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"Al! Alphonse! Damn... it shouldn't be like this! The beast... was snatched by him!"

A teenager who had lost his left leg lay on the ground, looking at the magic circle drawn on the ground, and roared.

As soon as the screen turns, it is a page spread with a magic circle painted on it-through setting, Shang Haozhi knows that this kind of magic circle is called a "refined circle"-gears and steel, and a burly armored man And a teenager.

This page explains the background.

There is a formation of formation, which means that it is a different world, and there are gears, which means that it is not the Middle Ages, and the two people in the picture, needless to say, are the two protagonists of the story.

After turning this page, the story of "Fullmetal Alchemist" officially begins.

The two protagonists came to a small town and heard that the leader of the Sun Sect could create a "miracle". The protagonist Edward sneered at this, but unexpectedly inquired that the leader could bring the girl Roshan's boyfriend back to life.

Edward and his younger brother Al told Rosanne that he was an atheist and believed that in a sense, scientists were the closest to God, and Rosanne did not believe him at all.

At the same time, the subordinates of the leader also found out the arrival of Edward, a national alchemist.

After the two sides met, the leader's subordinates shot Al's helmet with a gun, and the other subordinates also stopped Edward.

Just when his subordinate was holding a pistol and trying to kill Edward, Al, who had just been knocked off his helmet, grabbed his hand.

"what!"

Al lost his head, but he was still able to move. This in itself was beyond ordinary people's imagination. What was even more frightening was that there was a dark patch inside the armor, and no blood was visible at all.

While he was in a trance, Al hit his face with a real iron fist.

Then, Edward and Al finally met the leader.

Edward used words to arouse the leader, and the leader was deceived.

Roshan, hiding in the armor, not only heard the ambition of the leader, but also knew his attitude towards believers.

"...Yes! I deceived those idiot believers!"

Luo Shan questioned the leader, but the leader came up with the "killer feature" of "resurrecting lovers".

In the end, Luo Shan chose to give up resistance and submit to the leader.

"Sorry, even if he lied to me, I can only do this. The only person I can rely on..."

Helplessness and compromise are vividly manifested in Luo Shan's body.

She knew that the leader was lying to her, but so what? In order to resurrect her lover, she can only trust the leader.

The leader became angry with Edward and Al, and immediately released the synthetic beast, letting him fight Edward in a death fight.

After a few rounds, the synthetic beast bit on Edward's arm, but Edward was not injured.

"Look at Roshan clearly." Edward kicked off the synthetic beast and tore off his tattered coat. His right arm appeared in the vision of the leader and Roshan. "This is the human body refinement, which violates the'realm of the gods'. Price!"

Shang Haozhi read the first chapter in one breath, and even before he could catch his breath, he couldn't wait to bring the second and third words again.

Edward defeated the leader, and at the same time, Luo Shan also learned that the human body is unachievable.

In an instant, the spiritual pillar that supported her collapsed.

"You tell me... From now on, what do I have to rely on to survive?" Luo Shan burst into tears.

People are sometimes very strong, knowing that there is little hope, but as long as there is one-thousandth, or even one-tenth of a thousand, hopes, they will grit their teeth and persevere.

Sometimes people are very fragile. When hope is gone, the whole person may collapse instantly.

"That's something you want to consider. Don't you have strong feet on your body? Rely on it for the future."

Edward and Al left these words for her when they passed by Roshan.

The story does not end there.

When the leader returned to the church in panic, he saw a woman and a fat man waiting for him in the church. The synthetic beast has been eaten by the big fat man.

"Cyborg……"

Shang Haozhi took out the persona, checked it carefully, and finally found these two people.

The woman is called Luster, the fat man is called Gratoni, and the fake "Sage's Stone" in the hands of the leader is given by these two people...

The story ends after Gratoni eats the leader, and it also leaves a lot of doubts.

What is the sage's stone? Why are there fakes? What are the identities of these two people?

With these doubts, Shang Haozhi couldn't wait to know the next plot.

He closed, but his brows were not stretched, but he embraced his arms and his eyes fell on him.

After reading these three words, his most intuitive idea is to come together in one go.

If it is said that other comics tell a story in the first chapter and leave clues at the end to attract readers to continue reading, then this comic only uses three chapters to achieve this.

Is the content bloated?

No, on the contrary, the story is very compact, and the plot and storyboard are very exciting, which firmly attracts his energy.

There is only one reason why it takes three chapters to tell a story, and that is to explain the setting of the comics.

Alchemy, equivalent exchange, human refining, sage’s stone, synthetic beast, national alchemist and other settings are all mentioned. At the same time, the title of the book is also explained-because Edward installed steel The prosthetic "mechanical armor".

There is no big setting, as far as he knows, there is only the "gate of truth".

Is there a lot of space to express these settings through the contents of the three chapters?

In fact, there are not many, but this approach is not very common.

Shang Haozhi understands Shen Xin's approach. The plot of this book is to a large extent and needs to be set and advanced. If it is not set like this, I am afraid that the plot will not be able to move forward.

But divided into three chapters, the length is too long. The first three key words of a book are actually talking about the same thing, which is really wasteful.

Compressed content?

It's not already very compact by itself, how can it be possible to compress the plot again?

Shang Hao thought about www.readwn.com and didn't think of a suitable solution.

The deputy editor-in-chief Zeng Yue leaned over and tapped the table twice, "Old Shang, let me take a look...I haven't looked yet?"

Shang Haozhi passed the harmony setting to Zeng Yuehou, and continued to think about the solution.

Wang Wenhong glanced at Shang Haozhi secretly, and sighed secretly when he saw that he was silent.

Shen Xin told Wang Wenhong and asked him to mention to Shang Haozhi that it is not the best opportunity to serialize simultaneously in District 11, but it is impossible for him not to say it.

In case it is too late, it will be too late when the publication time of "Steel Refining" is confirmed.

After pondering over and over again, Wang Wenhong decided to stand up from his seat and come to Shang Haozhi's face, "President Shang, I have something to say to you."

"Ok?"

Shang Haozhi looked up at Wang Wenhong.

"It's not appropriate to speak here." Wang Wenhong whispered.

Shang Haozhi nodded and got up, "Then go to the meeting room?"

Wang Wenhong followed Shang Haozhi into the meeting room and closed the door with his backhand.

"what's up?"

"That's it. Teacher Shen wants me to ask if there is any hope that this comic will be serialized in District 11."

"Huh? District 11?"

Shang Haozhi was taken aback, and then he thought of "Young Leap" in his mind.

"Soul of the Game" is also serialized on "Shoun Leap" simultaneously, opening up a small market in the 11th district for "ComicFuture". The quality of "Steel Refining" is also very high. Is there a chance?

If "ComicFuture" wants to go out of China, it must have a competitive product. The last one was "Hire of Go", will this one be "Steel Refining"?

Shang Haozhi rubbed his chin, thinking about whether "Steel Refining" had a chance to get out of China.

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