblin become even more proud.

Then came the highlight.

Next comes the area of ​​real quality.

Kanayuta took out the story he had written with his seniors.

Through her own pen and ink, reality plus a part of fantasy allow her to describe the past, present and future of her predecessors.

After reading it, everyone was silent.

Despair, hope, longing, frustration, outlook, step-by-step emotions, ups and downs, and the various changes in life can't help but fascinate people.

But compared to the quality of the work, what everyone is more concerned about is...

"Is this the story of Teacher Ke'er and Hachiman? Are there so many?"

Wu Geng Liuli asked in surprise.

"This must be all made up."

Qian Shou Cun Zheng gritted his teeth and said.

"How can it be that Xiu Xiu is even more explicit than what I wrote?"

Yamada Fairy muttered to himself unwillingly.

"Nayuta."

Hikigaya Hachiman's voice dropped.

"Here, senior!"

But Nayuta suddenly sat upright.

"You add too much fuel and jealousy. Although I do care about your condition, when did I greet you in the middle of the night, tell dirty jokes, and even..."

He paused here.

"Let me help senior vent his anger."

But Nayuta gave a very untimely and kind reminder.

"Ah, I'm sorry, senior, Nayuta has imagined such a scene, and added it by the way. This can also enrich the character creation..."

Hearing this explanation, his face turned darker.

"Taking off steam? What a shameless slut."

Qian Shou Cun Zheng lowered his forehead and scolded.

"Your face is red, Miss Qianju, can you imagine it?"

But Nayuta turned his head and whispered in her ear.

"ah!"

Qianju Cunzheng immediately became uncontrollable with his hands and feet, and his face turned red.

"Ahem, that's almost it. Let's make a good evaluation first."

Hikigaya Hachiman coughed twice and changed the subject.

Regarding the quality of this novel, everyone undoubtedly gave the highest praise. It can be said that there is no way to criticize it. However, from the ideological level, Mr. Crab has been criticized a lot.

Next it was the turn of Qianju Village to conquer.

There is nothing new in the plot, and it is even a bit simple. The male and female protagonists in it are completely in contrast to her and Hachiman's current situation in terms of identity, and then tells the story of the two confessing their love for each other.

Obviously she is not as good as Mr. Crab in this aspect of writing, but her feelings are more pure and beautiful, completely a fantasy of adolescence. If compared, it is similar to Kasumi Shiko's first version of "Metronome of Love".