is only one-third of that of other chapters, which is thankless.
So for this point, I can only say that I will try my best to write, occasionally write, write a little bit each time, just treat it as dessert after dinner, if you only want to read this, then I can only say sorry.
Q5: The protagonist’s own world view is not written, it is all other worlds, which is incomprehensible.
Answer: Because this book is a fan comic, don’t the readers who come to this book come here for the fan comic? I don’t write about the world of anime characters, should I write about the original protagonist’s world?
Q6: The protagonist is superficial when he comes up, and how to push the girl when he distances himself from the group members? Is it free?
Answer: This question is true. At the beginning, the distance was drawn too far, and the content of the plot was a bit biased towards group portraits. Readers including me should want to see how the protagonist pretends to be aggressive. I can handle this well. not too good.
Next, I will try to increase the protagonist’s sense of presence in the chat group. I mean, the sense of distance between the protagonist and the group members.
Q7: It’s not good-looking. The Holy Son of Heaven is the Bitch of the Holy Mother. Most of the group members are for power, and they don’t really believe in God to give back power. I suggest eunuchs.
Answer: Tenderness and the Virgin are always confused by some people, and at the same time, they are also limited by the author’s performance. I think that Sheng Tianzi’s writing is not a virgin, but sympathy and tenderness. The Sheng Tianzi in the original book also did these things for the cursed son, didn’t he?
As for the fact that the group members believe in the protagonist for the sake of benefit, if they don’t truly believe in it, they shouldn’t be given strength…
Uh, if you don’t give benefits, why should people believe in you? Or do you think that everyone is afraid of death, seeing the strongJust kneel? In that case, the character’s personality will collapse, and it will become the above-mentioned licking dog with no IQ and no personality.
Isn’t Esdesi just an example? From the beginning, she didn’t believe in gods and only believed in herself, and now she has become a staunch fan of the protagonist.
Q8: Is there something wrong with your brain when you pray with English letters? Your western father can’t see you, you licking dog, disgusting!
Answer: This rhythm is what makes me most speechless and regretful since I started the book.
First of all, this kind of people seem to see abcd and only have English letters in their minds. They never thought that the Chinese pinyin is also made up of abcd. They say that I lick the western big daddy. In fact, this kind of people have the least national confidence, right?
Secondly, this is not English. This is a man-made language created for the second dimension. It is derived from the hymmnos language of “Magic Tower Continent”. I made some deletions and modifications for the sake of symmetry and style, and added some Cthulhu words.
For example, the first sentence of the idea I wrote: “Fou_ki_ra_hyar_prsia_ren (please listen to my most sincere call)”
Adapted from the first sentence of the lyrics of EXEC_COSMOFLIPS written in hymmnos: “Fou_ki_ra_hyear_presia_reen (please listen to my most sincere call)”
It took me a long time to design prayers, just because I felt that the prayers I saw in similar works were too LOW, too embarrassing and unrealistic. I wanted to give readers a better reading experience, and finally I found that I was just It’s just doing useless work, the number of words, “licking the big daddy of the West”, “cerebral palsy”, I finally understand that those works are right and I am wrong.
I’m sorry, I was too flashy, I should write as straightforwardly as possible.
Sorry, I didn’t expect that the only language in the world that uses abcd is English. I should add a note to explain.
I’m sorry, it’s my fault.
Q9: A common problem with chat group-themed novels is that only the main character travels through is good, and the other traversers are all bad.
Answer: Because the novel needs to be interesting, and the interesting point comes from contradictions and conflicts. It is not that all traversers are bad, but because it is not bad, there is no need to write it, and it is not bad without conflicts and contradictions. It is not interesting to look at. .
Of course, I have received this opinion, and I will try to arrange it later. As an author, it is my duty to satisfy readers’ tastes as much as possible.
Q10: There are enough Feilus in this theme, and the rest of the routines are embarrassing to watch. Hurry up and cut them to death!
A: I’m sorry, it’s my fault. From the beginning of the book to the present, every day I will be hit by negative comments of one kind or another, and then doubt myself. There is no day when I don’t think that it would be better to just give up like this eunuch, but there is no way, I will starve to death if I don’t write. Yes, I don’t want to die… sorry.
There are some other comments. Due to space limitations, I won’t answer them here. If I have the opportunity to finish this book, I will write another testimonial at that time.
【Written on 2021-05-29, 18:39】.


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