Nomenclature of Night
Chapter 9: .05 Modify the progress
Today's revised chapters are 231-260.
The main modifications are not many:
The first modification is to continue the previous plot. Li Changqing and Qingchen are no longer forcibly twisted together, but fettered after Li Changqing was attacked. Qingchen showed more abilities when he was attacked, as well as with Li Changqing. interaction, so the relationship between the two people is progressive.
This modification takes more time.
Li Changqing is a very important character in this book, so the emotional line and the plot line are more enriched and corrected, not deleted.
The second modification is to increase the interaction between Li Tongyun and Jiang Xue in the daytime group chat, which is a small part.
The subsequent social death plot should also increase accordingly. The original social death was almost meaningless, and Xiao Tongyun was not beaten enough.
The third one is to modify the bad stalk.
In fact, some of the memes come from life, I think it's good, so I put it in, but looking back on it is a bit deliberately funny, not so natural.
No, to be precise, some of the memes are from my wife.
Yesterday she and I saw a movie clip where the old man burns paper for his deceased partner.
I asked if she would burn me? I work so hard, I must be ahead of her.
She said happily: No.
I ask why?
She said that men become bad when they have money...
I said I went underground, you still care if I get bad or not?
She said that it has been said on the Internet that you can't be rich and support your father...
I wrote down this stalk with a memo, and I will put it in the novel in the future...
Okay, after talking about the revised content, let me talk about everyone's feedback yesterday, that is, the issue of Qingye and Qingqu becoming shadow candidates and affecting the tension.
The first thing to explain is that the shadow candidates themselves will not all die. For example, the behavior of Keiichi giving Qingwen taboos is itself a life-saving behavior in the shadow candidates.
For example, the nine princes of the royal family took the throne, not all the princes died, and then only one remained as the emperor.
Secondly, the length of the revised content is very advanced. If new readers see the name Qingye Qingji, they will not know that these two people are still alive in the follow-up.
They won't be able to see the names of Qingye and Qingqu appear until one or two hundred chapters later. At that time, there is not much suspense in the shadow battle.
Therefore, it will not affect the atmosphere of reading.
For example, you don't realize that there is still a shadow alive, helping Qingxun to complete the foreshadowing of the heaven and earth chessboard.
The leader of the veteran shadow army, and the shadow of the previous generation who is "walking around" is in charge. This is also the follow-up to be rich, and the brush and ink are too few. (Qingzhun is this generation, Qingxun is the previous generation, Caramel Qingshen is the previous generation "it is said to be old", and there is one in the middle who has never appeared. At the earliest time, he said he went to travel.)
Some of them are foreshadowing, but too little writing makes the work very thin.
Let’s talk about the decision of this revision.
First of all, the epidemic situation in Sanya is still under control. It has been a full month since I closed it on 8.4.
And now I am in Jiyang District, the most serious area in Sanya...
There is no takeaway, and you cannot go out at will. Every morning, you need to cooperate with the epidemic prevention policy to queue up for nucleic acids.
Then, in the same room with his wife and children, Ren Xiaosu also came to play games with me, and he couldn’t sleep well (usually he slept in separate rooms with his children to ensure work efficiency).
Actually, in August, the plot suddenly accelerated. At that time, my whole state was close to collapse. In addition to the introversion, at that time, there was only one thought, to end it quickly, I couldn’t stand it anymore.
In this case, the codeword itself is not of any quality. If I am banned as a bachelor, it may take more time, but it is completely different when I am sealed with my child. I need to appease the child at any time.
My wife has been unable to go out during this period of time, and her emotions will occasionally get out of control. Yesterday, she kept saying that she wanted to go home, and I needed to make time for her... In short, it was a very helpless period in this short period of time.
So the situation happened later. Sitting in front of the computer, I couldn't code anything, and I was not satisfied with my quality.
Take time to look at the previous episodes.
Began depression, autism, self-doubt.
In the end, I made up my mind, anyway, I can't code properly during this period of time, so stop and fix the text.
There is still no sign of unblocking in Sanya. In my plan, the revision should be a 1-2 month cycle. When Sanya is unblocked and I look back on the previous situation, I should be able to return to normal codeword life.
There are still hundreds of thousands of words left in the final plot, which can’t be written overnight. It will take at least one or two months to write it, and there are still ups and downs in the middle. Qingchen’s journey to complete the gods is not a direct kill.
It doesn't mean that if I resume the update now, it will end the day after tomorrow... not like this.
So, why don't you think I've broken a bone again?
If you want to relive Qingchen's world, just follow me to continue reading, and if you don't want to read Xiuwen, just treat me as taking a two-month long vacation...
Okay, that’s all for today, thank you again for your support.
See you all tomorrow!
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