My Cartoonist Guide

"Really?" When Shen Xin heard Yan Fei's words, he didn't show any joy, and pointed to another one and said, "Sister Yan, there is one more."

When Yan Fei heard the words, she put away her smile, and her gaze shifted to another one.

The title of the book is the same, and it is also "Basketball Boy". The length of the book is about 60 pages, but the tension of the story is far less than the first.

The main point is that a basketball student who is about to graduate from junior high school, went to various high schools to step on the spot and choose a suitable high school, accidentally encountered a man in a wheelchair playing basketball on the open basketball court.

The two had a competition, but Te Changsheng found that he was not the opponent of the wheelchair youth.

Unwilling to give up, he left. Not long after, he found a wheelchair and exchanged wheelchairs with the wheelchair youth, and ended up in failure again.

In the end, the talented student who lost the competition wanted to inquire about the youth's origin. The youth said that he was originally a member of the provincial team. Later, he accidentally fell from a building and broke his leg, but he still likes to play basketball, so he came to this place. School, as a basketball teacher.

After hearing this, the special student finally made up his mind and chose to apply for this school...

Yan Fei frowned when she looked at this cartoon.

The two short stories are both basketball comics, but they represent completely different content.

The first one is a normal game. It takes place at the last moment of a critical game. The protagonist of the lore will kill the opponent and become a hero-like character. This is also the most frequent routine in the kingly comics. At the same time, the fierce confrontation that the sports comics must reflect is also In this article, got the performance.

The second chapter is closer to the lives of ordinary people. Since anyone can encounter this kind of thing, the reader's sense of substitution is also stronger.

In addition, the two articles have different focuses. The first article pursues "higher, faster, stronger", and the second article focuses on blood and sweat, as well as the unyielding character of wheelchair youth for hobbies.

The first article describes basketball from a higher dimension, and the second article tells the reader that basketball as ordinary people are familiar with is like this. Everyone does not have superb skills, but has a full love for basketball.

In Yan Fei's view, these two comics have their own advantages and disadvantages. If possible, she wants both. It is estimated that Shen Xin's painter can show all the advantages of these two comics.

However, it is impossible for Shen Xin to draw two short stories—60 pages for each story and 120 pages for two stories, which is equivalent to updating half of the pamphlet for free.

Everyone worked hard for more than a month, but the rewards were limited, and the gains outweighed the losses.

Based on this, one must choose one of the two.

After thinking again and again, Yan Fei rubbed her hands and looked up at Shen Xin.

"You can only choose one."

"Yes. Even if you choose one of the two, the workload is not small." Shen Xin said.

"If so..." Yan Fei hesitated for ten seconds before saying, "I choose the second one."

Xi Muhan was flipping through the second copy, and when he heard Yan Fei's words, he raised his head and curiously said: "Sister Yan, I think the first one is also very good."

"The first one is good, but its advantages and disadvantages are outstanding." Yan Fei sighed.

"Huh?" Xi Muhan was taken aback, somewhat puzzled.

"The first short story tells the most intense and exciting part of a game. The look of reporters and spectators, the actions and language of the players, portrays the tense atmosphere in the story, and Mr. Shen's shots also confront the players' fierce confrontation. As soon as it is shown. I just watch it, and it's enthusiastic. If the finished product comes out, it will be even more exciting and exciting.

"However, in 60 pages, I talked about 10 athletes, coaches of both sides, reporters, audience... too many characters, and the characteristics of these characters have not been shaped. To be honest, I think , If you want readers to be attracted by the story, the best way is to have a long foreshadowing before this short story. If it is part of a long story, then it is completely ok, even the finishing touch. As for the short story... I’m not sure it’s a complete story, and it might be more appropriate to say that it’s part of the story.”

Yan Fei looked at Shen Xin nervously.

Shen Xin nodded. This part is regarded as the climax of the story and the most exciting part of a game, but as Yan Fei said, this is a plot of the story, not a complete plot.

The purpose of his painting this article is to let other magazines know the selling points of the lower works and make it easier to negotiate, nothing more.

"Next article." Shen Xin said.

"The advantage of the second article is a strong sense of substitution. Many people have had the experience of playing games on the court, and it is easy to get the resonance of readers. The only difference from other comics is that there is an extra wheelchair youth. His appearance, lift The theme of the work is high. The disadvantage is that the plot is too plain, so that people can see the end of the story at a glance. Perhaps because of space considerations, the wheelchair youth in the work is self-introduction. I think this is the weakest way of expression. . It’s better to let others find out instead of telling it by yourself.”

Yan Fei finished speaking in one breath, only to remember that she was equivalent to refuting two short stories by Shen Xin, but strictly speaking, these two are not as unbearable as she said, and they are also two wonderful ones.

If any one of them is directly handed over to the magazine, it will definitely be serialized, and, with Shen Xin's previous popularity, it will also be highly popular.

However, these two copies are indeed lacking, which is also true.

Shen Xin tapped the tabletop, staring at the second copy in Yan Fei's hand.

In fact, this story is an excerpt from another basketball comic "real" by Takehiko Inoue, which is an inspirational comic about wheelchair basketball.

The reason why he thought of "real" was because he thought of Yang, a young man who also loves basketball but can only sit in a wheelchair.

Yan Fei saw that Shen Xin was silent, thinking that Shen Xin's heart was hesitating ~ www.readwn.com~ was very bright. After a long time, she still felt that she should say a few more words: "Mr. Shen, I know you are very popular in China now. , Even if the next work is only of general quality, it can still sell well. Of course, these two are not bad, but as your editor in charge, I still hope that you pay more attention to some details. Are there many people behind?"

"Huh?" Shen Xin looked up at Yan Fei who was standing in front of him, "I am thinking about the modification..."

"Cough... I'm sorry." Yan Fei coughed quickly, slightly embarrassed.

"You are right. The first one has a bloated structure. After all, there are too many characters involved and the plot is difficult to perfect. Therefore, I decided to use the second copy as a blueprint to re-adjust the structure of the story. It will take about two days. Time can be done." Shen Xin made an "OK" gesture towards Yan Fei, "Since we have to do it, we must do our best."

"Really?" Yan Fei said with joy.

Shen Xin's decision completely exceeded her expectations.

"Of course... Xiaohan, find out the photos we took when we were traveling. I will choose the scene there. Also, the photos when we met Yang will also be used." Shen Xin looked at Xi Muhan.

"Ok."

Xi Muhan returned to his desk, opened the cloud disk, and was looking for photos. Wang Wenhong walked into the studio feebly. Behind him, he followed a woman.

Wang Wenhong tapped the glass door twice, and the three people in the room moved their eyes to the glass door in unison.

When Yan Fei saw the woman behind Wang Wenhong, she was taken aback for a moment, and then she beamed her brows, "Xiao Li, are you here?"

Shen Xin also recognized the woman in front of him, who was Yan Fei's colleague in "NewWorld", Wu Xiaoli.

"Sister Yan, you are going to get married, of course I am coming to see you." Wu Xiaoli opened her arms and hugged Yan Fei.