Let you write about wandering, you write about wandering the earth

As Su Yang started writing, the judges and the audience were filled with emotions.

【I found that player No. 7 is very good at using contrasting techniques to narrate stories. I have to say that the effect of writing like this is really good.】

【Yes, there were two shots in total. One is the male protagonist. In just a few strokes, he writes an image of a man who has lost his father's love for a long time, yearns for his father's love but is somewhat stubborn.】

【The man looked at the photo without saying a word for a long time, but the detail that his father’s face was omitted from the photo was absolutely amazing!】

【Thinking back to what Liu Peiqiang said to him at the beginning, I can really empathize with him. I remember when Liu Qi was such a young boy, his father left him for more than ten years.】

【After such a long time, he must have firmly remembered those words. Unfortunately, he was in the underground city and couldn't even see the sky outside!】

【This is the tragic fate of individuals under the grand problem. It is conceivable that there are more people like Liu Peiqiang and his son in this world】

【His father is a hero, but not a qualified father! As the old saying goes, there is a dilemma between loyalty and filial piety, but here it is a choice between everyone and the little family!】

【You said that Liu Qi wanted to go out just to see the"star" in the sky?"？】...

As for the judges, the three of them nodded after seeing the comments from netizens.

"The analytical skills of this year’s netizens are indeed commendable"

"But the more valuable thing is player No. 7. I feel that his skills have grown a lot!"Zou Jing praised.

As a female screenwriter, her experience of emotions is naturally more delicate.

So in the words written by Su Yang, she already has a real understanding of the emotions that Su Yang wants to convey.

"A boy who longs for his father's love, and a girl who yearns for freedom. The characters of this male and female protagonist are well set up!"Zou Jing couldn't help but give Su Yang a thumbs up.

"I agree with what Teacher Zou said."Xu Ke commented,"From the current point of view, everything is perfect."

"But he is afraid that Su Yang will focus too much on the personal emotions of the male and female protagonists, which may lead to being top-heavy and a bit pale in terms of the real theme he wants to talk about. This is something he needs to pay attention to."

"Yes, I am now looking forward to the story he will write more and more."Shen Tong couldn't help but say

"According to Su Yang's plot arrangement, the next step will definitely be a story about the male and female protagonists walking out of the dungeon."

"I just don’t know how the hero and heroine will feel when they come to the 'real world'?"......

On the other side, Su Yang continued to write

[In a classroom that was in chaos due to a sudden power outage]

[The male protagonist Liu Qi took advantage of the chaos and took the female protagonist away.]

[The two walked out of the school and came to the urban area of ​​the underground city.]

[It’s the New Year now, and Spring Festival songs are playing all aroundA happy and peaceful scene]

[The passers-by around are all in a good mood and ready to welcome this traditional festival]

[However, the male and female protagonists were in a hurry and sneaked through the crowd.]

["Have you brought anything out?"The male protagonist asked worriedly.]

["Of course I brought it!"It turns out they are brother and sister. The heroine stole the car card of the man who raised them.]

[At this time, the heroine came to a vending machine and bought a pack of durian-flavored dried earthworms.]

["Why are you in such a hurry? You just want to go out for a day."]

[But compared to the female protagonist who is in a good mood and looking forward to it, the male protagonist seems a little worried]

["That's you, I have no intention of coming back."The male protagonist pulls the female protagonist and runs all the way.]

[Although they were very close to leaving the city, there seemed to be one last thing missing.......]

[At this time, the scene switches to an underground entertainment venue]

[There is a mix of mermaids and dragons here, including a tattooed man and a sexy girl wearing a bunny girl uniform.]

[This is a place similar to a"black market" in the underground city.]

[And the male and female protagonists with green and immature faces came to this place that was very inconsistent with their identities.]

[Pushing open a door, the male protagonist found a man nicknamed"Brother Yi"]

[In order to achieve the purpose of leaving the city, he must have a uniform and ID card that can only be worn by special personnel working on the ground.]

[And that's why he's here]

[As the deal between the male protagonist and Brother Yi was completed, both male and female protagonists put on uniforms and had nameplates with their names on their chests.]

["Remember to come back tomorrow."Brother Yi said casually. For him, this is just a business.]

[In such a long time, there are quite a few people who want to go out and have a look.]

[However, just when the male protagonist thought that everything was fine and was about to leave, the female protagonist whispered:"You are not coming back, aren't you?" which attracted Brother Yi's attention.]

["Wait a minute! Brother Yi's expression changed instantly,"Not coming back?" He threw back the things the hero brought him,"You want to cheat me out of my clothes just based on these things?""]

["For so many years, my first brother has been honest and does not accept credit!"Brother Yi smashed the cigarette butt on the ground. At the same time, the gangsters around him also noticed the movement here and showed fierce eyes.]

["Big Brother......I really have to go out today......"The male protagonist noticed something was wrong and could only say weakly like this]

["What are you going out for? Do you want to stay with your little sister to celebrate the New Year?"]

[As Brother Yi's sinister words fell, the atmosphere instantly became tense. ]