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"Oh, are you back? How's the progress?" Kasumigaoka Shiyu asked without looking back as she kept looking at the book that was like a novel reader in her hand.
"Thank you for your good words, let me grab two." Bai Fan rolled his eyes, unhappily tore open the package of the hot dog buns in his hand, and put the strawberry juice he bought from the vending machine on the table. .
"He's really a stingy male. Here, I'll show you this as compensation." The senior pushed her black hair back and stretched out her white palm.
The smartphone was clean and purple, and it was not decorated with rhinestones like girls nowadays, and it was placed in front of Bai Fan.
"The final volume of the metronome?" Bai Fan asked after swallowing a mouthful of bread.
"Well. This is the finished draft! There is no doubt about it." Kasumigaoka Shiyu patted her chest confidently.
There is no look of fear at all.
It can be seen that she must be very satisfied with the final draft.
Taking another look at the girl's inexplicably confident expression, Bai Fan scratched open Chapter 1 of the manuscript with the hot dog bun in one hand.
"Where is he...?"
"Is it still smiling? Or is it somewhere else? Where am I... now?"
"It's raining, tick tock...it's falling."
"..."
Read a chapter.
Completely fluent, without the slightest sense of obscurity, clear, but gorgeous and desolate style of writing is revealed, and it can be seen that Kasumigaoka Shiyu's state has recovered.
But you can't make a conclusion with just one chapter, Bai Fan continued to read.
The description of the scenery also renders the atmosphere very well. The girl who has been looking for someone in the rain, even if she can't find it, she is still looking for it.
Even if it is raining to a severe cold, it will also strengthen the sick body. . .
The final hero. . .
"Cough cough cough..." Bai Fan almost choked himself to death with a sip of strawberry juice, "It's really okay if you're sure you're doing this, the hero finally left the heroine behind to chase his dreams, especially when you wrote about such abusive situations earlier. Next, even if you want to abandon the heroine, you can give the hero a better excuse, okay..."
This is simply scum, okay?
"What's the matter? It's respect for that heartless man who chases other women. People like this should be saved by the trolls on the Internet..."
"Hey... Gray's emotions are showing."
"Tsk... I want you to take care of it!!" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu raised the corner of her mouth, and a playful smile rose, "Or, someone saw his own shadow from the male protagonist?"
"Not at all!!!" Bai Fan, who felt that his character was about to be insulted, directly refused.
"Hmph, a male without interest." Kasumigaoka Shiyu hugged the career line on his chest, "So, how does your answer give you in the end?"
"There is no problem at all in the front. Some emotional readers will probably be moved to tears, but the mysterious black hero behind, I think you should change." Bai Fan had to complain.
Xiazhiqiu Shiyu shrugged.
"Let me show you the official version. The black male protagonist just now was just joking."
Scratch a document again.
The beginning is still the same, but it is also explained clearly that the male protagonist later accompanied the seriously ill female protagonist, cooked for her, and went to the observatory to watch the stars after she no longer had a cold. At that time, the male protagonist said Tell the fact that you want to chase your dreams.
Although the heroine didn't say a word, she still supported the hero behind her back.
In the end, no matter how much reluctance to give up, it can only be buried in the heart, and the hero and heroine had to separate beside the river in the setting sun.
"..." Bai Fan.
At the beginning, I really wanted to complain about the official version, but after seeing the end, I didn't feel like complaining at all.
Because this final volume really accurately captures what the readers really want to see.
Although the final outcome is different.
But such a gorgeous and desolate style of writing really makes people have to bless these two people from the bottom of their hearts.
"How is it?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu stretched greatly.
"It's completely possible to publish a booklet." Bai Fan returned the phone to the girl and said firmly.
"I don't know where your self-confidence comes from, but since it sounds nice, I'll take it seriously." The girl took the phone and said half-jokingly.
No no no. . .
What I say is really true.
Bai Fan has not forgotten the sales of the senior sister's "Love Metronome" in "How to Raise a Passerby Heroine".
Published in Fujikawa Fantastic, a total of 50 copies were issued in five volumes.
Although for some veteran authors, this result is not an astonishing number.
However, for a novice author, this is simply unimaginable.
After all, the sales volume of 50 copies will not only bring benefits to a newcomer, but also fame, social effects, and so on. . .
Don't forget that the middle school sister in the original work was also a character who participated in the signing event.
Bai Fan couldn't help but nodded secretly.
"I think I should say that now, as expected of Xia Shizi."
Bai Fan praised sincerely.
"That's natural, so it's ok. Hmph, Kawen has been in two weeks, this time the editor must look good."
Kasumigaoka Shiwa nodded affirmatively.
Indeed, it was hard to be urged by the editor for two weeks for Calvin.
Bai Fan thought silently.
(Cute, please collect! Please recommend! This is for my God, this classmate is added. Let me tell you, you will be R sooner or later if you do this. Thanks to our classmate Xiaoyesi Xiaosaki for issuing two consecutive monthly tickets! Thank you already The tip from Ms. Hideyoshi who changed her name to Wisdom's End Blade! Thank you Kong Sa for the five consecutive tips. Thanks to the elementary school students for the best monthly pass! Thanks to the creampie author Ji Boyen for the tip! hurt again)
Chapter 34. A small burial and a big crisis~(Favorites!)
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