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The title of this article is really suspicious. ． ．Therefore, the new writers should be less routine and more sincere. ． ．

With such a feeling of slander, Yoshiko Okano clicked on the novel written by a famous older sister.

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Chapter 31. Dengeki Bunko! (For my God, add more here)

The pen name of this 'Sister-sama' can be seen at a glance that it was taken by a dead house or someone pretending to be a cute girl. Of course, it doesn't matter what the pen name is, and it can be changed in the later stage. Yoshiko Okano values ​​this work more quality.

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Roughly glanced at the outline.

"Oh? The world view is quite grand..." He nodded secretly.

As an editor, you can extract useful information from a simple outline and get a glimpse of the whole picture of a good work.

Maybe I can find a good manuscript this time, although it is still a routine. ． ．

Yoshiko Okano lifted his spirits.

Then focus on the text content.

The first segment selected in the prologue is the segment where the hero and the heroine are united.

However, the first paragraph of the prologue is——

"The main character died!!?"

Wait a minute?Is there a mistake?Isn't it supposed to be a story where the hero crosses over to become a familiar for various reasons, or comes to a certain magic school and is worshiped as a real god?

His eyebrows twitched slightly.

As if feeling that her mood swings were a bit big, Okano Ryoko turned her eyes to the computer screen again.

Such deviant plots as the death of the leading actor. ． ．

His eyes kept sweeping downwards.

Mistress. ． ．Actually died? !

The pain on the body and the sense of despair in the heart are accurately depicted with large-scale descriptions, and then the heroine is introduced. ． ．

In the end, the heroine actually ended up dying.

"However... it will definitely not end here." Okano Yoshiko glanced at the actor's last line——

"...You wait. I will - I will save you!"

I have to say that this beginning is very fluent, and it attracts people to continue to look down.

Obviously, the author used the flashback segment at the beginning, and the next step should be the hero's journey to another world.

Take a deep breath.

"It's actually interesting because of such a somewhat deviant manuscript." Yoshiko Okano shook her head with a smile.

Foreshadowing, tension, male protagonist, the small tricks at the beginning describe the plot of group destruction.

You can completely feel the feeling of breaking away from the immature writing of newcomers.

Skip the prologue, Chapter 1, under the reading of Okano Yoshiko, it is over.

The huge world view has revealed the tip of the iceberg.

Subhuman race, magic, city, dragon kingdom. ． ．

Although it's just a brushstroke, it can't be completely ignored.

"So many things have been introduced in such a short space, and the image of the male protagonist has been portrayed without any sense of disobedience... and it is also connected with the plot of the prologue." Yoshiko Okano couldn't help but sigh .

Either this person used to write something, and this time he changed to a new pen name, or this newcomer's writing skills are already very good, and he is engaged in writing work.

If the prologue is to arouse readers' interest in continuing to read.

Then what Chapter 2 has no sense of disobedience is to stimulate the interest of this part, so that it can completely explode.

The silver-haired girl I met by chance, the thing I was looking for, and how to break the inevitable situation in the end?

No. ． ．Now that the hero is dead, what should he do?

Is it possible to add the plot of crawling out of hell?

There is no doubt that.

These are the bright spots, that is, where the foreshadowing lies.

Taking a deep breath with great interest, I finished Chapter 2, Chapter 3 and even the last chapter, and watched them all.

It took [-] minutes.

For an editor who pays attention to efficiency, this is simply impossible.

Let's put it this way, the editor of Tianchaoqidian's online articles can finish reviewing your 6W-word manuscript in about five to six minutes, and then characterize you.

Editing this line of work is all about efficiency.

So spending [-] minutes on a book is simply impossible for ordinary Ryoko Okano.

"Completely... out of the existence of routines..." Okano Ryoko gasped.

Yes, writing all kinds of plots of the abuser with an incomparably beautiful style of writing does not have the slightest feeling of letting the heroine down.

The huge world view, the beautiful writing style, and countless foreshadowings hang over this different world.

She really appreciates the author's way of doing things.

Neither fall into a rut, nor simply follow the trend.

With clear and beautiful writing style, different plot stories are written.

That's the point of this work.