It seemed that she didn't know where she should go.

If she goes home, maybe Yangno will block her in the apartment.

Anyway, she is celebrating her birthday tomorrow, and maybe the family will drag her out to hold a birthday party or something.

She had always hated that kind of activity.

However, when Luo Chen was not around, she might not have the courage to resist Yang Nai and her mother.

"I don't have any special ideas now." Luo Chen thought about it: "I'm planning to go to Xiazhiqiu's house to help her read the script at night."

"To her house?" Tuanzi's eyes widened.

"Huh?" Xue Nai was also a little surprised.

"That's right, go to my house, do you want to come?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu said with a smile.

Her legs shook uncomfortably.

What she meant was, stay where you two are cool and don't bother us.

However, with Tuanzi's IQ and Xue Nai's EQ, they obviously didn't understand what she wanted to express.

"Okay, thank you for the invitation. I won't cause trouble for your family, right?" Tuanzi said worriedly.

"No, there is no one in my house today." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu said so, and the veins on his forehead were already bulging.

She really wanted to tear the dumpling in half...

"That's great, it happens that we can play until tomorrow, and then celebrate Axue's birthday!" Tuanzi said happily.

Chapter 589 Sleeping Black Tea

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's house.

It was the first time for Luo Chen to visit her house as a guest. She lived in an apartment, not the kind of one-family building that Luo Chen lived in.

In the island country, this kind of apartment is more expensive than a single house, and it is also high-end.

Of course, except for the decoration of Luo Chen's house.

The layout is three bedrooms, one living room, one kitchen and one bathroom. The decoration is not bad. It seems that her parents have good jobs.

As for what it was for, Luo Chen didn't ask.

"Huh... so sleepy." Xue Nai felt a little dizzy just after drinking the black tea.

It must be the reason for the ups and downs during the day, which made me tired.

"Me too, huh, student Xia Zhiqiu, may I ask where Axue and I sleep?" Tuanzi looked at Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu.

The two of them even brought their own pajamas here, including toiletries and towels.

Of course, they were all bought in the supermarket downstairs, instead of being ready to go home from the beginning.

Anyway, Xue Nai is not short of money, and buying this little thing is just a little bit for her.

Luo Chen originally wanted to say that it doesn't matter if Xue Nai goes home, as long as he greets Yang Nai, I believe Yang Nai will not harass Xue Nai.

But since they want to come, if I don't let them come, doesn't it make me feel a little guilty?

"There is a guest room in my house, which is often cleaned, and it has been unoccupied except last year for Chinese New Year." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu smiled happily.

"Then excuse me." Tuanzi said, and yawned again.

"We brought towels, huh? This is..." Xue Nai took out a small bottle from her bag.

"Ah, that's mine." Tuanzi said.

"Is this bath salt? The packaging is so cute...it really fits Yuigahama's image." Kasumigaoka Shiwa glanced at it and knew what it was.

"That's right! This one can also be used as a facial cleanser!" Tuanzi said happily, "I always feel like we're having a very girly conversation."

Their chats before have always been abnormal, only this time gave the group a feeling that everyone is still a normal person.

"By the way! Axue, do you want to use this together today?" Tuanzi looked at Xue Nai.

"That's okay... Eh? You don't want to take a bath together, do you?" Yukino's eyes widened.

"But, if you don't do that, you can't use it together..." Tuanzi whispered.

Yukino and Tuanzi stared at each other's faces.

Luo Chen looked at the two of them and couldn't help thinking.

In the bathroom of Kasumigaoka Shiyu's house, it can accommodate two people bathing together.

Rather, even three people can fit it.

In other words, don't say that kind of thing on this occasion, okay?All kinds of pictures come to mind accidentally.

"Hey, Yuigahama, don't talk about this kind of topic in front of this pervert." Kasumigaoka Shiyu gave Tuanzi a blank look: "You can tell what he's thinking right now by looking at him."

Tuanzi didn't realize it at first, but gradually his cheeks turned vermilion: "Ah, um..."

"Student Yuigahama is really an idiot." Yukino said in a voice that was so small that it was about to disappear.

She blushed and spoke like this, even Luo Chen could hardly hold back.

But Luo Chen just glanced at her chest, and quietly lowered his thoughts.

Xue Nai didn't know why, but suddenly had the urge to hit Luo Chen.

…………

After that, the two still decided to take a bath together, and went to bed after washing.

And Luo Chen came to her room with Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu couldn't help being a little curious, I doubled the dose, why didn't it work at all?Could it be that the merchant is lying to me?

It shouldn't be, seeing Xue Nai and Tuanzi sleeping so soundly, no matter how you look at it, it doesn't look invalid.

Luo Chen is currently reading Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's script.

"It doesn't work as a game. If this script...is made into a game, it won't be interesting at all." Luo Chen shook his head.

It is the first time that she has written the script herself.

She is very good at writing light novels, but from the perspective of making game scripts, she is completely unqualified.

Whether first draft or second draft, there is only one answer to story preparation.

And as long as the player reads from the beginning, it will definitely lead to that answer in the end.

The urgency, evolution, and foreshadowing of the story are all just for that ending.

Written in this way, the subsidiary heroine will not have fans, and no player will be impressed by the side story.

"Now you are still Xia Shizi as a novelist after all." Luo Chen put down the manuscript and sighed: "The game script writer Xiazhiqiu Shiyu has not fulfilled her role."

According to the current situation, no matter how beautiful the article is, in terms of games, it is still no match for professional players who make games.

"So that's how it is..." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was not depressed, but nodded seriously.

Now, she's also in creator mode.

"Then, let's start from now on, how about stroking from the beginning?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked at Luo Chen.

"Is it okay?" Luo Chen was a little suspicious: "You don't know how to cry, do you?"

"Mr. Luo Ti, do you think I'm so fragile?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu narrowed his eyes: "Or do you think I'm like a little golden retriever, who will be hit to doubt life?"

"Okay, then I'll start." Luo Chen said: "The subsidiary plot is too short, and the ending lacks room for aftertaste. The subsidiary heroine is not portrayed enough, and it is obviously not cute compared with the first heroine. The derivative plots The line lacks horizontal connections, and the feeling of going all the way to the end is very heavy. Don’t compare it with the white album, even if the prologue of the white album has no derivative plot, it is because of the two characters of Touma and Yukina.”

"Well, I know how to portray the heroine, but the female supporting role..." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu frowned slightly.

"Also, the options and gameplay are lacking. After choosing an option, it immediately returns to the common content of the article. Once you choose Jiangshan, you will branch to other plot lines if you only choose one option. What is the reaction after choosing? The selections are almost the same." Luo Chen spread his hands and said: "The description of the state of mind is all expressed in articles, there is no room for images and performances to intervene. Because the lines are short, it is impossible to express the characteristics of the characters with distinctive words. It is all about chasing after the characters. Running, there is no description of action. All in all, this is a good light novel, but if you say that this is a game script, it is not so good."

After reminiscing about the production of the sequel of Avaken, Luo Chen is no longer a rookie.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu has been writing branch lines, so the time she spends exercising is not as good as Luo Chen.

Even though he is famous now, his strength is still insufficient.

"So, Lord Luo Ti, would you like to modify it for me?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu approached Luo Chen.

"Yes." Luo Chen nodded, then began to frown and think.

His script was not bad, but it was only good.

His own strength has improved, but...

I'm afraid it can't surpass the white album or even the works of Yamada Fairy.

Then, just write something conceptual and let her figure it out by herself...

Chapter 590

In the middle of the night, in this commuter residential area a little away from the urban core, the lights are slowly decreasing from around the station.

so quiet.

Inside the sound-proofed building, you can't hear any sound from outside.

Vehicles passing through the crossroads, shops that are still open, and pedestrians walking on the road, even if they can be seen, the voices of their lives cannot be heard here.

But the little noise mixed in this silence is particularly ear-piercing.

While working, Luo Chen stared in the direction of the bathroom, the sound of a shower coming from there...

Soon, the sound stopped.

As soon as the bathroom door opened, the owner of the room appeared in front of me as a matter of course.

"I kept you waiting." Kasumigaoka Shiyu was wearing black and white pajamas, the white headband had been taken off her head, and there was no iconic stockings underneath, but her smooth and beautiful legs were exposed.

"No..." Luo Chen swallowed quietly.

According to his experience, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu should go into battle in a vacuum?

This pace, a bit fast...

As she walked, she wrapped her long black hair in a towel to wipe off moisture: "I sweated from running around during the day, which made me very uncomfortable."

"Hmm..." Luo Chen nodded.

Even in winter, it's still hot inside.

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