End of volume testimonials
The second volume is also over, well, before you know it, there are more than one million words, so fast, in various senses.
To be honest, I am not very satisfied with this volume, there are several problems.
One is the mirror sea area. The plot in it was not written carefully, it was too fast. In fact, looking at it in reverse, there is still a lot to write about.For example, the arrangement of Bismarck, the experience of the black enterprise, and the encounters of Befa and Su Qi in it, because that time was the key to getting Befa, because they cared too much about the relationship between the plot, so there was a lot less necessary Let’s just put it this way, I can write at least ten more chapters for the mirror sea area, including Befa.
In addition to the mirror sea area, there are also some problems with Guanghui's handling. From the beginning when Guanghui appeared in the academy, I wrote about her purpose and personal thoughts. When I came back, I wrote a lot about Guanghui during this period. Through some exchanges with Befa, the progress of the fishing boat was promoted, and her own thinking about the promotion method of the legendary ship girl, these reasons accumulated. it is also fine.It’s just that I should catch the boat at the Royal Palace instead of waiting until I come back. A better timing should be when I meet Bian Jiu in the coffee shop, and then I will start some plots, and finally catch the boat smoothly. In this case, It won't be a bit abrupt because after such a long time, when I return to Donghuang, I suddenly bring up the idea of fishing for a boat.
In terms of reasons, one is the problem of update speed, another point is also a very important one, there are really too many ship girls!
I'm struggling now, including the built ship girls, if each ship girl arranges a plot, it really needs to be written for a long time, so that the main plot seems to be procrastinated, and it may be called Tianshui's daily life.But on the other hand, this is originally a novel about the ship girls, and the real protagonists are the ship girls. I said before that this book is half a plot. In fact, fishing boats is also the main line, and fishing boats is the correct way to open the real book, so ah , I am a little entangled, what level should I write is appropriate?
Of course, there must be more emphasis on some ships, such as marriage ships, and non-marriage ships, but everyone thinks that they will definitely become marriage ships in the future, such as Guanghui Beifa. These should really be more focused.
But in fact, everyone has their own hobbies. Some people like vampires, javelins like Lafite 23, and Eugen Eugen Ou. After returning, they have fewer scenes. I know some people have ideas, but I don’t have any behind them. Arrangement is also because of the previous tangled problem.
So, if you have any comments, I hope you can also mention them here. Regarding your views on the above issue and some suggestions for this book, a good book can never be completed by one person. This book may be very difficult to write. Long, so long that even if there is no main storyline, I can fish for as long as I can, but it may not be long. After all, if there are too many boats, I will feel bored, and some people will say no. Let’s get on the boat, bah !Shameless guy, it's you.
Then, if you have any opinions, please mention them in this paragraph, don't make a fuss, and speak out after thinking about it seriously.
PS: Then, let’s meet Sakura again, and secretly ask, is Nagato married or not?
PPS: There is an update plan later, everyone must read it! !
Recent update plan! ! (important)
First of all, let me tell you that it is definitely not because the author is lazy and said that he wants to reduce the amount of updates, no.
Let’s take a picture first:
That's it, Shuke organized an activity, although it was a spelling activity, but I think it is very cheating, because there is a lot of time, it is very unfriendly to an author like me who has a persistent outbreak, there is no other reason, I have too few manuscripts up.
To be honest, I only have more than 1.2 saved manuscripts. After all, it has been a continuous explosion of 2W words, and this month and last month, I added [-]W words every now and then, so I can't save manuscripts at all.
But I really want to compete for this event, not to mention the bonus, just the real-time updated leaderboard on that page is enough to attract me. It is too difficult for a book hovering on the edge of the street.
So, having said so much, I just want to tell everyone that I am going to start saving manuscripts. As for the plan, it is to update 4K+ every day. Then, as I said before, my basic update will not be lower than 6K, so in Let me tell you here, for example, if I update 4K tomorrow, I owe you an update, not to mention that you don’t need to vote for blades, it’s my basic update.
Every day you update, you owe one update, and it keeps accumulating. By the day of 11.9, you will owe everyone a total of 12 updates. In addition to the previous rewards owed, that is, 19 updates. How many words are there for 19 updates?It’s only less than 4 words, and I’ll return it together when the event comes. Don’t worry, when it explodes at that time, it will definitely be at the level of more than [-] to [-] words.
But in fact, I am very worried. My grades in this book are not very good, and I have always relied on explosive updates to maintain it. I am afraid that once my updates slow down, you will start raising books and stop subscribing. I'm really going to cry.
So, it's 12 days. I hope everyone will maintain the subscription. Even if you want to keep books, please turn on the automatic subscription.To be reasonable, since my book was put on the shelves, has there been a day when the number of updates is less than [-]?In which month did you not take the number one update list?So the reputation is still there.
That's all I want to say, I'm uneasy, there will be a super explosion in 12 days, so please be sure to turn on automatic subscription, thank you!
Chapter 1 Nagato
The cherry blossoms on Pufang Island never fall.
Here is the most magical sacred tree of the heavy cherry blossoms, which is the symbol of the heavy cherry blossom country. Every year in the season when the cherry blossoms are in full bloom, pink petals are flying around the island. Under the huge sacred tree that lifts the sky, the wooden platform in front of the shrine On the top, against the background of the sky full of flowers, wearing a soft feather robe, black and smooth hair, and a petite body dignified and grand, that is the god son of the heavy cherry country praying to the eight million gods for her people, praying In the coming year, the weather will still be smooth, and the glory of the sacred tree will last forever.
But that was in previous years, ever since Sakura went to another path, Nagato, as the child of God, led the newly born Sakura forces to start a long-term struggle with the Sakura regime, and since then, the cherry blossoms on Pufang Island have gradually withered , even the eternal god tree has lost its former glory.
But now, everyone in the Cherry Blossom Kingdom knows the news that the cherry blossoms in Pufang Island are blooming again, the son of Miko Nagato has returned, and the cherry blossoms have escaped from the control of the Siren and returned to the side of human forces.
So far, more and more residents have come to Pufang Island to visit, but it is a pity that this sea area is still in a closed state, and the grand occasion of worship in the past has disappeared, but even so, the cherry blossoms of Yushenmu are still full of vitality. The island is still full of cherry blossoms, and everyone knows that Miko Nagato is on the island.
In the middle of Pufang Island, there is a shrine in front of Shengshi Yushenki. There are some courtyards around the shrine, which are heavy cherry blossom-style courtyards, for everyone to rest in peacetime.In front of the shrine is a spacious open space, and further forward is a stone step that extends to the middle of the mountain. At this time, on the stone step, a petite body ran up from below.
The girl is wearing a golden hair ornament, with long animal ears, a small round face and big eyes, and looks full of vitality. At this time, she is holding a Kagura bell in her hand, shaking it while running, giving this quiet shrine Brings vitality.
The breeze was blowing, the petals in the sky were dancing, the girl raised her head, and the sun fell on the girl's face through the gap between the cherry blossoms. At this time, she smiled sweetly, and missed the picture of the past. It has been a long time since I saw such a beautiful morning in my impression. up.
Stretching out her hand, a petal landed on her palm. The girl stared at it for a while, and then looked at the long stairs behind, showing a distressed expression.
"There are so many petals, we need to clean again."
He continued to climb up the stone steps with short legs, and saw Fusang at the gate of the courtyard, who was carrying a breakfast towards the shrine.
The ball king Fusang, this is the name recognized by everyone who lives in the shrine. At this time, Fusang is wearing a familiar Japanese style suit, with his black hair tied into a single ponytail and pinned to the side, with a gentle smile on his face, and his body gently turning around His temperament is natural, just like Yamato Nadeko.
Fusang walks very slowly. Of course, even if he runs, he may not be so fast. After all, the illegal buildings on his chest are too conspicuous, which brings not only countless enviable glances, but also various inconveniences. when.
"Oh, I can't see the soles of my feet. What kind of shoes did I wear when I went out?" There are always difficult times...
At this time, Lu Ao ran over, and she smiled and said, "Sister Fusang, good morning."
"So it's Mutsu, have you gone to the beach?" Fusang said with a smile.
"Yeah, I just saw the seabirds catch the fish with a swish. The fish is still in the sea. Hey, Miss Fusang, how did they do it?"
"Because they are seabirds, seabirds are good at fishing, just like we are ship girls, we can easily float on the water."
"Why why? Why do they have such abilities? I know that we can float on the sea with sail feet, why is the ability of seabirds to catch fish as simple as our ability to float on the sea?"
"Ma...Mutsu, I'm going to deliver breakfast to Miko-sama now, can I answer your question later?"
"oh oh."
One hundred thousand Mutsu is a bit difficult to deal with. Most of the people in the shrine are afraid of being entangled by her, but Fuso has enough patience to answer each other one by one. If they can’t answer, they will go with Mutsu. Looking for the answer to the question, in short, Fusang is a gentle and patient person here, and she is also a competent nurse, no matter in terms of responsibility or body shape.
"Sister is praying." Walking on the road, Mutsu said, Nagato usually prayed in the shrine at this time.
"It's almost over."
The two said so, and soon saw Nagato coming out of the shrine.
The long, smooth hair was tied behind her back, and she wore a golden bun on both sides. At this time, Nagato changed into a shrine maiden costume, with loose cuffs hanging down, and the long scarlet hakama almost covered her legs.
The maiden costume that Nagato wears is specially sewn by Fusang, after all, it is difficult to buy one that suits her in Sakura.
"Sister!" Lutsu ran over.
"Master Mikoto, Fusang has already prepared breakfast for you." The simple rice porridge, because Nagato had specifically explained it, so Fusang specially prepared it.
Nagato said helplessly: "Fusang, I already said that I am not the Son of God."
"In Fusang's heart, Nagato-sama will always be the Son of God."
"Then listen to me and call me Nagato."
After hesitating for a moment, Fusang still nodded.
At this time, the three of them walked to a small courtyard next to the shrine, opened the door to enter the house, and entered through the entrance. The door stopped, pushed the door open, and the three entered the room and knelt down.
Only Nagato ate breakfast alone, and the others ate it early. Of course, this is already a daily situation, and Nagato was not surprised. At this time, she asked, "Where's Jiang Feng?"
Mutsu said, "She's patrolling nearby."
Jiang Feng, who went out early in the morning, was already soaring over the sea at this time.
"Sister, I went to see a lot of ships coming nearby in the morning, not warships, but ordinary ones, just ordinary people, like before." Mutsu thought for a while and said, she not only saw it in the morning Seabirds were fishing, and they also saw warships stopping those ordinary boats.
Fusang said: "Those are all wanting to visit God...Master Nagato."
Shige Sakura left the Siren, and Nagato returned to Pufang Island. This kind of news is spreading hotly in Chong Sakura. Everyone thinks that Nagato led the freshman Shige Sakura to defeat the Siren. Therefore, during this time, there are a lot of boats every day. Those who come to visit, visit the Son of God they admire, and continue to pray to the eight million gods.
However, Nagato asked the Sakura government to block this sea area a long time ago. Now, except for the occasional siren fleet, ordinary people cannot enter here at all.
Everyone didn't understand why Nagato did this, and finally asked the reason. Fusang remembered Nagato's answer at the beginning: "I am not their belief, what they believe in should be the most honorable main god, as long as the prayer in their hearts never stops , then the gods will feel their intentions, my existence is superfluous."
In order to prevent the past from happening again, Nagato chose to hand over the dominance to the people themselves. Between the son of God and the ship girl, she chose to live as a ship girl.
Of course, some of the past habits still continue, and the prayers are carried out every day, even when I was not here before, and I abandoned the identity of the Son of God, but the connection with Yushenmu has not been broken. Since returning here, so feeling became clearer.
Yushenki also became full of vitality when everyone's faith returned. The cherry blossoms blooming on this island at this time are the best proof.
The cherry blossoms on Pufang Island will never fall. This is a phenomenon that has existed since ancient times. Observe the changes in the situation on the island, and you can get the general status of the cherry blossom country from it.In the past, when the Siren forces were in power, the people lost their faith, the divine power of the god tree became more and more exhausted, and the cherry blossoms on the island gradually declined. Such a depressed scene was in stark contrast to the current situation.
"Sister, when will we be able to fight side by side like before? Now I feel that I am in a very good state and can defend my sister against any enemy." The world is so big, I want to see it, Lutsu thinks of his previous life It is much more interesting than the island, although sometimes it is always chased by the boat of the Sakura government and runs around.
"When that time comes, the battle that should come will come back naturally." Nagato shook his head and said.
"Who are you fighting with? Sirens? That would be great, then let them see the strength of the greatest BIG SEVEN in the world." Mutsu shook the Kagura bell, and the crisp sound of the jingle bell echoed in the room sounded.
"En." Nagato smiled slightly, but he was always worried. With their current abilities, if the siren really attacked here, it would be difficult to stop them.
The only thing that makes me happy is that the construction of the Sakura Maritime Safety Bureau is in progress recently. Every time I listen to the report from the ship’s mother over there, I generally know the current situation. With its appeal, many powerful free ship girls have already joined in.
Of course, the new Sakura faction is also there to help now, and the members headed by Mikasa, if there is no accident, will probably exist as the main force of the Sakura Maritime Bureau in the future.
In addition, there is also the protection of coastal cities. That is what Nagato is most worried about. Sakura is an archipelago country with a long coastline and many places are close to the sea. This also makes it extremely difficult to defend. In the past, the sirens did not fight over It’s okay, now it’s troublesome. After all, it’s been so long in the past, and there are not many decent commanders in the Sakura Kingdom, and re-training will not be able to achieve results in a short time, so Nagato mentioned this matter to the headquarters of the Maritime Bureau before. Later, I got news that they were going to be transferred directly from Donghuang, and I don't know what happened in the end.
"Sister, what did you go to Xiancheng last time?" Mutsu asked suddenly.
"Find someone."
"Su Qi Commander?"
When it comes to Su Qi, there are almost no ship girls around Nagato who don't know, and some of them have lived in his tutelary mansion for a while.
At this time, Fusang heard the conversation between the two, and said curiously: "Commander Su Qi...I heard that his tutelary mansion is very powerful."
"It's super powerful~~" Mutsu stretched his arms and drew a circle and said, "It's such a big tutelary fort, there are many interesting places in it, and there are many ship girls. I have seen Yutachi, Kotou Yutachi, and Akagi And Kaga, that was our previous battle."
I have heard of these Fusang, and I heard some ship girls talk about the relationship between Nagato and Su Qi. When they were resting in Su Qi's tutelary mansion, Nagato mentioned the future to those ship wives. At this time, Fusang thought to himself, if Nagato really went to the tutelary fort of Xiancheng, what should he do?There is also my own younger sister, who likes to be naughty but respects Nagato very much. At that time, her opinion also became important.
Thinking of this, Nagato said: "Su Qi once helped us, he is a good man."
"Isn't it Commander Su Qi? Sister, why do you call Su Qi and I call Commander Su Qi?" Mutsu asked curiously.
With a slight flush on his face, Nagato said: "That's what he asked me to call, and the name is just a code name. The relationship between each other can only be determined through words and peace with each other."
"So I can call him Su Qi in the future?"
"Hmm..." Nagato thought it would be impolite to call him that way, and he thought about it when he got along with Su Qi before. At that time, he called him Commander Su Qi, and then the other party said that it would be fine to call him Su Qi, The three words were omitted, and I felt a little closer, but for ordinary people, I should add the word commander, right?
Lu Ao blinked: "Then I will be called Su Qi? Su Qi Su Qi Su?"
Always being very persistent in such a strange place, Nagato said helplessly: "You can ask him yourself when the time comes."
"Eh? Will Su Qi come?" Has already been called.
"Maybe..." I didn't meet him last time. I heard that I went to the royal family. Thinking about it, it's almost time to come back. Although I didn't explain the situation, the other party should understand, right?Think about it, would it be better to leave a letter at that time?What a careless Nagato, obviously he can memorize all the procedures when praying, and he can handle even complicated things, but at this time he seems to be too big.
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