In the studio, several judges saw Yu Hang's opening paragraph. They had expected this.
"Creating characters is Yu Hang's specialty!"
Wang Shuo smiled and said.
"This feels a bit like writing an autobiography~" Hai Yan said while thinking.
"Yu Hang's style is to establish the character image first, and then start to promote the plot!"Lan Xiaolong said with a smile
《The Youth Entrepreneurship Competition is now in its fifth round.
Perhaps.
They don’t know the other contestants very well.
But they seem to be too familiar with Yu Hang’s writing style.
First determine the main characters, and then shape the characters.
Finally, advance the plot from the perspective of the characters!
This creative method is really good.
But... once the image of your character cannot stand up, or the audience cannot resonate, it is basically a failure.
However.
This is Yu Hang’s forte.
So the judges are naturally not worried....
【Xiao Ma Ge is a simple-minded person.】
【He doesn't even have any big ideals or ambitions.】
【He just wanted to stay by Brother Hao's side, and do whatever Brother Hao did. 】
Now, as the second in command of an international counterfeit money group, Xiao Ma Ge is in a very proud situation.
On the streets of Hong Kong.
Xiao Ma Ge, wearing sunglasses and a windbreaker, stood in the middle of the road in a cool manner. The wide road and the cars were speeding away.
15 Eating at a roadside snack stand, helping the stall owner escape from the police.
A black car stopped next to Xiao Ma Ge.
In the car, the driver was his younger brother Tan Cheng, and in the back seat sat his good brother, Brother Hao! After getting in the car, Brother Hao smiled and asked,"Is it delicious?"
Xiao Ma Ge smiled and wiped Brother Hao's mouth with oil.
The car drove away......
"Haha, little brother Ma is so cute!"
"Brother Xiao Ma and Brother Hao are truly good brothers who are willing to go through thick and thin together!"
"It can be seen that the relationship between these two brothers is very good!"
"Wearing a windbreaker and sunglasses, it seems really cool!"
"Xiao Ma Ge is so cool!"
The comments were overwhelming......
The scene in the studio.
Liu Heping's eyes lit up when he saw Yu Hang's description of the scene where Xiao Ma Ge appeared.
"Contestant Yu Hang’s description of Xiao Ma Ge’s appearance was very good, it can be said to be textbook level!"
"You can imagine this scene in your mind: a tall man wearing a windbreaker and sunglasses, looking very handsome. While eating at a roadside stall, he did not forget to help the stall owner push his cart to escape from the police. This fully demonstrates Xiao Ma Ge's righteousness, even to small vendors!"
"Then when getting in the car, Brother Xiao Ma wiped Brother Hao's mouth with oil, which directly revealed the close relationship between the two!"
"Just the opening, just one action, has pointed out so many characters and background content. Xiao Ma Ge's appearance is definitely a textbook for character appearances!"
Listening to Liu Heping's explanation,
Wang Shuo, Hai Yan and Lan Xiaolong beside him nodded involuntarily.
And the audience in the live broadcast room.
They imagined this scene in their minds.
A man in a windbreaker and sunglasses walking on the street... hiss...
I immediately got a sense of the picture.
"Wow, it’s worthy of being Teacher Liu Heping. When he said that, I have a picture in my mind!"
"Little Ma is still cute~"
"I think the character of Xiao Ma Ge will be very charming. Just imagine, a bohemian man with a slightly playful attribute, wearing a windbreaker, sunglasses, and being extremely cool. Such a man, damn, so cool!!!"
"It’s amazing! I fell in love with Xiao Ma brother instantly!"
"Let’s look back at the picture of Brother Xiao Ma that Yu Hang just drew. It’s really cool!"
"I am now looking forward to Xiao Ma Ge's plot even more!" comments were flooding the screen......
Because Yu Hang explained the background of the characters in"A Better Tomorrow" in advance.
So.
The audience naturally knows what Xiao Ma Ge and Song Zihao do.
The leader and second in command of an international counterfeit banknote group!
Counterfeit banknote factory.
Brother Hao went in to get the money.
Xiao Ma Ge was chatting up the beautiful receptionist outside, but unfortunately, his playboy appearance had long been discovered.
This time, Xiao Ma Ge and Brother Hao still carried counterfeit banknotes to trade with foreigners.
It's just that they have one more little brother.
Tan Cheng.
Before getting off the car, Xiao Ma Ge saw that his little brother kept coughing, so he gave him all the money on him and asked him to see a doctor.
Uncle Yao, the behind-the-scenes boss of the company, summarized the personalities of Brother Hao and Xiao Ma Ge quite well.
"Ah Hao is a steady person. No matter what he does, he makes people feel at ease!"
""Xiao Ma, don't look at him as careless, but he is very loyal!"
Therefore, it is Brother Hao who is in charge of the transaction!
Because he is steady and can speak foreign languages!
As for Xiao Ma, he is naughty by nature and looks careless all day long.
When he was bored, Xiao Ma also made up his English in front of these foreigners, but Xiao Ma has been struggling in the society since he was a child, so he has no culture, so his English confused the foreigners.
I thought, what country's language is this guy speaking?......
"Ha ha ha ha!"
"Brother Xiao Ma is also a social leader!"
"My brother Ma actually failed in his attempt to chat up a beautiful girl?"
"Foreigners: This guy has been talking for a long time, but I didn’t understand a single word!"
The comments were overwhelming......
On the scene in the studio.
Hai Yan said:"The content of this plot can be said to have enriched the image of Xiao Ma Ge. For example, Xiao Ma Ge has a low level of education, and he was rejected when he tried to chat up a beautiful woman, and he gave money to his younger brother Tan Cheng for medical treatment. It shows a funny, straightforward, and righteous Xiao Ma Ge, especially the words of Uncle Yao in the company, although Xiao Ma is careless, he is very loyal!"
"From this sentence, we can see that Xiao Ma and Hao are definitely good brothers who are willing to go through fire and water for each other!"
Hearing this, several other judges nodded in approval!......
This business deal was very successful.
After all, they were all old acquaintances.
Back at the company,
Uncle Yao simply praised Song Zihao for his ability.
And then,
Uncle Yao's words were almost all key.
He reminded Brother Hao that today was the day Song Zijie graduated from the police academy.
At the same time, he explained the subsequent plot. He asked Brother Hao to go to Wanwan the day after tomorrow and take Ah Cheng with him, under the pretext of letting Brother Hao take care of the newcomer.
Then,
Yu Hang stood up again, came to the bottom of the previously drawn character image of Song Zihao, and wrote this sentence:
【Song Zihao is a calm and composed person, and he has the potential to be a big brother!】
【But his shortcoming is that he trusts others too easily, and he is the most loyal!】......
When the audience saw the shortcomings of Song Zihao written by Yu Hang, they were all stunned.
"ah?"
"Is being loyal a disadvantage?"
"When you are out in society, being too loyal is indeed a disadvantage, as you can easily be exploited by the 073 people!"
"Haoge's two shortcomings...Isn’t this an advantage?"
"It turns out that being too righteous is not good in the underworld!" comments flooded the screen.....
At the same time,
Yu Hang also wrote down Song Zijie's personality traits under his character image.
【He is a young boy who stumbles around, wandering between ideals and reality, and full of self-contradictions! 】
The character of Song Zijie.
Sometimes he is annoying to watch, but many times, his actions highlight the heroism of Xiao Ma Ge and Song Zihao.
Then.
Yu Hang returned to the computer desk again and continued to create
【Song Zijie, a student who is about to graduate from the police academy!】
【He never knew what his brother did for a living, he only knew that his brother would come to see him every once in a while. Song Zijie had asked his father and brother, but their answers were the same: a businessman. His brother said he was doing business in another place, but Song Zijie felt that his brother's identity was not as simple as a businessman. However, he did not ask too many questions, after all, he was his biological brother!】
【Song Zijie has admired his brother since he was a child. Because their family was in financial difficulty and his father was sick and hospitalized, Song Zihao, who was not yet an adult, shouldered a heavy burden. He not only had to take care of his sick father, but also had to pay for his younger brother's education.】
【Therefore, in Song Zijie's mind, his brother is the real hero!】......
Studio scene.
Seeing Yu Hang's description of this plot.
Lan Xiaolong couldn't help but say:"Song Zijie regards his brother Song Zihao as a hero in his mind, but he doesn't know that the brother he admires is exactly the kind of person he hates the most. If he knew Song Zihao's true identity, I guess his belief would collapse completely!"
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