Scum Coercion

Just looking at the title, I was shocked.

Originally, I was thinking that such a long paragraph might actually be the first paragraph of the main text, or it might be the outline, but this paragraph has already added the title of the book, no matter how you look at it, it is the title of the book.

And Xue Li, who was questioned by me in a surprised tone, just tilted her head as if it was a matter of course.

"In order to let readers know that my novel has all the popular elements in the market, I mixed the elements into the novel."

The name of Sydney's novel is "Originally the leader of the martial arts, I changed my sex and fell into a different world with my cohabiting fiancee. I lost the devil in a second and upgraded to LV9999. After I found out that the sister of the blood clan is a magic girl apostle, so I decided to open a harem with the maid Lolita. comprehension

So strong!It really mixed the elements of popular novels on the market into the title.

If you think about it this way, the content is probably mixed with these complicated elements.

Although I wanted to praise her very much, I shook my eyelids and didn't know what to do.

After wanting to kneel down and worship her for a moment, I was immediately motivated by the desire to complain in my chest.

"Hey, hey, your title is really very problematic!"

"Eeeeeeeee? Isn't this written according to the request of the senior? And Xue Li actually thinks it's good..."

"No, no, this problem is too big. The titles of light novels are getting longer and longer, because the industry has a leader like you... no, it's a guide like me."

Halfway through the talk, I found that Sydney kept curling up as if she had shrunk, and her big watery eyes were about to ooze tears. As a result, my heart softened and I could only point the finger at myself.

"Senior..."

"The title is too long, and the website won't allow you to serialize it, so you need to modify it."

"OK……"

She obediently followed my advice, so far so good.

"I'll talk about the title later, let me read the text now."

Having said that, I began to read the content of the novel with relish.

Although there are only three chapters, it is true that although the sparrow is small, it has all internal organs, and the content unexpectedly fits the title very well.

The male protagonist who is the leader of the martial arts was attacked by a mysterious person one day, and then fell into a different world to start the road of pretending to be coercive. Then his cohabiting fiancee also came to the different world together, and found that this world has a hierarchy. The protagonist relies on His own martial arts kills the demon king with a single blow and becomes the world's top existence with a level of 9999. Then a blood girl who claims to be the protagonist's sister appears in this world, and everyone decides to embark on the road of adventure.

As for the absence of maids, loli, and comprehension, I guess it is because there is not enough space, and they should still appear later.

"Senior... um...how did my novel go?"

Seeing my serious expression, Xueli, who was nervously crossing her legs together like a maid and crossing her hands in front of her, made a weak questioning sound as if she was worried that I would be dissatisfied.

Because she seemed to care too much about my evaluation, she even tilted her body slightly downwards, her fragrant and soft female body was almost touching me, but she kept an excellent distance.It's a good thing that she made her long hair, which is about the distance of the shawl, into balls, otherwise the hanging hair would probably further erode my heart, making me tear off the burden of idols and then...

"Ahem, generally speaking, there is a passing mark. But how should I put it... It turns out that this is the effect of mixing too messy elements together, not the imaginary 1 plus 1 is greater than 2, and there are countless 1 clips Together it becomes minus 100."

"Wow? Negative score? Isn't that the end?"

Hearing that I accidentally said what was in my heart, Xueli's face changed drastically, almost as if she was about to cry.

"Oh sorry, that's not what I meant!"

I could only comfort her when I found out that I had made a slip of the tongue, and then talked a little bit about the advantages of this article.

"This novel is not as useless as I imagined. At least the writing is not bad, and the characters are very vivid."

"Hey, is that so?"

There were tears in the corners of her eyes, and when the tears were about to flow down, my words stopped the teardrop.

And I nodded again and again.

"Actually, your writing is pretty good, so don't worry. With this writing style, you can do well in everything. The foundation for future counterattacks is so solid, so you don't have to worry about not being able to write good articles."

"Yes, it is so."

Sydney quickly wiped the corners of her eyes, then looked at me like a cub waiting to be fed.

That pitiful look does indeed inspire pity, and I realized it all too well.

This girl is not as simple as imagined... No, she has a poor weapon that she didn't even realize.

Thinking of this, I couldn't help but speak to Sydney.

"I want to ask you something."

"Ah."

"You said you have no friends, so will someone bully you?"

"Uh...it doesn't seem to be...Although there are occasional scary gangsters or people from the Spice Girls group who come to scold me, they suddenly left after a while."

Her eyes fluttered, she put on a thoughtful expression, and finally gave me this answer.

really……

I can even imagine that scene.

The lonely and frustrated girl was cornered by female gangsters. Everyone wanted to bully her, but before they could do anything, they were forced to do so by the negative energy and pitiful aura she radiated from her body, and finally walked away bored.

In other words, the girl in Sydney is full of problems, so it is far from enough to change all of this and improve her writing skills. The direction of finding friends by writing novels is even more wrong.She should be turned into a vitality girl first.

But this problem is also very tricky. Ability and personality are almost the relationship between the chicken and the egg. I don’t know which side to start with.