Madam, I Really Like You More.

"Sorry, my Chinese scores are not very good. But the meaning should be about the same."

"Not far."

While Hasegawa was casually chatting with Kato Megumi, a person came to Hasegawa: "Chang, Hasegawa, okay, long time no see."

"Hey, Hikigaya, long time no see, how was your summer vacation?" Hasegawa greeted Hikigaya Hachiman with a smile, and Hikigaya Hachiman was similar to last semester, still with the same dead fish eyes.However, although this guy took the initiative to say hello to Hasegawa, he still felt a little awkward.

"It's okay. Although I stayed at home throughout the summer vacation, and my parents only took Komachi on a family trip, but it's not bad for me. At least I wrote a volume of novel content during the summer vacation." Hikigaya Hachiman tilted his head, as if he didn't dare to meet Hasegawa's eyes, anyway, his clothes looked awkward.

Seeing Hikigaya Hachiman like this, Hasegawa felt a little speechless. In the last semester, Hikigaya Hachiman had dead fish eyes, but at least he didn't turn his head like this when he was talking.

Hasegawa didn't know, in fact, it was also because of him, Hasegawa suddenly became much more handsome than last semester.In the last semester, Hasegawa was at the level of Xiaoshuai at best, and at best he was not much better than Kigu Hachiman.So when facing Hasegawa, Hikiya Hachiman would not feel too inferior.But now, Hasegawa has suddenly turned into a handsome guy, and even transformed himself into a winner in life. He has been confessed by countless girls, and Hikigu Hachiman will never get it.

So at this time, when Hikigu Hachiman faced Hasegawa, he unconsciously lacked confidence.

If it wasn't for Bi Kegu Hachiman, he really didn't want to lose a friend, and at the same time, he wanted to ask Hasegawa, a best-selling author, for guidance with his novel.Of course, what Hikigu Hachiman thinks is that if there are no friends, there will be no more. Anyway, a person will be more free. The reason why he took the initiative to find Hasegawa is definitely just to get Hasegawa's advice.After all, the advice of a best-selling light novel author is not available to ordinary people. This is a rare opportunity. As for whether I really think so in my heart, that's another story.

"Hikigaya, you said you have already written one volume of your light novel? Can you let me read it?" Hasegawa was a little surprised, and then asked.

"Of course it's fine. However, it's my first time writing, and I don't have much knowledge and understanding of light novels, so, so writing may not be very good." Hikigu Hachiman looked relaxed He took a deep breath, and then spoke without much confidence.

"Don't worry, I understand. That's how I came here too, hurry up and let me see how you write." Hasegawa said with a smile.

"Here, here you are." Hikigu Hachiman handed the manuscript he had prepared to Hasegawa.

"The lonely brave man?" Hasegawa glanced at the title of the light novel written by Hikiya Hachiman, and couldn't help but smile.Although it is only a title, Hasegawa has a certain understanding of the tone of this book. Perhaps, the protagonist of this book, that is, the brave man, may be the protagonist created by Hikiya Hachiman based on himself.

Generally speaking, most of the first Virgos of light novel writers will substitute the protagonist into themselves, or substitute themselves into the protagonist.The protagonist's thoughts, or actions, will be based on himself.Moreover, Hikigu Hachiman, the guy himself, is relatively withdrawn, so the character of the protagonist in this book should be the same, the same withdrawn.

Gently flipping open the novel, Hasegawa began to read.At the same time, I have to say that Hikigu Hachiman's writing style is quite good. Although it is not as good as Hasegawa's writing skills, which has reached level four, it is only slightly worse than Kasumigaoka Shiwa.Hasegawa didn't expect Bikiya Hachiman's writing to be so good. However, although Bikiya Hachiman's writing is excellent, it is inevitable that it is a little weak in terms of character setting and plot.

Of course, the content written by Hikigu Hachiman can be regarded as a little bit interesting.

It stands to reason that if it is at this level, it should have met the requirements for publication.It's just that Hasegawa is still a little uncertain.

Because, Hasegawa discovered that there is no heroine in this light novel, no, it should be said that there seems to be no relatively outstanding women. In a light novel, there are not many excellent female characters, even supporting actresses. , it seems that they are very rare, and there is even no chance of appearing at all.

Even if one or two female characters appear occasionally, most of them pass by in a flash.

How should I put it, Hasegawa doesn't know how to evaluate this novel.The story is not bad, and the plot arrangement is reasonable, although it is a bit old-fashioned. It is a Japanese high school student who travels to another world and becomes a brave man, and bears the fate of defeating the devil.

But, but ah.The protagonists of Hikigu's book are all acting alone, and there are not even any outstanding women joining the team of brave men.

Look at other light novels, regardless of whether the story is good or not, at least there will definitely be some excellent heroines or supporting actresses.Even if it is a light novel with a single heroine, there will definitely be no shortage of portrayals of the heroine. However, in Hikiya Hachiman's novels, it can even be said that there is no heroine at all.

Hasegawa put down the manuscript in his hand, and looked at Hikigaya Hachiman strangely.

"Uh, that, Hasegawa, you, what do you think, what do you think of my writing?" Hikiya Hachiman looked at Hasegawa after reading it, and felt a little uneasy.

"Hikigu, have you been hurt emotionally?" Hasegawa couldn't help asking.

"Oh? No, no, no. I, how could I be hurt emotionally, no." Hikigu Hachiman shook his head hastily.

"Since there is no such thing, then why is there no heroine in your novel? Not even a better woman?"

"Well, light novels, also, didn't say that there must be a heroine in the story. Besides, female characters and so on, I always feel that they don't seem to be useful. And women are super troublesome, I don't write Female characters, that's to reduce trouble." Hikigu Hachiman said plausibly.

Hearing Hikigaya Hachiman's words, Hasegawa wanted to laugh a little: "Hikigaya, to be honest, I haven't seen a light novel like yours. After all, the heroine in the light novel is definitely a highlight, and The interaction between the heroine and heroine is another highlight. Now, your novel doesn’t even have a heroine. Compared with other novels, it’s already much less interesting. So, I think, You, can you change it? Even if you only add an excellent heroine?"

"But, girl, it's really troublesome." Hikigu Hachiman muttered.

"Anyway, if I were an editor, what you wrote will definitely not pass on my side, unless you can work hard to improve your writing and make the story better and more interesting." Hasegawa shrugged, Give Hiki Valley Hachiman such an answer.

Speaking of the heroine, Hasegawa read some online novels in his last life, like some masters with particularly good writing skills, no, it should be said that they are masters with very high writing skills. The writing skills may not be very good, but the content of the writing is very good. Very hot-blooded, especially those that tend to be fantasy, the main line is to upgrade and kill monsters, so the portrayal of female characters is not very brilliant, but even so, there will be a few female characters, even if they are only supporting roles, even if the heroine After only a few episodes, the god disappeared, but that is also there, but here in Hiki Valley Hachiman, there is no such thing at all.

"Do you want to improve your writing skills? Sure enough, writing light novels is not so easy, I will work hard." Hikigu Hachiman nodded seriously.

"..." Hasegawa.

Chapter 44 Game production department?

"I said, haven't you considered adding a heroine? Your current writing level is not bad. As long as you add a heroine whose personality is not annoying, you can fully meet the requirements for publication." Long Tanigawa couldn't help but said to Hikigu Hachiman.

"I haven't thought about it, I haven't thought about it at all. After all, girls are really troublesome." Hikigu Hachiman shook his head resolutely.

"Student Hikigu, I feel that what you said is a bit too much." Megumi Kato hadn't opened his mouth all this time, but at this moment he finally couldn't help it, and said one more sentence.

"Oh? You, you, why are you here?" Hikigu Hachiman was taken aback.

"She's been here all the time, but you didn't notice." Hasegawa couldn't help but smile when he saw Hikigaya Hachiman's startled look.

"Um, yes, I'm sorry. I, I didn't pay attention." Hikigu Hachiman's eyes flickered, and he didn't dare to look at Kato Megumi at all.

"It's okay, I'm used to this kind of situation. But, Hikiya, haven't you communicated with girls before?"

"Why, how is it possible? How could it be possible that I haven't communicated with girls. I, I, of course I have communicated with girls. Although most of the time it is the class representative who collects homework, or he calls me on duty when he is on duty. But, but, this is also for communication." Hikigu Hachiman said with a particularly guilty conscience.

Hasegawa and Kato Megumi looked at Hikigaya Hachiman with pity. Is this the only guy?Sure enough, there is no communication with girls at all, how pitiful.

"Hey, hey, Hasegawa, don't look at me with such eyes, it will make me feel really pitiful." Hikigu Hachiman couldn't help shouting to Hasegawa after seeing Hasegawa's eyes.

"Don't you think you are really pitiful?" Hasegawa wanted to laugh.

"No, definitely not."

"Well, I haven't communicated with girls, so what about your family, you said you have a younger sister, right?"

"Of course there is a younger sister, and Komachi is the best girl in the world. If it wasn't because she is my younger sister——Hasegawa, wouldn't you be trying to catch my sister's attention? Let me tell you, this is impossible Yes." Hikigu Hachiman suddenly looked at Hasegawa with super vigilance, this guy, from the original salted fish, suddenly became a super girl control.