The fanfic is really not written by a human... the mouse in the bellows is getting angry at both ends.So I will transition to the original article as quickly as possible, and I will not listen to any of you when the time comes!

Also, I actually found out that the protagonist is a dog licker... They all betrayed Rin Tohsaka once you told me that he was a dog licker?

Tohsaka Rin didn't know the protagonist's specific combat power from the beginning, and even the treasure was completely concealed from Tohsaka Rin. Skill.Except for being seen by Saber, the protagonist only nodded to admit it.

The other servants' treasures, including the role of the protagonist who must break all laws, did not mention a word.

The protagonist didn't say about Shining's existence, and the protagonist completely concealed the contamination of the Holy Grail by black mud, just to keep Tohsaka Rin's pursuit of victory unchanged.

During the conversation, he carefully used clairvoyance to cover up the truth, even the last time the summoner was Kotomine Kirei Assassin didn't reveal the news, Tohsaka Rin couldn't even understand Kotomine Kirei's last words before his death.With a dazed look on his face, he became thorough, treating it as the priest's unreasonable ravings before his death.

I was afraid that you would say that Assassin was a bit scheming, how could a person who had only experienced the Holy Grail War once have such a scheming mind?So it was a little subtle, but people said it was dog licking. I was really dumbfounded at the time.

The three chapters where Assassin came into contact with Tohsaka Rin, as long as you look back and read carefully now, you can basically know clearly that Assassin will betray in the future, and you will almost write the word betrayal on your face.

Why did this happen, I began to reflect on it.First of all, this is a fan-oriented fan fiction, and I don't want to destroy the character of the character.But I don't want you to have too much dislike for a certain character.

For example, Tohsaka Rin's character is the kind of half-magician who can kill familiars (servants) but can't attack living people.

If it is described from the perspective of a follower, Tohsaka Rin will definitely draw a lot of hatred.

When re-watching the fate series, I focused on Yingling Shirou.Although this servant speaks a bit heavily, it may have hurt Tohsaka Rin's self-esteem.But in fact, he is also one of the few people who is willing to be regarded as a servant of the familiar, let alone someone who says that in person.

I try to replay the plot in my mind, assuming that Rin Tohsaka's servants are replaced with other servants, especially if there is an archer who acts alone... the consequences may be quite serious.

(PS: For details, please refer to the guy who summoned Jin Yingying from the false Holy Grail. He also regarded the follower as a familiar, and Jin Yingying didn't even look at him until his death. In addition, I also have doubts about the fact that Jin Yingying and Linxiang have a good sex, although this One point comes from the official. But after all... Rin is a magician, and he is born with a bad compatibility with heroes. You can't just talk about money, just say that they get along well. Suppose Tohsaka Rin summons Gilgamesh, then it may take a lot of money Big strokes straighten their relationship.)

So when writing, some of Rin's character was subtly influenced, and then there was the protagonist's scheming problem.

In addition, the readers didn't look carefully, but only saw the protagonist reveal the information to Tohsaka Rin, which led to the illusion of licking the dog, right?

I still haven't found the specific reason, I can only analyze it roughly.There is a reason for everything, and it is always good to sum it up later.

There are details in many places, but because these details are not handled well, readers may not understand some places, right?The places that should be refined are not refined, and the places that should not be refined are refined.

In short, maybe I wrongly estimated how carefully the readers read the book.Probably those conversations made you think you were licking...

In fact, Assassin didn't mention important information at all, but I wrote it very carefully.It might be finished in an hour by someone else, but I changed it at least a few times to ensure that there are no loopholes.

Thinking about it carefully, the conversations between the protagonist and Tohsaka Rin are actually the master and slaves pitting each other.As a result, while the protagonist cheated Tohsaka Rin, he also cheated many people... Because they didn't look carefully, they thought the protagonist was licking...

After reading this volume, looking back at the previous chapters, do you feel that the protagonist is almost engraving the word betrayal on his face?

Wrong evaluation, resulting in readers not understanding.Maybe it's really a problem with my expressive ability, but I can't rise to the level that everyone can understand in a short time.

So starting from the third volume, I will not explain what is there and what is not.I started to try to get closer to the writing style of pov, rather than God's perspective.

I don't have much writing experience, and I don't know how to write that will make you guys happiest.

The ability of each volume has to be improved, and this volume is also the same. I found that my writing level has a qualitative improvement in a certain aspect.That is - chapter breaks are becoming more and more proficient.

I'm great, I look proud.

There will be some small loopholes when writing, please be more active and full.The brain is so big that I can't think it all in.

Many small bugs can be found, but I can't avoid them.Although I have been racking my brains for rationality, human beings have their limits.

I know there are many bugs, but it is usually difficult to find them without writing them out.As long as I don't bring it up, you didn't find out, so these BUGs are not BUGs, haha.

And sometimes there will be conflicts in the settings. It's not that I didn't do it, but that I was backstabbed by fungus creatures.

For example, Uncle B's Twelve Trials, I really didn't know it was cut... So when I wrote it, it was written according to the setting set - after the first kill, the same kind of attack is completely ineffective.

In short... I try to make myself eat books less frequently than fungi.At least it proves that humans are stronger than fungi.

There is also the FGO Chaldea that has always been concerned about. Many people want the protagonist to save Humanity... But the problem is, the author doesn't play FGO.It's very difficult for me to meet your request... fgo, who just entered the pit recently, has no time to watch the plot.How to enter fgo?

But... It is necessary to bury some pits, such as the interaction between Merlin and assassin, haha.And after the Apocalypse Noble Phantasm was activated, the burning Fuyuki City...was it a big hole?Ha ha

It is impossible for FGO to appear in the chapters of the main text.

Last but not least, there is Archer, that is, the information of White A.There is no need to issue character cards.All attributes are A.There are two treasures, namely

Victorious Summon (EX) Anti-Personal Noble Phantasm.Maximum catch 1.The effect is that no matter what action is taken, everything is 'win'.The same is true for knocking the berserker, because the archer must win.

PS: Uncle B in the old setting is Twelve Must Win.But archer is not twelve must wins, but an infinite number of must wins.This guy is an out-of-spec follower, a god-level existence.Its actual combat power is higher than Gilgamesh in my evaluation. Among the servants who can be summoned normally, only Enki, who is mad, can fight with him. (Actually, he himself is not a normal summoner)

Irreversible Judgment (EX) Noble Phantasm for Humans.Maximum catch? ? ?Announcing the coming of the doomsday to all life in the world is a judgment on the sins that flow in the blood of the human beings in the world.

Interlude pendant: QQ: XXXXXXXXX

Verification message: 'This is my Holy Grail'.

Note the 'battle', not 'war'.

Chapter 001 The Faceless Swordsman

This is an unconventional Holy Grail War.As the seven Masters became a united front, the rules changed accordingly.The Holy Grail will summon seven additional servants.In other words, this is a holy grail war between the red and black camps and a total of fourteen cavalry servants!

But this is far from over.The survivors still need to re-execute the procedure of the Holy Grail War.In other words, former teammates will become enemies... to compete for the only universal wishing machine.

In this way, the news from the Holy Grail continuously spread to his mind. In the dark space, he opened his eyes and saw new light.

Summoned by the master of the black side, he became the most dazzling star in the Holy Grail War, the most powerful class - saber!

Saber felt the surge of magic power surrounding him.He is not the only Servant manifesting at this moment, but one of the Four Riders.

The magic power constantly gushing out of his body filled almost every corner of his body.This magical power is so strong that it even surpasses Tohsaka Rin!

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