My Songwriting Was Rejected, But I Became A Superstar

The song was written by a famous singer, and the song was written by a famous singer.

Chapter 24 Is the lyrics and music still not good enough? (Seeking follow-up reading)

In the tutor’s seat, Teacher Chen Mo looked at the information of Zhou Yu’s song and exchanged glances with Brother Jun.

“His style is quite good, and his songs are written very purely.”

Brother Jun wore sunglasses and looked cool, and nodded in agreement: “Although the songs written by Zhou Yu are simple, they sound different. That kind of youthfulness and purity is hard to see in the songs created by other students and singers.”

Chen Mo also looked at Wen Shiyi on the side and asked with a smile: “Shiyi, did you participate in Zhou Yu’s new song?”

Wen Shiyi has been discussing new songs with Zhou Yu. They think that Zhou Yu’s new song probably has some of Wen Shiyi’s opinions in it.

“No, he wrote it himself.”

Wen Shiyi shook her head. When she mentioned the new song to be performed to Zhou Yu, Zhou Yu had already said that he was ready. She wanted to see if there was any problem, but Zhou Yu said it was confidential.

“Teacher Wen, you still don’t believe me. There is nothing wrong with the song I wrote. I know it myself.”

Then, Zhou Yu kept her appetite like this, until today when she got the information about Zhou Yu’s songs and knew about the new song he brought this time.

Hearing Wen Shiyi’s words, Teacher Chen Mo and others were also stunned: “We know that his singing skills are fine. I saw that you talked about the new song for so long, but he didn’t ask you to help take a look?”

Wen Shiyi looked at Zhou Yu on the stage and said helplessly: “He kept his original song very secret and was very confident in himself, so he didn’t let me see it.”

This guy, refusing to join her company is fine, and now she is his teacher, but he didn’t even give her the opportunity to see his new song.

Li Xue sneered in her heart, looking at Zhou Yu on the stage, she felt that this guy was really arrogant. Moreover, his new song is still the same as before, the lyrics and music style are too simple, and there is no improvement at all.

Zeng Huayu also shook his head. Zhou Yu, this student, is really a bit overconfident. Even the instructor can’t give opinions on his new song. And there is no improvement this time. It is still the same as before. It is estimated that the voting score of the audience is relatively low.

On the stage, Zhou Yu’s singing continues.

“I want to hold your hand like this and not let go

Can love be simple and without hurt?

You lean on my shoulder

You fall asleep on my chest

Live like this

I love you and you love me

I want to love simply

I want to love simply…”

Many audiences at the scene have been immersed in Zhou Yu’s song, and their minds also remembered their simple and beautiful yearning for love in their youth. Simple and ordinary, being able to be with the one you love is enough.

At the end of the song, Zhou Yu bent down and thanked the audience instructor and the music teacher behind him.

Director Jiang Dan came up with a pair of long legs. Her long slit skirt showed her beautiful legs. Seeing Zhou Yu, Director Jiang Dan smiled and stood beside him.

“Thank you student Zhou Yu for your wonderful performance. The voting channel has been opened. Audience friends who like Zhou Yu, please don’t forget to vote…”

This is Zhou Yu looking at this legendary woman in the entertainment industry so closely. She is thirty-five or thirty-six years old and can’t see any trace of time. But the mature charm exuding from her body makes it difficult to look away. Unlike Yang Qian, a mature lady, Director Jiang Dan can more intuitively feel the mature charm of a woman, especially her strong woman temperament, which makes people feel that they dare not look directly at her.

Yang Qian is still young after all. Although she has the charm of a mature woman, she still lacks a little feeling. She still has a kind of girlish playfulness. This is why there are many female protagonists in her school days in the film and television dramas she starred in.

As for Wen Shiyi, she is a few years younger than Yang Qian. She is only 26 years old this year. She gives people the impression of a cool goddess, noble and elegant.

After Director Jiang Dan said a bunch of advertising slogans, Zhou Yu’s voting channel was closed, and the mentors began to comment on Zhou Yu’s performance.

“Okay, Zhou Yu’s audience votes are already in my hands, and the mentors’ scores will be synchronized immediately. Let’s listen to the mentors’ comments on your performance, Zhou Yu…”

The first to speak was the chatterbox joke teller

Teacher Chen Mo, holding the microphone, looked at Zhou Yu with a smile and spoke.

“Here I come, I’m going to start.”

“First of all, Zhou Yu, you are the first person who made me feel the youth and purity in the songs, especially the love songs you wrote. Take today’s simple love for example, simple and pure, it is the ideal love in the hearts of many people in their youth…”

Teacher Chen Mo said a lot, basically praising Zhou Yu. As he spoke, he turned his head and looked at the audience behind him, pointing at Zhou Yu and said: “And, let me tell you, Zhou Yu is the best student I have seen in basic skills among so many students. I believe everyone has felt it after listening to his singing just now.”

The audience also responded loudly: “Yes!”

Then Teacher Chen Mo changed the subject and looked at Zhou Yu: “That classmate Zhou, when our teachers were chatting just now, your teacher Wen complained that you didn’t show her your new songs, and complained about you for a while.”

Zhou Yu didn’t expect Teacher Chen Mo to say this. He glanced at Wen Shiyi, as if there was some resentment in his eyes.

Wen Shiyi did have some resentment, and she stared at Zhou Yu, wanting to see how he would answer on the stage.

Yang Qian was watching the fun and didn’t mind the trouble: “Yes, classmate Zhou Yu, our teacher Shiyi is a little sad.”

The audience liked to hear these things, and they looked like they were eating melons.

“Haha, there is also this matter. Look at how goddess Shiyi stared at him, it must be true.”

“This kid actually rejected our goddess Shiyi, he really has something.”

“Haha, why do I feel that goddess Shiyi is a little resentful? She is obviously a mentor, but the students don’t let her see the new song, haha.”

“What’s the matter, original songs are supposed to be kept secret.”

…

Li Xingyu and others in the backstage frowned when they saw this scene, especially when they saw Wen Shiyi’s reaction. This iceberg goddess has never shown such a look to him.

Zhao Lei was surprised: “It has to be Brother Yu, who actually refused Teacher Wen’s help in looking at songs for her.”

If he had a teacher who wanted to look at his new song and give him some advice, he would definitely agree.

Zhou Yu was also a little embarrassed: “Well, isn’t it because recording the show every day is too tiring, and Teacher Wen teaches us every day, and I’m afraid of disturbing Teacher Wen’s rest.”

Wen Shiyi snorted in her heart, afraid of disturbing my rest?

This guy just felt that he couldn’t give any advice on his new song.

But to be honest, she is not good at composing, and really can’t give any advice. She can only use her experience to help Zhou Yu judge whether this song is good or not.

At this time, she also picked up the microphone to help Zhou Yu out of the embarrassment: “In fact, Zhou Yu’s creative ability is very strong. We have also talked a lot about his new songs in private. We are all confident in the songs he brought this time. I believe that the audience will know what they are talking about after listening to them. I won’t say much…”

Wen Shiyi didn’t comment much, and Jun Ge, who is good at rap, didn’t say much either. But when it came to Zeng Huayu, he frowned and looked at Zhou Yu’s lyrics. He hesitated for a long time before speaking.

“My opinions are somewhat different from other teachers. In the first episode, I said that Zhou Yu’s lyrics and music are not good. This time is the same problem. The lyrics and music are too simple…”

Zeng Huayu said a lot, all saying that Zhou Yu’s lyrics and music are too simple, the lyrics are too sloppy, and the music is too concise.

“But it’s normal. You just started to create. You just need to polish the lyrics and music slowly. I look forward to you bringing me amazing songs in the future…”

Then Li Xue also agreed with Zeng Huayu’s statement: “I think so too. Although it sounds good, Zhou Yu’s lyrics and music are too simple. You need to work harder on the lyrics and music.”

Many audiences at the scene are also fans of Zeng Huayu. Many audiences nodded to his comments and felt that it made sense.

“Indeed, the lyrics and music of this song Simple Love are relatively simple.”

My idol is professional and what he said is correct.

Wen Shiyi and the others didn’t say anything. Zeng Huayu has high requirements for lyrics and music. It is normal to disagree with them. After all, it is impossible for everyone to like Zhou Yu’s style.

Director Jiang Dan is quite satisfied with such debates between mentors. There is something interesting to watch when there are debates.

Li Xingyu and the others also sneered. Sure enough, they were right. Zhou Yu’s lyrics and music still did not pass the test of the two teachers, which also meant that Zhou Yu’s score from the mentors would not be very high.

“Then let me announce that Zhou Yu received the following audience votes…”

It was expected that we would not make it to the second round. The data during our recommendation period was too bad, and it was not very popular. Others received at least 200 votes a day in the last round.

. In my first round, plus the collections added to the database, I have 40 to 50 collections a day. But our retention is quite high, which means we still have a chance to revive.

That is, next Tuesday, as long as the follow-up reading data is good and the follow-up reading meets the requirements of the second round, we can still revive.

So, if you like it, please give it a follow-up reading after the update at noon next Tuesday. Stay on the latest chapter for 30 seconds, and turn to the end where there is a follow-up ranking. The follow-up reading data on Qidian is based on users who have consumed within three months. Book friends who have the conditions are welcome to recharge, just one dollar will do.

Whether it can be on the second round depends on your support next Tuesday! As long as the results are good, I will directly update it after it is put on the shelves!

Finally, thank you all again!

(End of this chapter)