I Teach Kendo in Tokyo
: Concluding remarks
The last time I finished writing a testimonial, it seemed like it was the last time.
Okay, let's not play tricks, I'll be honest, it seems that I'm still in "My World War II Can't Be This Cute".
In fact, when I was typing, I was already thinking about how to finish my testimonials. Once I stopped typing, I immediately fantasized about how to write my testimonials, which almost delayed the business and hindered the conclusion.
However, in the end I decided not to use what I had fantasized about writing so many times.
I'm going to tell you a little bit about how I originally planned to finish this book.
This book has an outline. When I was doing the outline, I decided to give Kazuma a "two riders" who are both enemies and friends, that is, the second male in Kamen Rider.
In addition to being in charge of being deflated, the second male also has a fierce conflict with the protagonist at a critical time.
My thought at the time was that the final book would be sublimated in the fierce conflict between the male lead Kazuma and the male second.
In other words, before making the outline, I decided that the book should end with Kazuma playing the second male lead who is also a teacher and a friend.
Therefore, I have also solemnly created a male No. 2, that is, Kinma Kenichi, who appeared in the third volume.
But I am an inspirational writer, which means that I have a lot of randomness in my play, so the story of the third volume is actually relatively broken, resulting in Kinma Jianyi, who did not stand up.
The third volume was able to be rescued in the end, entirely because the inspiration broke out in the last ten chapters, and the god-like performance was forcibly rescued.
What old man, going along the railroad tracks to the ends of the earth, there was none before. It's all because of a sudden flash of inspiration in my head, and I wrote it.
Then it was rescued.
So the third volume has more than 100 chapters, and the last dozen or so you don't think you read the same volume.
Although the third volume was rescued, I had doubts about the possibility of Kinma Jianichi acting as the second male lead.
At this moment, A Mao appeared.
A Mao is the product of a flash of inspiration, and there is no such person.
But the inspiration threw him on me, and after shaping him, I knew I had a candidate for the final battle with (Kazuma).
What I thought at the time was that after killing Feng Guo, Ah Mao came over with the evidence he found and showed the evidence: "Look, I could have punished him by normal means!"
Then, because of the disagreement between the two sides, there was a fierce conflict of ideas, and then a knife was drawn and slashed.
In order for this conflict to have enough drama, I should continue to portray Ah Mao.
In fact, this is what I originally intended to do with this book after 3 million words.
Yes, this book was originally intended to be 6 million words. I should also write about how Ah Mao suffered setbacks, how he persevered, how to get his beloved knife, and how to strengthen his beliefs.
But I got tired of writing, and the inspiration left me. It caused me to fall into a state of severe depression. Don't think it was me pretending. I really had no fun doing anything at the time. I knew this was depression. I am a national second-level social worker, and I understand.
So the original plan for the six million-word story ended with only three million words.
In this way, there is a problem, Ah Mao's shaping is insufficient.
It can be seen from the first few chapters that everyone hates Ah Mao, and some people even think that the approach of Kazuma is right.
However this is not right. I didn't write this book to tell you that. What I want to say is that if justice can be done according to the method of procedural justice, then this world will be a beautiful world.
I want to say that if you commit a crime, you will be punished.
But what this chapter says, the reader's suggestion, is the exact opposite, and the reader is led astray.
Just because of the insufficient shaping of Ah Mao, the reader only sees how difficult it is to execute justice according to the method of procedural justice.
If you can write 6 million words, the ending should be when both sides stand on the force field of their supporters and spray each other.
Too bad I can't write more than six million words, and I'll never write anything more than two million words.
But this is the ending set by my outline.
Until the last time I gave a testimonial, I said that I had to fight a hidden boss for the testimonial that was charged.
In fact, when I started writing chapter 225 tonight, I planned to let them draw knives and cut each other.
I even brought a knife.
Just as I was coding, the once-lost inspiration came back and he came.
I had a brainstorm and found the solution for this now.
And according to my plan, the theme is sublimated.
I always thought that inspiration would never come to this book again.
All in all, this ending is much better than the outline ending. It still expresses the same thing after it has been cut in half.
It's great to finally end like this~www.readwn.com~.
Inspiration sir, you are a real lifesaver.
The conclusion of the testimonial is to recommend a new book to attract the flow of the new book.
I thought about a lot of ways to induce traffic, but in the end I decided that none of them should be used.
Let me tell you, chapter 037 to chapter 055 of the new book is the first time I found the inspirational part in the new book.
You start from 037 and read the nineteen chapters completely.
In fact, I don't need to read it before, it doesn't matter much, because I was desperately piling up materials in order to find inspiration, so I wrote very slowly, the rhythm was slow, and I didn't talk about anything and it was tiring to watch.
Just start reading from 037, and it is also from this chapter that the new book has an official golden finger. When you see 055, you can't help but not continue to read, count me as a loser, you can collect the new book and wait for the next book in June. Announcement is fine.
PS: The victory of Mikako actually has a foreshadowing in his character design at the end, and you can understand it at a glance if you are familiar with the history of the Warring States Period.
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