Women only affect the speed of my reasoning!

"It just so happens that I also want to hear the opinions of ordinary people. You can speak freely!"

"Well...then I'll just tell you."

Yukinoshita Yukino breathed out softly.

"Is boring."

"Even reading has become a kind of torture."

"It's just boring beyond my imagination."

These three short sentences made Zaimokuza Yoshiki immediately cover his heart as if he had angina, and he wished he could twist into a maggot on his chair.

This is completely different from what he expected before coming here!

It was promised rave reviews!

"Then...can you tell me what is boring...for reference..."

He was so heartbroken that he couldn't even speak coherently.

Yukinoshita Yukino opened the notes she had compiled all night and began to count them one by one.

"First of all, the grammar is messy. Why do you always use inverted sentences?"

"This, this is..."

"Secondly, there are typos throughout the article. The most obvious one is the use of 'De De Di'. Almost none of it is correct. Didn't you learn it in elementary school?"

"actually……"

"Furthermore, there are too many misuses of superscripts. 'Ability' cannot be interpreted as 'power' at all, right?"

"Do not……"

"Also, where does the 'Nightmare' in the 'Bloody Nightmare Slasher' you label this 'Phantom Red Blade Flash' come from? There are no words related to nightmares or nightmares in the entire name."

"I……"

"Finally, why did the heroine inexplicably start to take off her clothes during the battle? Not only is it unnecessary, it doesn't even match normal people's logic. It feels very forced and disgusting."

After saying that, Yukinoshita Yukino closed the notebook with a snap.

"Not to mention your literary talents, please learn common sense first."

Chapter 25 I have a cold, you

Yukinoshita Yukino's words directly made Zaimokuza Yoshiki fall away... No, this is already a direct reversal.

If there hadn't been a chair underneath for support, he would have been able to prostrate himself on the spot, stretch out his index finger, and sing "Flower of Hope" loudly.

The situation was so tragic that even Hikigaya Hachiman couldn't bear it.

"Even if you want to say it, there's no need to say it so ruthlessly..." The corner of his mouth twitched.

"On the contrary."

Yukinoshita Yukino shook her head slightly.

"I've only talked about a small part of it. There are many more serious issues later than the previous ones, and I haven't talked about these yet."

"But, considering the time issue, I won't elaborate on the rest here. I have put them all in sticky notes. You can take them back and read them yourself later."

As she spoke, she placed the manuscript paper covered with sticky notes on the table and pushed it to the side of the wooden seat.

"Okay, next is Yuigahama-san."

"……Eh?!"

When her name was suddenly called, Yuigahama Yui suddenly came out of her half-dream and stared nervously at the first page of the manuscript paper that was still brand new in her hand.

Well, it's actually brand new. If you look closely, you will find that there are not many signs of turning on the manuscript paper at all, and they are still on the first few pages.

Unlike Yukinoshita Yukino who stayed up all night last night, Yuigahama Yui had a good night's sleep last night and completely forgot about reading the manuscript.

Because it is so boring.

Including when Yukinoshita Yukino made a comment just now, she also tried to improvise, wondering if she could hold back her feelings a little harder.

As a result, those two glances almost made her fall asleep.

"Ah... this, if you want me to say..."

Yuigahama Yui hesitated for a while.

Finally, he choked out a sentence.

"You... know a lot of rare words!"

It turns out that sometimes seemingly well-intentioned compliments can hurt more than harsh truths.

Yuigahama Yui regretted it as soon as she said it.

Because it is so fake that it is not that it cannot withstand scrutiny, but that it does not even need to be scrutinized. It is almost the same as shouting through a loudspeaker to admit that you didn't watch it at all.

At the same time, he saw the huge body of Zaimokuza Yoshiki, who had completely collapsed in the chair, twitching violently as if he had been stabbed, and then quickly returned to a motionless state.

"Okay, okay, I'm done! It's time for Usagi to talk!" Yuigahama Yui hurriedly tried to change the topic.

"Ah, by the way, Zaimokuza already asked me what I thought in gym class just now, so let's do Hikigaya instead." Qin Mianshu said with one hand on his chin.

"Um... Me?"

Hikigaya Hachiman is actually about the same as Yuigahama Yui. He can hardly read a few pages before he can't stand it, let alone write a review of several thousand words as eloquently as Yukinoshita Yukino.

But fortunately, he usually knows a lot about light novels, so it’s okay to express his thoughts on the spot.

And as soon as he heard that his "best friend" was about to express his feelings, Zaimokuza Yoshiki, who had been pretending to hold up his body a second ago, seemed to suddenly regain his yang energy, struggled to raise his head, and stretched out his hand with difficulty.

"Hachi...Hachiman, if it's you...you should be able to understand me!"

"Um……"

Hearing this, Hikigaya Hachiman smiled kindly, but the words coming out of his mouth were so ruthless.

"Tell me, where did you copy it from?"

"NOOOOOOOOO!!!"

It was like being hit as hard as a lightning strike. After Zaimokuza Yoshiki experienced ruthless attacks and compassionate finishing blows, he finally failed to escape this final fatal blow.

Asking a novel author where he copied his work is almost a complete denial of the results of his efforts.

They are even more vicious words than "Why didn't I see your new book on BiXge?"

So Zaimokuza Yoshiki decisively fell into rampage mode.

He rolled down from the chair to the floor like a ball, and then started rolling around on the floor while roaring with his eyes, not caring that the coat on his body was covered in dust.

Two girls, Yukinoshita Yukino and Yuigahama Yui, were startled by him. They reflexively stood up from their seats and took two steps back to avoid being affected.

However, this situation ended not long after it lasted.

As the classroom floor shook violently, Zaimokuza Yoshiki, who was rolling all over the floor, hit the wall on the side of the classroom door headfirst and was forced to stop suddenly.

He turned his head upside down and murmured to himself: "Sure enough, the only one who can understand me in the end is Umbrella Shu..."

"he?"

Yukinoshita Yukino heard Zaimokuza Yoshiki's soliloquy clearly, and glanced meaningfully at Qin Ushu, who was sitting next to him with his cheek held high in his arms.

"Although I don't know exactly what he told you, but if I remember correctly, his original words yesterday should be like this."

At this point, she paused, her eyes slightly focused and focused on the tip of her tongue, as if she were reciting Buddhist mantras.

"——Although there are too many typos, the sentences are not fluent, the logic is often confused, and the plot is vulgar, if you take off your brain and read it, this is still a very good novel."

"..."

Zaimuzo opened his mouth, but no sound came out.

He probably didn't expect it until he died. He thought it was Hikigaya Hachiman who gave him the fatal blow, but he didn't expect that the biggest killing move was still further behind.

Thousands of words condensed into two words.

"Nani!!!"

"Tell me...this isn't true..."

"Yeah, sorry, it's true."

Facing Zaimuzuo who fell to the ground with his last hope in his eyes, Qin Ushu nodded decisively, cruelly and firmly.

"It's just that I didn't tell you everything at the time. If you read this book completely with your brains out, it would indeed be okay."

"Uh--"

Zaimuza Yihui uttered a white soul and passed away.

He lay on the ground to calm down for a while, and suddenly a Gulu stood up from the ground, patted the dusty coat on his body and stood up.

"Well... I probably already understand everyone's comments, so... after I finish writing my new work, can you help me read it again like this time?"

This time, he did not use that exaggerated tone, nor did he add those strange movements, he just spoke very seriously.

"what?"

"Are you a masochist?"

As soon as these words came out, even Yukinoshita Yukino was surprised, and Yuigahama Yui and Hikigaya Hachiman both showed shocked expressions.

"Well, of course..."

Zaimokuza Yoshiki scratched his head.

"Although I received a lot of bad reviews, I am also very happy. After all, the things I wrote based on my interests can be read by others and they can hear their thoughts. This makes me very satisfied."

"Is that so..."

Yukinoshita Yukino let out a sigh of relief.

"I understand. If you write another new work, I will help you read it."

"Me too~" Qin Sanshu raised a hand.

"Ah, then I also..."

Seeing that Yukinoshita Yukino and Qin Ushu had expressed their opinions, Yuigahama Yui also hurriedly wanted to raise her hand.

Just then, the phone in her other hand vibrated.

Yuigahama Yui glanced down subconsciously and let out a sigh.

"What's wrong?" Qin Ushu turned his head and looked at her.

"Um……"

Yuigahama Yui handed the phone screen to him.

"Teacher Hiratsuka sent a message to the class group, seemingly asking us to go back quickly."

"Say there is something very important."

Chapter 26: Flirting up

"Pass it forward, and each person will take one."

In the classroom, Hiratsuka Shizuka stood in front of the podium with a large stack of paper in her hands, distributing papers in groups.

It's like handing out test papers.

But she wasn't handing out test papers.

Hiratsuka Shizuka wouldn't be so crazy about taking up time in self-study classes or activity classes to make students rush through test papers.

Moreover, the compulsory education period is already out of school when you reach high school. Forcing people who don’t want to learn to learn is something that only happens during the compulsory education period.

"sheet?"

Qin Xianshu raised his eyebrows as soon as he got the paper.

To be honest, since I entered the second year of high school, I have filled out more forms related to future plans.

Last time I volunteered, but this time...