I take the earth to wander
Final words
I have been putting off finishing this review for many days, and I really don’t know what to say.
This is my final reflection, but if I think about it carefully, there seems to be nothing much to say.
To be honest, there were a lot of regrets in the writing process of this book.
Although this was the original ending, a lot of content was omitted in the middle.
I originally planned to write two million words, but ended up omitting a lot in the middle.
Many details are not explained clearly. This is a problem with my settings.
The protagonist was set too strong from the beginning, even ridiculously strong, which resulted in many plots being difficult to unfold at all.
But there is no other way. I just want to write a book like this, where human beings are awesome and awesome. That’s what I want to write.
Why do so many science fiction works show humans as abused characters? Can't humans abuse others? I know it may not be realistic in reality. After all, humans have not completely left the earth and still want to torture aliens. But this is my book, and this is how I want to write it. Even if I can’t do it, can’t I think about it?
And humans are so awesome, how can a human protagonist be weak?
This leads to many problems.
For example, the most important thing is the collapse of combat power.
No, it cannot be said that the combat power has collapsed.
The combat power of this book is unbalanced.
Seriously unbalanced from start to finish.
It’s no longer considered crushing, it’s basically like a steamroller crushing ants, and a cannon hitting mosquitoes throughout the article. Many times I don’t know how to write.
The protagonist is really so strong that everything can be easily solved without any conflicts, and the writing is like a running account.
But I will have experience in the next book.
In short, the next book will still be about human beings. In the dormant warehouse where Lin Xu disappeared with him, another dormant human being was thrown into a certain universe, and the outrageous story happened.
To be honest, although this book has all kinds of problems, I had a great time writing it. I haven’t written enough yet, so I will continue with the next book.
I will continue to write stories about human beings being super awesome.
But I have to think of a way to avoid making the protagonist ridiculously strong this time. It can be invincible, but it can't be too outrageous. It's so outrageous that I don't know how to develop the plot.
No matter what your enemy is, the protagonist will destroy it with just one breath.
If you can't do anything, you must control it.
But it’s still a headache to not lose the human character.
Well, there are two key points in the next book.
The first is to control the balance of power.
Second, we must not lose our human composure.
Finally, add a third item to strengthen the detailed description.
Okay, let’s think about it after the New Year. I’ll take a good rest first.
See you in the next book, if you are still willing to read my kind of humanist fantasy story.
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