I Open an Online Loan in Dongying

Then he brought out the seven volumes of Love Metronome that was on the bookshelf.

But it is divided into two halves, one half is the first three volumes, and the other half is the last four volumes. "Sister Shiyu, why are the last four volumes of your novel so strange?"

"strangeness?"

Kasumigaoka Shiwa looked at Ito Yu's actions strangely.

"I like the first three books quite a lot. But the last four books are ugly, as if the standard has dropped suddenly. So when I was reading this script just now, I was thinking, are you doing it for others? Written. A book that listens to other people's ideas and writes them according to other people's ideas."

"Have you read my book?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu blinked at this time.

"Of course, Mama bought it and said it was sister Shiyu's book."

"Oh." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu pursed her lips, because she didn't hide her writing from her mother, so her mother might have told her aunt when she was talking on the phone, and then she bought the book.

This is normal, nothing out of the ordinary.

Just saying that, my cousin is really well-read.

"The first three volumes are really great, but I don't know why Sister Shiyu is not popular."

amount.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was stuck, because she was about to be cut in half at that time.

Because of the poor sales.

"Mr. Xiaocheng, you have to know that it's easy for a newcomer to rush to the street."

"Push the street?" Ito Yu looked at her strangely, "Then your editor must be a girl."

"Eh?"

"Because you're a girl, I didn't pack you properly."

Yuu said, "Sister Shiwa, you look so tempting for nothing." Ito Yuu said coquettishly, "If you add a little special attribute, it will definitely be super attractive."

"After all, you are so good-looking. Even if the writing style is a little bad, if it is packaged, as long as it is packaged as a beautiful girl author, then it will definitely sell well. For example, the author named Yamada Goblin, she was promoted as She must be famous for writing naked. Everyone wants to see what her works look like when she writes naked."

"Forehead……"

Is there such a thing?

But it makes sense to think about it this way, because the third volume will be cut in half. At that time, An Yijun helped her a lot by promoting it on the blog, and then sold a lot of books. At this time, the editor-in-chief paid attention to her , and then under the name of a beautiful high school student, her works became even more popular.

perhaps.

My own book... At the beginning...

"But the person who instructs you to write the book is poisonous." Ito Yu continued.

"what?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's eyes widened even more.

"That's right here, Sister Shiwa, on your side is the entangled love triangle between Sayuka, Naoto and Shinyui. Sayuka looks very cold, but she is actually a person with no friends. Shinyui and her became friends. Then the two People fell in love with the same man together.

Both parties secretly knew about it.

then.

At the beginning of the fourth volume, Sayuka, who is cold and cold, stabbed it directly, and then Kaikai and Shinyui began to fight, and the ending is that Naoto chose Sayuka. This is completely different from your initial thinking. Your initial thinking is Sayuka was cold, and then made that she could get straight people but deliberately didn't get them, and when she really cared, straight people had already been in contact with Zhenyui, and it was Sayuka who was the first, but she could only bless them.Then Naoto finds out that he likes Sayuka, but Sayuka is unwilling to betray Shinyomi's friendship, so she voluntarily goes abroad to play the piano, and finally has sex with Naoto and leaves with Naoto's regret. "

"The foreshadowing you planted earlier is to write like this, so you should be so entangled. It can be said that the first three volumes are beautiful, and you only lack the limelight of being popular."

"So I want to say..."

You paused. "What's the matter with the next four volumes? You don't even have Baixue. What kind of stuff are these. Which idiot taught you to write them."

"Forehead……"

Teacher Xia Shizi couldn't help covering her lips with her left hand.

Because she really wanted to write Baixue before, but because she went to the street, she denied herself and wrote the next four volumes with An Yijun's idea.

and so……

Author's message:

ps: Guess what time it is today, hey, a bunch of aunts came to the house as guests, so I had to hide in the room and type, I want to sleep... I can only type...

Chapter 006 Pig-headed Boys Don't Dream of Bunny Girls! (fourth more)

and so……

Being criticized so harshly by my cousin.

It makes the female creator of Lost God can't help thinking.

Myself, did I... I really did something wrong.Maybe you should trust yourself to write the stories you want to write.

However, this is really surprising and surprising. The reason why there is no sense of commonality is that the person who is speaking has a small body, small palms, and even a small head. It is just her 7-year-old distant cousin. Brother.

Is this guy a genius?

I could tell what she wanted to write.

"When writing entanglements, it is naturally emotional entanglements. Like [The Year in a Hurry], the scene where the hero and heroine suddenly become silly and have sex with the supporting role must not be written. This kind of thunder point must not be written. Only second-rate authors can do it. It will use the heroine to be raped by others or the hero to become r...bq to attract readers."