Ten Sabers Together Can't Save You

That is the novel that Yukinoshita classmate lent him, called Love Metronome.

"So, it's really okay to recommend novels that spread dog food to people who are broken in love?" Guinevell said as he poured himself a glass of wine.Burned it with magic power and drank it down.

It was a parting gift from Shuten and Ibaraki.A wine gourd filled with endless liquor.Probably because he hopes that Guinevell can think of people when he sees things, and he will think of them when he sees wine.

The taste is the same as the wine tasted in Dajiangshan before, as sweet and delicious as the tender skin of two young ghosts.

"Ah, ah."

Serving wine with books, Guinevell was entertaining the literati.

If only the book in hand wasn't a second-rate romance novel.

It's really inexplicable.This kind of mediocre book with no merits can be published?Having just experienced a poignant love story—Gurneywell, who is also the leading actor, always feels that the existence of this book is an insult to love.

——Yes, Guinevere is not ignorant of normal love.The two young people have a good impression of each other, and then walk together naturally, stumbling along the way, maybe making some jokes, and most of them will quarrel and get awkward.

This kind of sweet and sour feeling can also make people feel the breath of youth, and people can't help feeling "ah, ah. It's good to be young" or something.

But this love metronome doesn't have that feeling.

After finishing the book at the fastest speed, Guinevere turned on the computer and finished the second volume of the online library version at the fastest speed.Then I opened the author's blog and left a message:

"I have seen the latest content. Although the writing style of this book is passable, there is nothing else worthy of praise except the writing style.

All the plots of the stories in this book are the plots of the old love novels, which are arranged and combined in a new way.In terms of character and character characteristics, there is no innovation.

This book is called "Love Metronome", if it is evaluated by newcomers and new books, it can be regarded as an above-average work.But compared with many romance novels in the market, this book has no competitiveness.

I can see the author's hard work in this book.But effort alone is not enough.If the story continues to develop in such a flat way, then I speculate that this book will be cut in half within three volumes.After all, the rules of the industry are very strict.

But even so, I hope that the author, Teacher Xia Shizi, will not be discouraged.As a newcomer and new work, the first book can be published, which is already a very remarkable achievement.Teacher Xia Shizi still has a lot of room for improvement.If you continue to work hard, you will definitely have a good result.

Of course, I said 'if you keep trying'. "

After finishing a long comment, Guinevell pressed the Enter key.Then stretched.

Since it is reading, we must be serious and responsible.Write a good evaluation, not flattering or poisonous, and sincerely help the author improve.Guinevere did what was normal for him, and got ready for bed.

However at this time.

"Ding Dong".The computer beeped.

"Xia Shizi" has sent you a private chat invitation.

After subconsciously clicking on it, it said: "So, Mr. Critic. If you were me, how would you write this book well?"

……

ps, heroic spirits are not followers.Not subject to class control, Mother Artoria has the holy gun and holy sword.And so on later.

Author's message:

Update la la la, 4 more completed.In this way, only 2 chapters are owed, and the bounty will be added to complete it!

Chapter 9 saves the girl's soul

"If I were you, I would try to enrich myself."

Although he was already very sleepy, and the little animal kept rubbing against his pant legs.Meow, meow, as if to say: "Sleep, sleep, hurry up and sleep with someone~".

But Gurneywell still did not fall asleep, but chose to discuss the plot with the girl whose pen name is Xia Shizi.

It can be heard that the teacher Xia Shizi was not too convinced at the beginning.Even if she admits in her heart that what Guinevere said is right and what Guinevere said makes sense, she is still upset.

After all, the vast majority of people will not be broad-minded enough to fully accept the other party's opinions and admit their own shortcomings.

Especially when the proposer is a stranger.Especially especially now that it is not face-to-face.but on the web.

According to Unreliable Research, the chance of convincing a stranger online is as high as [-] percent.It can be seen that people in today's society have a high moral level, a peaceful mind, and a broad mind.

So with the support of such a high probability, it is a matter of course for Guinevere to rely on his sincerity, tireless attitude, and solid basic skills to persuade the other party.

Of course, there is also a little credit for Gurneywell's revealing of his other identity, the famous illustrator "White Knight".

After all, although the illustrator is not a colleague or an editor, he can barely be regarded as a member of the industry.Qualified for discussion.

As for why Gurneywell is a famous illustrator, ID White Knight.That's another story.It is not discussed here.

In short, everyone just needs to know that Gurnieville is a famous illustrator. In terms of industry status, the senior illustrator White Knight is much higher than the street novelist Xia Shizi who has just debuted for a few days.

Since you are a senior, what is more important is that he is for your own good.Then you have to listen carefully.Otherwise, it is disrespectful to the elderly.If the news gets out, it will be suppressed by the industry.At that time, the already precarious status in the arena will definitely drop significantly.

Teacher Xia Shizi, who understood this truth, lamented secretly that she was really asking for trouble, and at the same time tried her best to deal with Guinevere.

After my mother said: "It's very late, go to bed quickly." After that, Teacher Xia Shizi agreed: "Yes, I got it!"Then he muttered: "Put him two or three words first, and send him away quickly."

However, half an hour later.

Teacher Xia Shizi: "Well, um... what this guy said makes sense."

Another hour later.

Teacher Xia Shizi: "Oh, oh, so can this be changed here?"

After an hour and a half...

Teacher Xia Shizi: "It turns out that love novels still have this kind of show operation!"