Ninja World Correction

1 month later, Land-of-Rivers, an inn.

Seidai knocked on the door and opened the door to enter. Hehe said with a smile: "Jiraiya-sama, are you busy creating? You are not healthy and insist on creating. You are a great educator. But going out more is good for health, I came up with a new way, this time to ensure success!"

"The seventh time."

"... Huh?"

"This is the seventh time you have guaranteed success." Jiraiya turned her head, her face was as white as if the serious injury had not healed, faintly said: "Let me go, if this continues, I will I was beaten to death by Tsunade."

Seidai blinked and muttered: "Accidents, it was all accidents before. Besides...I blame you.

Just say the day before yesterday, we The appointment is that you pretend to go to chat with other girls to test whether Tsunade-sama is jealous, and see if you can’t get a marriage proposal. But you’re talking and laughing, you almost grabbed the hands of others, isn’t that? Courting death?"

'Isn’t the last time you asked me to spy on the female bathroom to test Tsunade, I happened to see that girl, and when I saw it again, my head was full of...'

Jiraiya's expression changed, and suddenly realized that he seemed to be unreasonable, and reluctantly said: "I am acting, ninja basic skills, do you understand?"

"Understand." Seidai is nodded again and again.

"This time it’s time for you to show your basic skills again, we are like this..."

As I said, Seidai’s voice gradually became quieter because Jiraiya had covered his ears. A look of'don't listen or listen to the Eighth King's chanting'.

Seeing Seidai’s mouth closed, Jiraiya took away his hand again, waved and said, "Done? Go out after talking, don’t disturb my creation."

"Jiraiya-sama, as for What about the trust between us?" Seidai felt painful.

Jiraiya shaking ones head: "Nothing. And if I don’t hurry to create new works, my wallet will not be able to support the Tsunade who loses gambling every day."

I still want to provide. Up her? Who gave you the courage... Seidai rolled his eyes and said: "Then Jiraiya-sama, let me teach you a way to make new books more popular."

"get lost!"

"Good."

Seidai nodded and exited the door, pondered, hehe laughed twice and returned to the room.

……

In the morning of second day, Jiraiya came out of Tsunade's room with yawn and slapped her mouth.

"After listening to the smelly brat's bad idea, I was injured by Tsunade. After that, Tsunade would be gentler, which would be pretty good... It's weird."

shaking one's head With a mess of associations, he went back to his room to wash, then sat back at his desk, ready to create.

At this moment, he frowned suddenly.

"En? Who touched my manuscript?"

"It must be Seidai, what's the bad trick?" With a murmur, Jiraiya frowned and picked up his manuscript. "What do you mean, copied it?"

The first story is based on Yagura, called "The Peeper". It is about a youngster because of curiosity, he often went to peep in the female bathroom and was caught. After the reputation became stinky, I regretted not what happened in the beginning.

This is a long story, which tells in detail the happiness of the youngster before being arrested. After being arrested, the women in the female bathroom beat him, father beat him, mother comforted him with tears, friends Disgust him and wait, make sure that the youngster reads it, so he dare not give birth to the thought of peeping in the female bathroom.

Jiraiya has been revised several times, and is very entangled in whether the youngster can be forgiven at the end, so I almost recite the story.

Looking at it, the passive manuscript, except for the handwriting, is completely copied from him...Huh?

At this moment, Jiraiya was taken aback for a moment, and looked towards the middle section, the turning point of the story, where youngster peeped at the section where he was found.

Women One:'My God, someone is peeping! '

Women Two:'What? where? ! '

Women Three:'Hey, wait, don't worry, it's a peeping...like a Little Handsome Brother. '

Women Four:'Little Handsome Brother? Hey, he really is a Little Handsome Brother. What are you doing, just come in and let the elder sisters take a look, gē gē gē ……'

Jiraiya:? ! !

"Seidai! What the hell are you doing?!"

……

3 months later, the country of artisans, early in the morning, Jiraiya sits solemnly In front of the desk.

"Seidai didn’t know what little demon changed my story again. This child’s thinking is too unhealthy and must be criticized and corrected!"

"Let’s take a look at him first. If you have any unhealthy thoughts, criticize again."

Jiraiya was taken aback for a moment when he picked up the manuscript.

"En? Is this mine?"

"No change?"

"Really no change..."

Jiraiya was stunned for a while, but he was even a little lost. Reading in the morning for three months has become a habit, and even he himself is secretly thinking about how his story can be adapted.

Why is it gone?

It was difficult for him to ask Seidai about this matter. After waiting for two days, the manuscript was never changed.

"How about...I will come by myself?"

...

One year later, Land-of-Snow.

"Uh...Seidai big brother, I will miss you!"

Four-year-old Fenghua Xiaoxue kissed Seidai on the forehead with a cry, and Seidai touched comfortingly Touch her head: "will meet again."

The figure flashed and disappeared directly in front of Fenghua Xiaoxue. Seidai appeared on the top of a Snowy Peak in the distance, beside Jiraiya, Tsunade, and Shizune.

Shizune froze with cold: "Yes, can you go, Seidai?"

"Let’s go, his boring hero game is finally over, leave this country." Tsunade said, and turned away, Shizune quickly followed.

Jiraiya and Seidai followed, and Jiraiya asked in a low voice, "Is that interesting? The coup-d'état of the wind and flowers is obviously going to fail. You have to help him secretly and make him king , And then helped calm the chaos that day?

Did you like that four-year-old little girl? Well, she should grow up to be very beautiful."

Seidai tweeted. Voice: "Jiraiya-sama, you have become wretched, little girl is only four years old."

Jiraiya startled, the wretched smile on his face instantly recovered, returning to his elegant appearance, and soon sighed again: " My book is about to be released."

Seidai's eyes lit up: "Is it published? Do you want to open it, and are you willing to publish a new book?"

It won’t work if I don’t publish it for so many years. The savings in Tsunade lasted only one year and four months, and I would starve to death if I didn't publish it, and...I couldn't write a normal story anymore.

It's all caused by you little bastard! Jiraiya glared at Seidai angrily, and then said with some expectation: "I hope it will be a big hit, the name is as you say... "Icha Icha Paradise"!"

'Jiraiya correction 100 %,

Get free attribute points*5! '

Seidai almost burst into tears!

Finally, finally 100%!

One year and four months, it’s the longest time I spent on corrections. If it weren’t for accidental discovery in Land-of-Snow, I don’t know why I had coup-d'état several years in advance, The wind and raging waves that are about to fail have completely corrected the'Land-of-Snow coup-d'état event', and the rate of return on attribute points is too low.

Seidai smiled: "It must be sold!"