The Two-dimensional Life of the Traveler is So Salty

However, the story of "Love Metronome" was denied, and the follow-up plot was asked to be revised or even cut in half. Such a thing is completely unacceptable!

It's not just her debut work, she doesn't care if it's her debut work or not, but "Love Metronome" is different, Sayuka is different, Sayuka, she is the projection of Kasumigaoka Shiwa herself in that world .

The metronome of love is a story that happened in the city she was born in. Although everything except the background of the story and Sayuka is her fiction, it is different. I don't care!

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, she has never been like a young girl, almost a direct leap from a young girl, her knowledge, her wisdom, her rationality, her maturity...

Since saying goodbye to the childishness of her childhood, she has become a girl in her age and has actually almost matured like an adult, and she is still growing.

Even Machida Sonoko, who is already in her thirties and has been in the workplace for more than ten years, and even grew up to be the deputy editor-in-chief of a well-known light novel library in the industry, even if she occasionally confronts her, Kasumigaoka Shiwa is never a loser It's going to be a hit!

Even, she can occasionally win the battle from her in a fair manner, not just about light novels, but also on many other things...

However, even if she is like this, even if she can't see it at all in the past so many years, even if her appearance is very strange, but, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, she still has a girlish heart hidden!

Even if she has never been discovered by anyone, even if she has never realized it, the girlish heart that can be described as blind is real.

Her girlish heart, Kasumigaoka Shiwa's fantasies about girls, were all unconsciously instilled into Sayuka by her!

That is her, she is Sayuka.

When she typed the last word of the first volume, and when the last symbol of the first volume was modified and confirmed, Kasumigaoka Shiyu already had such a clear understanding.

Therefore, it is unacceptable, absolutely unacceptable, how could Sayuka's story end like that, how could Kasumigaoka Shiwa's pride be shattered because of money!

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu can't accept it, and she can't accept it. However, even if she chooses to fight, even if she fights again and again, what she faces is failure after failure. The second volume of "Love Metronome" is like this The situation is revised again and again or even reinvented.

After working hard again and again, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's pride seemed to be really about to be shattered, but she still gritted her teeth and insisted not to give up!

Chapter 435: The Redemption of Senior Sister

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Xiazhiqiu Shiyu is not only facing failures again and again, but also the pressure she puts on her. She is unwilling to accept reality and confronts reality time and time again, but in fact, even she herself knows that she is in that state of mind How bad is the novel created below.

However, this is the last chance. Will the third volume be cut in half? The final judgment will be based on the sales and word-of-mouth after the release of the second volume. In fact, word-of-mouth is not that important compared to .

No, absolutely not, this is the determination that Kasumigaoka Shiwa made for herself. For this reason, she has made many demands on herself, even Machida Sonoko. She asked her responsible editor to use the strictest attitude, the strictest With the strictest standards and the harshest vision, she does everything possible to treat her works.

We must ensure the quality and sales volume of the second volume, we must have enough confidence!

However, it wasn't just the things she faced that changed, it wasn't just her stress that changed, it wasn't just her schedule that was chaotic, but most importantly, her almost thwarted pride, almost shattered confidence, was completely Exhausted inspiration...

What should I do?

Even if Machida Sonoko is staring at the pressure and postpones the deadline again and again, even if she spends more time on the structure of the plot and the actual creation, even if she tries every means, whether it is reading the material or going back She collected materials from that city, and even searched for all the comments related to her works on the Internet as a reference...

Not only confidence, but even her pride is almost shattered. The former Kasumigaoka Shiu would never deliberately modify the plot to please the readers. She would watch other people's evaluations rationally and be able to objectively Treating other people's opinions will never affect her subjective consciousness, unless those opinions really convince her deeply, unless those opinions make her approve from the bottom of her heart, otherwise, Sayuka's story will only come from Kasumi. Qiu Shiyu's subjective thoughts.

But, no, if you keep insisting, Sayuka's story will come to an end...

Absolutely don't, don't let Sayuka's love story end inexplicably like that...

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu can no longer hold on, no, after so long, after so many failures, she can only hold on to what she wants to hold on to the most, in fact, she can give up temporarily on everything.

Even if, even she knew it in her heart, if she really persisted until the end because of that, when she wrote the last word of the last volume, when she wrote the final ending of the story, no matter what was gained at that time Praise or scolding, no matter whether it was "Love Metronome" or Xia Shizi at that time, what kind of ending will it be?

In any case, at that time, she, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, would definitely cry bitterly, right?

Yes, knowing this, knowing that the story she really wants in her heart will be destroyed by herself, but she still has to do this!

Even if Sayuka fails, no matter how bad the process and ending of the first love are, it must end from the beginning to the end!

Even if it is a defeated dog, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu will also let out her own mourning.

Knowing that there will be such a bad ending, she doesn't want to be interrupted in the middle, and she doesn't want to be destroyed to pieces. The space in three volumes is definitely not enough. The love story she wants should not end like that with limited time and space!

The first love may always be a memory of failure, but she also hopes that it will be a "good" ending produced by her own failure instead of any other restrictions after experiencing everything she thought.

However, even if it is such a humble idea, Kasumigaoka Shiyu can't do it, even if it is the simplest plot and writing that is obviously the same but can be popular, Kasumigaoka Shiyu can't write it!

He had clearly smashed his pride, but he couldn't even grab the chance to make her humble.

What a painful memory, how unspeakably dark, Kasumigaoka Shiyu didn't even know how to describe himself during that period, the self who lingered in the apartment and school...

At a loss, at a loss, I don't know what to do anymore, except to put pressure on myself, to vent my temper, just like any time in the past...

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu has always been alone, she is so dark, living alone in such a dark world...

But, no, she saw the dawn, and she caught the light shining on her face through countless dark curtains. Although it was faint, it was real warmth.

Sonoko Machida, that old maid who has never been in a relationship in her thirties, but still has the face to tease herself with "a girl's love fantasy"...

It's her, although she hasn't said it all the time, but she is very clear about her concern for herself. She is very clear that the only person who can help Xia Shizi at this time is Xiazhiqiu Shiyu herself, so except when reviewing manuscripts, besides thinking After trying her best to help her delay the deadline, Machida Sonoko never interfered with her.

What Kasumigaoka Shiyu is facing is no longer the failure of "Love Metronome". Machida Sonoko knows this very well, but she can't help anything. The only person who can change all this is Xia Shizi, the proud Only the confident Kasumigaoka Shiwa can do it!

However, it was different. The original manuscript she got that day was absolutely different. It was obviously the first work after the transformation, but Machida Sonoko easily discovered its far superior quality. More importantly, she felt I have seen the emotions in it, and most importantly, the real characters that can be seen through the words.

Sayuka, Xia Shizi!

Saya, Eromana!

Brother, Masamune Izumi!

What a great coincidence, what a suitable reference, although she knew that this was a violation of the regulations, and might cause her to lose her job, or even more serious consequences, but Machida Sonoko still had no hesitation, not only because Kasumigaoka Shiwa and the former The similarity of her friends is also because she has already had a strong feeling for her.

No matter whether she agrees or refuses, Sonoko Machida will absolutely show the original manuscript of "The Cutest Sister in the World" to Kasumigaoka Shiwa!

No matter what, she absolutely wants Xia Shizi to communicate with Izumi Masamune!

So, in order not to put too much pressure on Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, she didn't dare to go to the door, and she came with the original manuscript that might make her lose her job and make her climb to the top after more than ten years of struggle.

Machida Sonoko knocked on the door, woke up the dazed Kasumigaoka Shiwa, put the printed manuscript that still smelled like ink in front of her, forced her to read it carefully, and then shot the dawn light into her heart ...

That's what a responsible editor, a friend is supposed to do, isn't it?

Author's message:

ps: In chapter 56, many people questioned the author's logic, and this chapter is the response...

Chapter 436: Sick? ?

In the boundless darkness and the unbearable sense of suffocation, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu felt like a piece of dead wood without sound, struggling feebly, but calming down in vain.

I can't remember how long I haven't slept, I don't know what I ate last time, I feel helpless inside, as if the whole world is so cold.

Perhaps, this is what a drowning person feels like?

However, that kind of luck saw the dawn before completely closing your eyes and giving up, and grasped the straw before completely sinking.

The dawn named "The Cutest Sister in the World", and the straw named Masamune Izumi.

His writing style is not very good, at least Kasumigaoka Shiyu is sure that her works are much better than his in terms of literary talent, the only thing that should be her own may be the commercial elements in it, although she didn't care about it before... …

However, those are not important, the writing style or sales volume are irrelevant, what is important is the content and the emotions contained in the content, although it is just a simple typescript, even if there are no illustrations, they are all lifelike The characters seem to be alive in front of her eyes...

There may be many better authors than him, and there may be many more brilliant works than this one, but he and his works are the only ones that give her the feeling, resonate with her, and make her feel as if her own world suddenly brightens.

Being saved, it's obviously just a light novel that may not even be called first-class, but Kasumigaoka Shiu feels that she has been saved by it, and the most important thing is, from it, she can see her true self so clearly. Shadows can clearly discover what they originally wanted to present in the text.

It was an extremely warm, super long love letter that she loved, but was a little jealous and a little hated!

This is a sincere confession written by an older brother to his younger sister, isn't this the same as her original idea?

Although there is no one to confess to, although she does not know the feeling of being in love, although she does not have any experience and experience, Kasumigaoka Shiwa originally wanted Sayuka to have such a heartbeat, to let her have such an experience, to let her have Has a period of experience made her experience a lot with the person she likes?

Even if you are single, you still have to write about your sweet love and feed more people dog food!

Even if she doesn't want to admit it, this is indeed one of Kasumigaoka Shiwa's original thoughts...

How fitting, what kind of coincidence and tacit understanding is that pervert who stretched out his claws to his sister?

Perhaps, only such a pervert can have such a sense of resonance with him. No matter what his appearance is, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu has a lot of darkness in his heart!

Masamune Izumi...

After reading it for the first time, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu has already seen the deep malice behind this work. He obviously feels like he hasn’t eaten for a long time, but his stomach is very full, and he is even full of anger and nausea. Damn man!

However, it was the hateful behavior of such a hateful pervert that made Kasumigaoka Shiyu's heart jump with joy.

To communicate and write with him, I am extremely looking forward to it. She has a lot of things she wants to say to him, including those that make her happy, excited, and of course the uncomfortable and disgusting. The previous pressure seems to be in a very short time. Time just fades away...

However, those joys dissipated quickly, and they were left hanging day by day without any response, and the depression and tension from the past returned.

He obviously brought her the dawn, but he seemed to abandon her very quickly. The life-saving straw that was once held by her seemed to be being dragged back by him.

Tension, depression, irritability, panic, dissatisfaction...

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu is very aware that the backlog of negative emotions on her body is getting more and more, but she has nothing to do, except to refresh again and again, except to hope to see through...

As for taking the initiative to contact him, or even take the initiative to find him?

Of course Xiazhiqiu Shiyu thought about such a thing, but it was just thinking about it, and the little pride she had left did not allow her to make such a move.

It's hard to imagine, if when she stood at the door of his house, but what she got was that the other party didn't want to communicate with her at all, what would she look like in the face of such a blow?

Didi's notification sound, the contact person named Izumi Masamune, a bright smile in an instant.

The original upset seemed to disappear in an instant. Seeing the long-awaited friend request, Kasumigaoka Shiwa stood up and cheered, and immediately agreed to the request, then sat on the chair and clicked on the chat window.

However, all she got was silence, and there was no response from the extremely quiet room. Then, the violence and darkness that could no longer be suppressed enveloped her whole body and mind, until she vented it all at once through her hands and keyboard...

Blackening, complete blackening, as if to vent all the negative emotions accumulated these days to that bastard, Kasumigaoka Shiwa's exhausted inspiration poured out again, although all the transformed words were written by the pen name Izumi Masaru Zong's "method of death".

(For details, you can go back and read the first acquaintance between the hero and the senior from Chapter 56!)

I don't know why, maybe it's because all the bad things were stuffed into him, Kasumigaoka Shiyu felt much lighter both physically and mentally, and even, it seemed that some of the lost pride had been regained, even if those prides were just Built in her own imagination, but what does that matter?

Masamune Izumi is special, not because he's in front of her at her lowest point, or because she gets something from him, or because she likes that impossible reason, but, by no means There is no doubt that he is very special in her heart, at least, this is the first opposite sex to enter her heart besides family members.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu didn't like him, she was very clear about this, if she really liked him, the hero of "Love Metronome" would definitely take his shadow in the second volume, but, obviously, Naoto It was still so blurry, Sayuka might be able to see his face clearly, but Kasumigaoka Shiwa couldn't see anything at all.

However, Ye Zheng is different, different from the boys she has come into contact with in the past so many years, although she has never been in contact with a few boys.

It's not because of his neglect of her, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu has never had the character of M, whether it is playing hard to get or reverse strategy, it has no effect on her.

However, he is really different. With the increase in the number of contacts between the two, he who obviously has no intersection, and who obviously has a bad relationship, why can he affect the story she wove?

After revising again and again, however, the straight person in the third volume has the feeling that she hates more and more!