Peerless Valkyrie

Lin Feng had died, his body was lifeless and cold on the floor. In this desolate place there was no one who would come to help him. His last moments were filled with the pain of his soul being torn into pieces.

His body lay in this quiet wasteland, untouched by wind or rain as the seasons passed.

20 years later.

A young boy named Lin Zi was running towards this area of land. He was a cultivator of the eighth Qi Layer, behind him was a violent ape who was furiously chasing him. A cultivator of the eighth Qi layer should easily be able to stop a violent ape which was a ferocious beast of the seventh layer.

A smile appeared on Lin Zi’s face as he suddenly had an idea. As the violent ape charged towards him, he had suddenly dashed back at incredible speed and stabbed the ape’s leg. A furious howl filled the air as the ape began to limp.

Lin Zi however was not planning to stick around and quickly fled to safety. Only when he was away from the ape did he realise the skeleton of a long dead young man. The skeleton had black robes and looked as if he had died during a breakthrough. Next to the skeleton was a jar of pills which looked almost mystical.

Lin Zi was still young and inexperienced when it came to the world. As he saw the skeleton, he could not help but feel slightly scared that there may be traps. He had short brown hair which was blowing in the wind and a handsome face which was currently filled with concentration.

As Lin Zi approached, he had not seen the shadow which had moved from the skeleton and merged into his shadow. He quickly picked up the items from the body and said a quick prayer. He then departed into the distance. Little did he know that this was his first step towards becoming a peerless martial god.

A great distance away, Lin Zi had finally arrived at a small wooden house. Inside there was a familiar looking middle aged woman. She was sitting down and meditating, she was still very beautiful and one could clearly tell she was gifted in cultivation.

“Mother I am home” said Lin Zi

“What took you so long? ” said Lin Qian

“Mother look what I found, we should go show Grandpa, Lin Ba Dao at the next clan meeting” said Lin Zi extremely happy.

“Why would my father be happy at something Like this” Said Lin Qian

She threw away the items which once belonged to her old enemy who was long dead. It was at this point when she had realised that a giant killer bunny had appeared it front of them. Before she could even react the evil bunny had released her demon spirit.

“I will take your soul as an appetiser, then the main course shall be my beloved Pan Pan” said a cold voice.

Lin Zi quickly tried to retreat, but before he could, the giant bunny bit into his neck and absorbed his blood along with his soul. The bunny then used a profound agaility technique and within the blink of an eye it appeared again before Lin Qian.

“BOOOOM!!!”

A terrifying shockwave blew Lin Qian back several meters as she landed heavily onto the ground. She was almost crippled with a single strike. Footsteps could be heard as the bunny slowly approached. Then a voice rang out.

“I would kill you here, but I will give you a free pass for being a woman”

I will now post the same thing again so it looks about the correct length for a chapter hehehe xoxox lol

Lin Feng had died, his body was lifeless and cold on the floor. In this desolate place there was no one who would come to help him. His last moments were filled with the pain of his soul being torn into pieces.

His body lay in this quiet wasteland, untouched by wind or rain as the seasons passed.

20 years later.

A young boy named Lin Zi was running towards this area of land. He was a cultivator of the eighth Qi Layer, behind him was a violent ape who was furiously chasing him. A cultivator of the eighth Qi layer should easily be able to stop a violent ape which was a ferocious beast of the seventh layer.

A smile appeared on Lin Zi’s face as he suddenly had an idea. As the violent ape charged towards him, he had suddenly dashed back at incredible speed and stabbed the ape’s leg. A furious howl filled the air as the ape began to limp.

Lin Zi however was not planning to stick around and quickly fled to safety. Only when he was away from the ape did he realise the skeleton of a long dead young man. The skeleton had black robes and looked as if he had died during a breakthrough. Next to the skeleton was a jar of pills which looked almost mystical.

Lin Zi was still young and inexperienced when it came to the world. As he saw the skeleton, he could not help but feel slightly scared that there may be traps. He had short brown hair which was blowing in the wind and a handsome face which was currently filled with concentration.

As Lin Zi approached, he had not seen the shadow which had moved from the skeleton and merged into his shadow. He quickly picked up the items from the body and said a quick prayer. He then departed into the distance. Little did he know that this was his first step towards becoming a peerless martial god.

A great distance away, Lin Zi had finally arrived at a small wooden house. Inside there was a familiar looking middle aged woman. She was sitting down and meditating, she was still very beautiful and one could clearly tell she was gifted in cultivation.

“Mother I am home” said Lin Zi

“What took you so long? ” said Lin Qian

“Mother look what I found, we should go show Grandpa, Lin Ba Dao at the next clan meeting” said Lin Zi extremely happy.

“Why would my father be happy at something Like this” Said Lin Qian

She threw away the items which once belonged to her old enemy who was long dead. It was at this point when she had realised that a giant killer bunny had appeared it front of them. Before she could even react the evil bunny had released her demon spirit.

“I will take your soul as an appetiser, then the main course shall be my beloved Pan Pan” said a cold voice.

Lin Zi quickly tried to retreat, but before he could, the giant bunny bit into his neck and absorbed his blood along with his soul. The bunny then used a profound agaility technique and within the blink of an eye it appeared again before Lin Qian.

“BOOOOM!!!”

A terrifying shockwave blew Lin Qian back several meters as she landed heavily onto the ground. She was almost crippled with a single strike. Footsteps could be heard as the bunny slowly approached. Then a voice rang out.

“I would kill you here, but I will give you a free pass for being a woman”

I will release the first chapter for tonight in about 2 hours…after this had fully sunk in lol I am sorry, but you have to admit. My writing skills are pretty good. Dont even pretend that you didnt believe it was the story and the MC was about to be Lin Qian’s son ????