Nomenclature of Night

  9.29 Modification progress

   Today's revision progress is chapter 624-634.

   There are two main problems to be solved today.

The first is the foreshadowing of the rat tide in No. 10 city, and then all the minor adjustments about the taboo referee, and prepare to return to the plot line when facing the Western Continent, especially the taboo in their hands ACE-015 Jiyun Temple Wooden fish, sacrificing a person's body can get five minutes of interrogation time. This prop is in the original text, and it will play a certain role in the future.

   The second is to revise a century of shadow loss. In the original text, he spent a lot of time researching neurotoxins himself, but he did not mention his search for life-saving taboos and to solve the enemy.

Regarding the former, there is a new interpretation of the plot. The first is that he took the time to go to the East and West continents to find taboos, and here the information about the poisonous wine cup came out ahead of time. The second is that he has the information about the concentric lock, and he knows that it is on Li Bingxi. , but the conditions for the containment of the taboos were to sacrifice their partner's life for 20 years in exchange for their lives. Ning Xiu and Qing Zhun could not meet the requirements, and the three immortal brooches had just been used a year before Ning Xiu's accident. Once, only in recent years. The first thing here is that the elongated timeline of the shadow can only pull itself, so it will not affect the timeline of the objective world.

The modification here is that I think from the shadow position. He should make more efforts instead of doing neurotoxin research foolishly, because the principle of neurotoxin is destined that he can study it himself as long as he can't find the culprit. didn't work either.

   The thing about "killing the enemy while taking advantage of this century" is actually explained later, that is, the shadow will touch the life force field of others when killing people, and the demigod can even break free from his control. Now this explanation is advanced.

   The questions I reflect on today are that when I was writing the story of Li Yunshou's unwilling death, there was a civilian self-organized civil airship going to a suicide attack in the story.

   In this setting, the suicide attacks were made by members of the Heng Club in City No. 18 and Jiang Xiaotang of the Haitang Boxing Gym.

This is actually a very important line, but there were too many book friends who could not accept this abuse at the time, so I omitted it. Now I think about losing such important branches as Hengshe and Jiang Xiaotang, it is not appropriate, so I will write a follow-up Insert outside.

   Well, that's all for today.

  See you all tomorrow!

   (end of this chapter)