I, the Outflow of God, the Wall-breaker of the Reborn Heroines

'Appreciate the evaluation of novels...? '

This is nothing unusual, and it happened in the original plot as well.

If there is anything worth caring about, it is that Chuliu Shenzuo feels that this episode is too slow. Although the real time seems to have only been about a week, Chuliu Shenzuo feels that what happened in this week is enough to write eighty Youth with more than [-] characters plus a slightly mysterious daily novel.

As a result, the plot line that should have appeared first has been dragged to the present, and even the incident of Totsuka Saika is much earlier than him, although the time difference is only less than a week.

Or does the appearance of this plot line mean that a new storm has already begun?

"Xueyu, now you are the head of the 'Serving Department', although I don't know if Miss Hirashita has taught you experience, but she probably doesn't have much experience herself, after all, she just received her first commission recently, And it is still unknown whether it will be completed or not.”

"Well, let's not mention this for now, but no matter what, you will be the head of our 'Serving Department' for quite a while, and it is better for you to lead the next things... Well, don't be nervous, me and The group will help you well."

After roughly reading the novel handed over by Zaimuza Yoshiki at a glance, but for Kamizuru, he has basically taken this novel into his mind for analysis and evaluation, and then he handed it to himself. The god Zuo Xueyu, who looked at the original manuscript of the novel in his hand with great interest, also made the other party stunned.

"Huh? Dad...brother, even Xueyu can't accept such a wordless novel."

Holding the novel handed over by Kamizuru, Kazuru Yukiha watched it carefully, pouted her mouth in dissatisfaction, and published True and brutal review...

"This novel doesn't even use punctuation marks well in many places, and the protagonist even turns male and female, Xueyu can't accept it at all~!"

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"Dad...Brother, look at the punctuation marks here. The male protagonist clearly asked the female protagonist if you had eaten, but in the end they used three exclamation marks. This is completely incomprehensible to Xueyu. Could it be that the female protagonist Is it important to have a meal, does it need to be so important?"

"Well, here Xueyu can still think that the hero cares about the heroine, caring about the heroine to the point that even if the heroine eats a meal, she attaches great importance to it. If this is the case, then Xueyu can not only understand, but also envy and hate, but Xue Yu really can't understand the subsequent plot..."

"This novel also said that the hero is a tall, mighty, eight-foot-tall macho, but later on, in order to sneak into other people's bases, the hero turned into a weak 'little loli' after wearing women's clothing and black silk Is it? The other Xueyu in this plot don’t complain, but just complain about this, could this be me, the legendary women’s clothing boss?”

"Others, such as more punctuation marks are often used incorrectly, or are often omitted, or various settings before and after the plot, the muscular male protagonist turns into a weak little loli 'heroine' from time to time. These Xueyu are temporarily Ignore, just say the last point..."

"Who can tell me why the hero finally looked in the mirror and found himself so beautiful in the mirror, so he killed himself in the end? Who can tell Xueyu...why in this plot?"

Speaking of this, the god Zuo Xueyu ignored the constant wailing, and at the end Yoshiki Saikiza lay on the table with a dead face and trembling body, rather speechlessly put the draft of the novel in his hand that she couldn't complain about on the table, expressing resentment His eyes watched the outflow of the seat of God.

"...Don't look at me like that. I didn't write that novel. If you want to complain, you are going to the creator himself."

Shenzuo's impression of being out of the world is the same as that of Shenzuo Xueyu, but he doesn't want to talk at all after reading the novel.

"Also, Xueyu, you are the head of our 'Serving Department'. This is also your responsibility, and it is also something you have to face and deal with. I also want to know how you will deal with it. How do you feel about it? ? How do you feel about the elaborate creation of this fantasy swordsman general?"

After thinking for a while, Shen Zuo Xueyu replied with some hesitation: "I think, as a novice, this novel is already good. Although it has not yet reached the level where others can read it, at least it has written the whole line clearly." the plot of the novel."

"Although even the punctuation marks are used incorrectly, the heroine or the hero can be played by the protagonist alone, the image of the hero is ever-changing, and even the protagonist at the end looks in the mirror and dies of narcissism, these Xueyu don't know what to do Make complaints."

"Well, indeed, even for a newcomer novelist, writing like this is really amazing. Even if I have read countless novels, I don't know what to say." Shenzuo Chuliu nodded and commented vaguely .

"Wuga~!?" Saikiza Yoshiki, who buried his head on the table as if he had no face to face others, let out a strange cry.

Yuigahama Yui couldn't bear seeing Saikiza Yoshiki's appearance, so she quickly kindly encouraged him: "General Jianhao, right? Humanly speaking, your novels are indeed a little insufficient."

"But in the eyes of others, the novels of General Jianhao are still very powerful. At least they can't write novels, they can't even think of them, but you can write them. Although the plot is completely incomprehensible, I don't know what your novel is about..."

"However, people think that the protagonist at the end of the novel looks beautiful in the mirror. This plot is very novel~! This is the first time I have seen such a novel way of death of the protagonist and the ending of the novel~!"

"..." But obviously, Yuigahama Yui's encouragement did not bring joy to Zaikiza Yoshiki, but instead made him fall into an autistic salty fish mode.

"...Well, President, did I say something wrong?"

Seeing the gray and white statue of Zaikiza Yoshiki who seemed to have lost hope in life, Yuigahama Yui cautiously asked Kamizu Shiru in a low voice like a child who made a mistake.

"No, you didn't say anything wrong, your words are already very gentle, it's just that his mental capacity is too weak."

This is not because Kazuru saw that Yoshiki Zaikiza was a stranger he met for the first time, and he favored Hihama Yui and Kazuha Yukiha as his acquaintances who had known him for a longer time, but it was the fact.

From the beginning to the end, their words didn't mean to be harsh or malicious, but they were very pertinent and even took into account Yoshiki Saakiza's young and fragile heart, showing the words in the least sharp part.

And they all agreed that if they spoke too nicely and praised Zaimokiza Yoshiki as if he were a genius author, the other party would be overwhelmed immediately and couldn't find the east, west, north and south, so they tried not to harsh words to describe the other party's novel Tell your shortcomings.

"..."

But looking at Zaimuza Yoshiki's appearance of "don't listen, don't listen, bastard chant sutras", sinking into his own fantasy, intending to isolate all their goodwill, Shenzuo Chuliu could only sigh helplessly.

Yukinoshita, Yukinoshita, if you were here at this time, you would definitely not care about this guy who can't see reality clearly and is immersed in his own beautiful fantasy. To be more blunt, tear apart the other party's fantasy and tell the other party the cruel reality, right?

If it was me not long ago, I would indeed take the same approach as you, but now, I don’t want to become a great teacher to help others by self-destructing, getting others’ bad feelings, or even hurting myself. I just want to Seek advantages and avoid disadvantages, and then try to see if you can help others without causing trouble, so...

"Well, don't pay too much attention to what we just said, maybe it's just because we saw that Yoshiki Saikiza, you have the talent to write novels, and you can write such wonderful novels, so I deliberately said it out of envy and hatred A nasty sarcasm."

"So... so that's the case? I knew that my swordsman general's talent is always so envied by others, hahahahahaha~!"

The hypocritical words of consolation from God Zuo made Zaimuza Yoshiki heal instantly, and even made him get overjoyed immediately, but the next sentence of God Zuo Xueyu sent him into the ice cave again...

"Huh~? Is that so? But the composition I wrote casually when I was young is much better than this novel, I don't know how much better, brother?"

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"...Okay, that's it, Mr. Saikiza Yoshiki, you take your wonderful work back, and then please try to cherish it and even protect it. If someone sees you, you have such a wonderful work at a young age. If you are a talent that others are jealous of, others may destroy your work in a fit of anger."

Ignoring Kazuo Yukiha's childlike innocence, full of truth but unexpectedly heartbreaking words, Kazuru handed back the unsightly manuscript of the novel in his hand to Zaimoki Yoshiki.

"Is...really? That's right. After all, my talent is something that countless people envy, envy, and dream of, but they can't get it. It's normal for me to be like this. I understand. Thank you, Mr. President, for your help. Then I will be rude and leave now!"

Saying such unconvincing words that are neither modern nor ancient, Yoshiki Zaikiza also ignored the good intentions of Yuzuha Kazuha, and cherished his so-called "genius work" like a treasure. In the middle, and then cautiously, looking left and right quickly left the 'serving department'.

"... Odo... Oni-chan, why are you making such a fuss? People with a little bit of brains will dismiss such rubbish novels, and what you said just now, Oni-chan, will only make that middle school two The sick fat man is addicted to his ridiculous fantasy, and he doesn't realize how much he is..."

"I didn't lie, I just stated my opinion on it in an ironic way, but now it seems that the other party didn't hear it at all, or even if he heard it, he would forcibly change it under his poor self-esteem. Envy of his own 'amazing talents'?"