This is My Holy Grail Battle

The cold wind and the cold moon, the lonely shadow... standing alone on the roof, enduring the breeze blowing alone.The back is the dark night sky, and those who sit are cold tiles.Holding it cold, I realized that I was still alive.

This is the picture scroll of assassin in this volume, and I will gradually put the picture scroll of assassin on the cover——

Bloody and bumpy all the way, standing alone under the rainy dusk.Staggering forward...the countless corpses underfoot laid the foundation stone of victory.Until the last moment, shaking his exhausted body, he exhausted his last strength and looked up at the sky, looking up at the sun that was completely covered by dark clouds—it was so beautiful!At least I have seen it, I have seen the moment when the clouds and the sun are seen.Stretch out your slender arms in the rain, as if touching the sun.

Some secondary school and hypocritical, but probably this is the feeling?

It's just that it's difficult to write it out, and it's artificial if you don't control your writing power well.

I feel that my writing skills are still not enough, and I can't write that...that feeling.I always feel that there is a thread, racking my brains.Improve your abilities...the road is still long.

The third volume is FA.That's right, that 7V7 red-black battle.

In fact, I didn't plan to write FA at the beginning, but jumped directly to write original ones.Yes, it took me a lot of time to conceive a full Holy Grail War!

It's just that I'm still in the stage of doubting my original ability, after all, I haven't really created anything before.So a little unsure, right?

I don't know about FA, I only heard others say that this Fanfeng has a very bad review.Later, I thought, since it is a work of the fate series, it is so difficult to watch.

It turned out that... unexpectedly, it was not bad.But there was a failure that almost caused this show to collapse!

The early episodes were really good!The middle stage of the plot is full of guts... The later stage of the plot is very bloody, but the fighting is still a bit hot.Although there is a sense of rushing to work, the fighting is far from as smooth as FZ. FA... especially the portrayal of Zieg's character has failed to the extreme.

All the collapsed places have one thing in common... Chigurh came out... Ziggy came out... Ziggy came out...

It's not black, but this person has done a lot of 'forcibly'.Many hooks are completely unnecessary, and there is no need to force Zig to open them.

When it comes to Chigurh, all kinds of gifts come to mind.Send weapons, send skills, send treasures, send followers, send command spells, send hearts, send cheats, send 'wife'... It's simple! ! !

I saw half of them jumping, I couldn't help it!

The key is the reason and motivation for giving these things to Zigger?It's totally worth it!What he saw was a dazed expression, so embarrassing as to die.If you just delete Ziggy's scene, you can watch it instead.For example, Empress and Shiro, Xiao Mo and Lion are all good.

I think that instead of giving these things away, it is better to give Zig a hang that is enough to draw or even defeat Karna (top follower), one is enough!

And this link must be reasonable and powerful at the same time.Just delete the other miscellaneous and non-existent ones, which is meaningless and disgusting to the audience.

How do we do this?In fact, it is very simple, Karna is a follower, a follower who stands at the top of the Seat of Heroes.

Then just give Zig a follower who also stands at the top of the Heroic Spirit.Of course, since the protagonist replaced Saber Siegfried, the name of the artificial man Sieg does not exist.

It should be called Enki now... right?Just kidding, never mind the name.

Wow, I seem to have spoiled it.No matter, since the spoiler is over, let's continue with the spoiler, anyway, Enkidu will appear very early in the opening.So it doesn't matter if it's spoiler or not.

The Holy Grail will respond to the wishes of those with strong wishes, and the servants will also respond to the summons because of the wishes of the master.

The original protagonist, Zig, can get the command spell given by the Holy Grail by relying on his strong desire to survive... This plot is reasonable and there are no loopholes.At the beginning of the game, it is enough for one party to lose one command spell due to XX reasons.

And Enkidu... the clay figurine made by God, a puppet-like existence, is it very similar to Chigurh? !

At the same time, Enki will regard all life on this planet as his own.The idea of ​​living alone can be directly used as Enkidu's summoning medium. For details, please refer to Narita Rigo's False Holy Grail.

So it is logical that there are fetters and conflicts, and the original line will not even be changed too much.Because... Enki is a top-notch follower comparable to Karna!

Even if it is the release of the god-killing gun, Enkidu has the possibility to force it!Whether it's hand-to-hand combat or Noble Phantasm combat, Enki is no match for Karna.And the character almost perfectly corresponds to Zieg, this is simply a road to heaven!The road to heaven!

What should I say about the manipulation of Miracle Dongchu, it is probably that the engineers built a steel bridge (Mushroom and other related authors of Xingyue), from the foundation to the bridge deck, it is not only intensively repaired, but also very strong.

Then, Dong Chu didn't even look at it, and chose to jump off the cliff directly.He didn't take the bridge, leaving only the audience with a bewildered look.

This is probably how I feel inside, right?Cover your face.

In fact, it may be a problem with the spine of the story. If it is not delivered in this way, FZ will become indiscriminate.Chigurh will become one of the supporting roles in the group drama, and Mordred and Shijie Jieli will become the protagonist group.At the same time, it will also lead to insufficient length.

But this is also easy to solve. After all, in order to save space, Toide directly deleted the master of the five teams, as long as it is not deleted.But this will become a real group drama.Like FZ, but I like it better, but Dong De should not have the writing power of Lao Xu.

I think there are many things that could be changed in this volume, so the protagonist takes Siegfried's place.Appears with a saber face.There are enough fetters, and it can also make the growth of the protagonist less abrupt.

Although changing into other servants may be the biggest poisonous point of this book, it is also the biggest advantage!I have to say that my choice is actually wise. I don't have much experience in writing, but I have gained a lot from these two books.

Because the poisonous points of some people are simply negligible compared to the conflicts in the whole book!Anyway, I don't intend to satisfy all readers. In order for the book to continue, it's okay to cut off some meat.

For example, in FA, the protagonist faces Mordred with the appearance of Artoria, Atalanta with the appearance of Medea, and Chiron with the appearance of Hercules. Face Scathach as a big dog.These are the conflicts, the spine of the story that can be written down.

I am planning to create an original Holy Grail War, and I need a reason and motivation to summon the servants of the Celestial Dynasty.

You can't ignore the rules of Xingyue and pull out followers if you want to.Otherwise, it means disrespecting heroes and the meaning of their existence.

So be very careful when setting, the wish of the servant, the compatibility of the paired master one after another... and the bond and conflict between the servant and the servant... Well, it's a bit lengthy.

In short, I solved the problem of summoning the servants of the Celestial Dynasty with the native summoning of the non-native summoning.A magician will not give up such a bonus, so a specific follower somewhere must be summoned.But the price is that these followers all have local bonuses.

It is the bonus of the ghost general who protects the country like the Grand Duke, so it can be directly regarded as a fight between gods and immortals.

Because as long as there is a local bonus, who would be stupid enough to summon followers from outside the local area?

And the medium for summoning the protagonist is also very simple, that is, a half-baked magician uses the scabbard Avalon to summon the protagonist.

If the four battles and five battles are over and the original volume of this volume is written directly, then although the protagonist has Avalon, the combat power is still not enough.I wanted to insert another excessive volume, so I aimed at FA, with the idea of ​​forcing the original volume if it didn't work.

It turned out that FA is actually not bad, and it can be used after changing it.Just play mobo with peace of mind, 'neutral' wild monsters or something, even if it's a big dragon stealing the show, it's not the protagonist.

In fact... Most of the time is not spent on code words, but on finding rationality, and I feel tired.

But I still have some hesitation, in fact, I don't know if I can create a successful Holy Grail War.If it fails, it will probably collapse...

So I'm wondering whether to skip this paragraph.