My Boss, the White-haired Nun

Hmm... The following content only represents my personal opinion. I am not saying that the original author's writing is not good or not as good as mine. After all, it is always easier to criticize than to write something out.In fact, the original author's handling of many things is beyond my reach.

But the problem is the problem, and if it should be better in other places, the problem does not exist.

First of all, there is a problem with Otto's personality.

To be honest, I really spent a lot of effort to complete the character design of Otto in this volume, even more effort than writing a separate volume, which is why I said before that I think this chapter is actually A reason worth the charge.

In this volume, the character Otto is actually a villain for the sake of being a villain.

In the original setting, all the materials obtained from the previous era of the Moonlight Throne were translated by "Norwegians", and the Norwegians belonged to Otto.

In other words, what Nancy Plank cited as her trump card was actually what Otto let them control.

And in the end, Otto suddenly transforms, kills the "Norwegian" and leads to a fight with Walter - why would he kill him?All this is the situation he arranged.

And the phrase that Walter shouted, "This is the day that devours the tyrant of heaven"

Whether Otto is a tyrant or not, aside from this question, what I want to say is that in anti-entropy visual novels, especially for Walter, he is not qualified to say that Otto is a tyrant.

Really, I'm not picking nitpicks, there are really many logical problems in anti-entropy visual novels.

The section about Otto and Walter's face-to-face meeting in the bathhouse.In fact, there is a problem with Otto's own character design.A very embarrassing question. Otto has always been obsessed with Kallen's nobility, but in fact, Otto was too paranoid when answering this question in the plot. To what extent is he paranoid?

So paranoid that even Kallen herself doesn't meet this standard.

I will leave aside the question of which is more in line with the definition of greatness, between those who walk among wise men, those who enable them to develop their talents, and those who are wise themselves.

What I want to say is that if Otto is not great, then his problem must lie in his own personality, which is also admitted in the original text.But if Ruge said that the definition of greatness is to allow wise people to develop their talents, it is considered great...

Isn't that what Otto did?

In other words, according to this standard, Otto himself is great, and Karen is just a naive little girl.

Then, on to Walter.

I’m not trying to blame Otto, what he did is indeed there, but the charm of Otto’s character is that he never lies, is extremely sincere, and he is tolerant to everyone, but when you and When his plans go against him, he is more ruthless than anyone else.

In fact, the most charming character in the story of Benghuai is this character. He seems to be the bishop of destiny, worshiped by thousands of people, and the protagonist group is persecuted by his forces.In fact, he is the loneliest person in his heart, with the most incompatible standpoint. What he has to do is to stand on the opposite side of the whole world.

People who are still chasing the game plot should have discovered this problem.

His ending is almost inevitable rebellion.

But only on the point of Walter, in the plot, Walter rejected him without hesitation, which I think is incorrect.

Let me not talk about the impact of being the "only" partner on Walter during those three years. It is simply Otto's position at this moment, and there is nothing contrary to Walter.

In the original work, it's not that Otto didn't want to study him as a living herrscher, but he was sure that he couldn't research anything and he was sure that the other party was a herrscher (in the original work, Otto himself said that it was easier for him to live a herrscher than him. In the case of five hundred years,), it was Otto who spared his life and did not kill him, and it was Otto who wanted to train him to take his place.It is precisely because of Otto's choice that he is qualified to talk about life.

If you want to refute me, think about Higokumaru from the last era.

It is impossible for Otto not to know that Otto will eventually embark on a path of rebellion.Cultivating Walter is actually his kindness to the world. After his story is over, someone can lead what he left behind on the road to fight against Honkai.

I think of a sentence in Otto's diary in Teresa's Eternal Reincarnation.

Before my goal is achieved, I will cultivate Honkai.to accomplish my purpose, and then kill him.

Many people have overlooked a problem. It's not that Otto doesn't fight against Honkai, it's just that he has something more important to him than fighting against Honkai.

To be honest, when I was silent when Otto was rejected by Walter, and when I asked in a daze, "Did I say something wrong?", I felt a little distressed.

What is there about Walter who was born in Berlin in the original work, has he experienced suffering?Ever been to war?Have you experienced the loss of a loved one?Have you ever experienced incomprehension from others?

No, nothing.It's just that when he wakes up, he is a Herrscher, so he is favored, and the souls collected before becoming a Herrscher are noble, and he discovered the truth of the world by relying on the clues left by his predecessors. Because of Planck's cousin, he fell in love with him at first sight, and he won the victory by eating, playing and playing with Bubble Girl, although he was sacrificed in the end (no way, he died before the plot of the anti-entropy visual novel started. The game was earlier The event set him dead.) But it is enough.

Tsk, it's another story in which the main character relies on the super powers that fell from the sky to defeat the villain who worked hard and had a firm goal.

No way, benevolent.

I said, at least you can describe his psychological growth with your heart, okay?

I have a reasonable explanation for this.I really vomited blood.

As for how I explain it.

Tomorrow's update will tell.

All I want to say is that I really don't want to write fanfics anymore.

Especially this kind of original work is something that this author writes a little bit, and that author writes a little bit, and finally puts it together in a mess, all of which have contradictions and need to explain logic by eating books.

I won't say anymore, hehe, it's five o'clock.

I will rest for a while, get up tomorrow and code another chapter with [-] characters.

The Double Eleven update is [-] words, and four of the six chapters are free, which should be worthy of you.

The manuscript fee for the four chapters is usually my income for four full days... Forget it, let's treat it as a red envelope for everyone.

I wish you all a happy holiday.

Chapter 192 If you are naked, you should do what you should do, such as killing people - Otto

"Crack."

Suddenly, with a soft bang, the light in the bathroom suddenly went out, and the whole room was plunged into darkness.

"Well... more than ten years have passed since the World War. Is the electricity in the suburbs of New York still only at this level?" Otto's helpless words came into Walter's ears, slightly calming his anxiety caused by the sudden darkness. Become panicky.