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Shearing, this also has a sense of sight, and then it is very exaggerated but vividly describes the heart of a dog that has been sheared.

That complex emotion of shyness, pain, and moral aspects.

Is this to make him feel all the humiliation, shame and pleasure she has suffered?

Sitting on a chair and looking at the contents of the notebook, and then resting his left hand on his left ear, listening to the faint gasping and excited voice that almost never stopped coming from the listening device in the bathroom, Ito Yukun felt very have no choice.

This guy Xia Shizi has been refreshing his cognition.

He came to take a peek while she was taking a bath, but why didn't she want him to peek on purpose?Now hiding in the bathroom excited.

This man is beyond help.

Yuu Ito does not understand why her old work [Love Metronome] was willing to accept a reader's opinion when she was not popular, and wrote according to the other party's ideas, and then wanted to please the other party, that is... this person is really easily influenced.

And now, it is absolutely impossible to write such a visually satisfying book because of him.

"I don't know what Meano Makoto will think after reading the manuscript."

"He must be in pain, no, or he felt malice from the male lead dog... I can't say malicious, I just used him as a template... No one said that good works come from life So? So what's wrong with using his cousin's identity to write about the hero?"

"But he will definitely get angry, explode, and get angry! XN"

"Or, would he think it was written specifically for him? It's disgusting, disgusting, how can he make up his mind like this?"

"No...let's check it out..."

While listening to the noise made by Shiba-senpai in the bathroom, Ito Yu finally slowed down his browsing speed.It's just that even if this is the case, I have roughly read the content I wrote temporarily.

But looking at him, he is still extremely envious, because the content must have been written in a few days, but once it was written, it was already [-] to [-] words. Even if you can use the keyboard to input, but tasting these words, you can It's not a random description of various environments and then a bunch of words about the hero's inner thoughts.

It’s about really having ideas and content. If you want to be cute, you can be cute, if you want to sell meat, you can also give some meat, and when writing a plot, there is also a plot development. Every time Kasumi Hill Shiyu sees her, she always holds a book and two copies. Judging by the books, but this guy is truly talented.

If it is further improved, it will fill up the content of a volume of light novels.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu is really a terrible woman.

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And now this horrible woman is standing outside against the door.

"Don't hide." Ito Yu suddenly looked towards the door, "Sister Shiyu, you should stay outside."

"Forehead--"

The other party seemed to be taken aback, so his body trembled, but soon he pushed the door confidently and walked in. "How? My new work?"

She didn't even wear shoes, and she walked barefoot, but she still had a unique sense of beauty when she walked.

The reason for this description is that she didn't wear clothes underneath.The trousers had been taken off and a very long shirt was now on.

No idea how excited she was in the bathroom and then running out.

Ito Yumasa looked at it like a gentleman, but it's a pity that she still wore it even though she was fat.

Purple.

It's just that Yuu Ito didn't look sideways, and kept a gentleman's expression, "For the new work, M's male lead dog is very interesting, but don't you think there are too many characters at the beginning? There is also a foreshadowing here, which is well buried. , but the gradual detonation is poor..."

"And here, Sister Shiyu, look for yourself..."

"This way of describing, I know you must have read the content of the book you like and copied it down, but at least you have to change the lines..."

"And here, there are too many descriptions, and the picture is not enough..."

"Then……"

what.

After being pointed out one by one by Ito Yu, Kasumigaoka Shiwa was stunned, because it was different from the mood written.

She originally wanted to make him angry, and deliberately wrote him as the male protagonist, and he was also M, but this guy actually commented on her work seriously.

Evaluate from content, creativity, writing and improvement.

Weird.

Behaving so seriously.

"And here..."

However, when the other party opened his mouth, she couldn't help but hurriedly looked at it. She saw the flaws, and made a note of it for revision, and she would quarrel with him if she didn't think it needed to be corrected.

debate.

Discuss your work with others.

Although I wrote something that I really wanted to express, I didn't think it was bad when I argued.

Why, why is this happening?

Obviously it was just a work to ridicule the other party, but now her heart has become extremely complicated.Or, in fact, my cousin is really a good person?

This idea suddenly arises.

When she saw that the other party's mouth became dry because of the argument and the comment, and then started to drink water, her heart felt like it was hit.