I'm in a comprehensive comic, but I got the Fenghou Qimen?

Reaching out and rubbing his temples with a headache, Wang also looked at Mumuza Yihui, what and what is this, not only are the spicy eyes not said, but the things inside are messy, and I can't understand it at all!

I can't understand and spicy eyes, can do this level, except for Mumuza Yihui, it is estimated that few people can achieve it, this novel manuscript, compared to the previous manuscript taken out by Mumuza Yoshiki, there is no progress, on the contrary, it is worse...

"Alas~"

With a light sigh, Wang Ye directly put down the novel manuscript in his hand and began to fiddle with his shogi, although this was shocking, but maybe Muzuo really did not have the talent to write light novels.

Therefore, Wang also decided that he should study shogi with peace of mind, and after a while Yukino and others finished reading, he would give a suitable answer, and then Wang would not have to do anything, and Yihui would naturally recede!

Seeing that Wang Ye actually looked at it for a while, he directly rubbed his forehead, threw the manuscript in his hand directly aside, turned his head and went to study shogi, and Mumuza Yihui couldn't help but lower his head a little disappointed.

Although he has information about his own works, Masakiza Yoshiki has grown up and can bravely accept the fact that his novels are badly written, and looking at Wang Ye's reaction, this must be an unqualified light novel in Wang Ye's eyes.

It's just that I don't know, in the eyes of Yukino and others, to what extent can his works be achieved, and will they be relatively stronger?

"Whew~inhal~!"

Taking a deep breath, Yoshi Kikizo slowly closed his eyes, waiting for Yukino and others to finish reading and carefully accepting the lesson in order to better complete his work!

Accept mistakes in order to change them!

Yoshiki Kiki is mentally prepared, at least not like the last time!

Time passed slowly like this, and gradually more people regretted putting down the manuscript in their hands, they couldn't read it, they really couldn't stand it, even the most serious and responsible Yukinoshita Yukina, finally chose to give up.

Last time, Yukinoshita Yukino watched it in the middle of the night before reading Kikiza's manuscript and sorting out the problems, this time Yukino Yukinoshita didn't have so much time, and he didn't want to force himself to read it anymore.

That time I also crossed the cat light novel, and this time I can't read the two books crossed in front of Yoshiki Kiza, right? It's better to give up directly, at least the damage caused by giving up directly to Mumuza Yihui is not so great!

"It seems that everyone has done their best to see the manuscript of Yoshiki Muza, I was the first to put down the manuscript, so let me make a start."

Wang Ye, who noticed that Yukinoshita Yukino had also given up, sighed lightly, put down the chess piece that had just been raised in his hand, and turned his head to look at Kiki-za Yoshiki, which also attracted the attention of Kiki-za Yoshiki.

This time, Wang is also ready to stay out of the matter, more or less participate in the activities of the Ministry of Service, otherwise, what is the point of staying in this community?

"Goo~"

Subconsciously swallowed saliva, Mumuza Yihui looked at Wang Ye nervously, Wang was also the first to put down the manuscript, and now he is also the first to speak, it seems that Wang Ye is now about the light novel he wrote, some words are not spit out unhappy ah!

"First of all, nothing else, let's talk about this thing called Go, even if you write only one of them alone, shogi or Go, or the protagonist has talent in both chess, but you fuse the two, and the fusion is nothing.

You know neither shogi nor Go, just so you dare to fuse the two, I admire your courage, it can be said that in my opinion, the biggest failure in your light novel is here, as for the problems in other places, leave it to others, I will point this out separately. Leave the rest to them. "

Go, Wang doesn't understand very well and recently had that idea to study, but at least he understands shogi, and the Go written by Yihui Muzuo is too inferior to be seen.

If it is Go alone, shogi, these can be, even if Mumuza Yihui does not understand nothing, Wang can even help guide the rules of shogi, but the combination of the two Go chess, Go king does not understand, but the essence of shogi is completely picked out by Muzuza.

For people who know shogi, this novel is too ugly, and there are some other grammar, wording, and other problems, Wang is too lazy to say, just leave it to others.

"Eh... Sorry, I didn't measure myself! "

Hearing this, Mumu Za Yihui lowered his head in shame, playing shogi related in front of the Dragon King, and the face of the transformation was completely unrecognizable, no wonder the king also saw half of it and directly didn't look at it.

In the view of Mumuza Yihui, it must be his own transformation, which made Wang Yelong King very angry. If something goes wrong, then you have to admit it, and Yihui directly admitted his mistake frankly, and directly apologized to Wang Ye!

Next time, he won't be doing it!

"What I want to say the most was said by Wang Ye first, then I will talk about grammar, at least where I have seen, grammar has a big problem, and there are many words of unclear meaning, completely incomprehensible: I know the three souls and seven spirits, but what does 'four charms and nine rays' mean? Shrewy? "

Mumuza Yoshiki apologized so calmly, which made Wang Ye's face a lot better, and also made other people's moods a little better, at least Mumuza Yoshiki's attitude was good, so the three-color courtyard pansy spoke.

Wang Ye didn't see as much as the Pansy of the Tricolor Courtyard, so I didn't know that this 'Four Enchantments and Nine Rays' looked completely meaningless, and there was not even an explanation, and it was not a protagonist's move, and the Pansy of the Tricolor Garden couldn't understand it at all!

"'Four Enchanted Nine Rays'? I don't have that word in my text? "

Hearing this, Kikiza Yoshiki also felt strange, he couldn't remember when he wrote such words in the manuscript, let alone Pansy, even his own interpretation of this word was confused.

"See for yourself...."

Pansy frowned, and directly handed the manuscript in her hand to Kikiza, who stopped reading after seeing this word.

"Really? Probably because after writing this paragraph, I was too sleepy? "

“...."

PS: The second change that came late!

ps: Recently, I will unconsciously type 'Yukinoshita Yukino and Wang Ye', such a paragraph comes out, the devil knows why I am like this...