The Two-dimensional Life of the Traveler is So Salty

Wugeng Liuli was a little hesitant in her words. When she learned of his identity as a light novel writer, it's not that she didn't think about using his help to improve the shortcomings in her novels. Maybe if she was lucky, she might make her debut.

But such thoughts were dismissed by her as soon as they emerged. She didn't want her relationship with her to be mixed with other things. Although this might just be her own unfounded worry, she knew that he would probably help her.

That's not what she wanted to see, so she didn't even have the idea of ​​asking him to comment on her novel, and she didn't even mention these things after that time, even though it might cause the two of them to lose some common topics.

"Liuli, you..."

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ps: Liuli, why do you have no breasts?

ps2: Yes, keep going, change it to official ghosts, make complaints...

ps3: I posted about the plot with my senior sister last time, and now I have a new point of view. I replied in the pinned post, the 8.21 ones

ps4: Book friend group number: 470683737, password to enter the group: Xianyu

Chapter 120: So, She Decided

"Liuli, do you want to read it? Someone else's novel."

Ye Zheng asked, although she never mentioned it, but through the matter of Cai Muzuo, he also wanted to read her novel. What is the reason why it has not been published successfully?

Especially when he discovered Yukinoshita's professionalism in judging novels, he believed that even if he couldn't help much, Yukinoshita would definitely be able to point out some problems.

"I've read all of senior's novels except the unpublished ones, so senior is referring to the commission, is that okay? Show other people the novels commissioned by others."

Wugeng Liuli was a little moved, not only because she could discover her own problems through unpublished novels, but also because she could have more conversation topics with him.

"Of course there is no problem. It would be even better if you can express your own feelings. After all, his commission is to hope that someone can read his novels and tell him his feelings and provide opinions."

"That's it, what other people think."

Looking at the girl who lowered her head in thought, combined with what he knew about her, Ye Zheng could easily imagine that the girl Wugeng Liuli should be the same as Cai Muzuo. She didn't let the people around her read her novels before, but directly read her novels. Published on the web.

"Yes, although more people can see it by posting it on the Internet, a large part of the opinions on the Internet have no reference value.

According to the content of the novel, there are too few people who objectively put forward reasonable and well-founded conclusions, and more evaluations are based on their own preferences and emotions, and it is likely to be the amplification and catharsis of a certain idea. "

"Senior's serious words, just want me not to feel uncomfortable because of some comments on the Internet, really, idiot..."

Wugeng Liuli pursed her lips and said with a smile, if she hadn't noticed it at the beginning, how could she not hear his concern now? Although it has been a while since he vented his grievances, he still remembers his pressure .

"Looking at you, Liuli, I feel relieved. In fact, I just don't want the future well-known light novel writer to die before he debuts~"

"Senior has really high expectations of me! I really don't know where your confidence comes from!"

Wu Geng Liuli pursed her lips and gave the boy opposite her a disdainful look. Even if it was comfort and encouragement, such confidence was too exaggerated.

"Because Liuli has all the factors needed for success at first glance..."

Playful tone and disdainful white eyes, I have to say, the contrast that Wugeng Liuli reveals from time to time is very pleasing, at least Ye Zheng has forgotten the distance he told himself at the beginning, and the relaxed conversation atmosphere between the two has resumed .

"for example?"

Wugeng Liuli's eyes are full of undisguised curiosity. She has almost regarded writing novels as her own interest, and no longer insists on successful publication. Although she will still participate in the contribution, she is not as expected as she was at the beginning.

"For example, the second disease, every patient with the second disease is a potential light novel writer~"

"Baka be careful to curse and kill you, Senior Hundan!!"

The face was flushed again, Wu Geng Liuli uttered cruel words, but the shyness mixed in made this threat not lethal at all, but rather cute?

"No, no, no... I'm not making fun of you, how can you write a light novel if you're not in middle school!"

"Although your words seem very serious, I still reject this kind of statement. I am not a second-year-old child..."

So is this your focus?What happened to the second illness?A young man is in vain!

Although, the person in front of him is indeed not just a teenager, but there is no doubt that he is a middle school girl!He didn't even admit it.

"Hi~ hi~ hi~ Liuli is not a second-year-old child~ the client of the novel I want to show you is a second-year-old student..."

Without directly expressing the complaints in his heart, Ye Zheng took out the novel written by Cai Muzuo from his schoolbag. Although he had never read her novels, they both suffered from secondary illness, so there should be some similarities in their novels Happening.

"Hmph~ wait a minute, seniors also need to read my novels, wait for me..."

Wugeng Liuli didn't want to just take the novel home to read, in order to increase some time for the two of them to spend alone, it seemed necessary to go home.

Although I know very well that my novel may not be liked by people, it doesn't matter if it is the person in front of me, even if I criticize myself, I can accept it.

"Hey~ hey~ go and get the glass, I'll get some snacks to eat later..."

He didn't reject the proposal, reading novels is a very daily way of leisure for Ye Zheng.

... ... The dividing line of the famous detective Wu Geng Hinata ... ...

"Hmph, Sister Liuli has gone somewhere..."

Wu Geng Hinata brought his younger sister Zhuxi back home, and found her sister's schoolbag in the living room, and at a glance, she knew that she went out as soon as she got home. This is not the first time that such a situation has happened recently.

"Xiaozhu, you have to stay at home obediently, this time I must dig out Sister Liuli's 'boyfriend'!"

Wu Geng Ri was high-spirited, and was not discouraged by the previous failures. As a younger sister, she was heartbroken about Sister Liuli's lifelong event.

"Oh~ Onee-sama's boyfriend, I want to help too, can you, sister Hinata?"

Wu Geng Zhuxi raised her head and looked at her sister with wide eyes. She cared about her elder sister no less than her second sister Hinata, but it was difficult for her to express it with actions under normal circumstances.

"No, my sister is going to follow Sister Liuli this time, and you will be easily spotted with me..."

Wu Geng Hinata refused without hesitation, even though her sister showed that cute and foul expression, her pitiful big eyes were full of grievances.

"Anyway, it's not enough, good boy, after I find out, I will definitely bring you with me next time, okay..."

Wu Geng Hinata hugged his lovely younger sister, stroking her soft short hair with one hand, although it is cruel to reject her younger sister, but a small indifference can lead to great chaos!In comparison, following Sister Liuli is more urgent.

"Xiaozhu wait at home obediently, I'll go to the room to change the equipment first! For sister Liuli's lifelong happiness! Be obedient!"

"Okay, I get it now……"

Although the urge to go is still very strong in my heart, in the end, my well-behaved and obedient self defeated the eager heart.

ten minutes later……

"Xiao Zhu, did any guests come just now?"

On the fifth watch, he changed his school uniform and put on a very ordinary sportswear. He also put down his hair tied into two bunches and stuffed it into a peaked cap.

"Well, Sister Liuli just came back and left again..."

"Nani!"

Looking at her sister who has become loveless in an instant, Wu Gengzhuxi is hesitating whether to tell her,...

Author's message:

ps: Zhuxi Wugeng was hesitating whether to tell her, sister Liuli confessed to herself, she wanted Lily + German orthopedics!

ps2: Book friend group number: 470683737, password to enter the group: Xianyu

Chapter 121: Page 200 and Sagiri

It was already dark, and Wugeng Liuli had left to return home not long ago. After all, both he and she still needed to cook and prepare dinner, so it was impossible to read novels too late.

Wugeng Liuli brought him many drafts of novels, after all, accumulated over the years, and he chose to read the latest one, which is the second creation of "maschera" written by her, she really likes it that animation.

The introduction part is concise and clear: After the final demon king of the first part of Maschera - "Night Demon Queen" was killed by the protagonist "Darkness", he kept the original memory and returned to the time point of the first episode.

Then he possesses the dead girl character in the animation, and approaches the male protagonist as an ordinary girl.

According to the routine of the previous Tianchao web articles, it is the rebirth of the strong. Although it is an old-fashioned setting, it is still very attractive when written well.

The biggest problem in Liuli's novel is the 200-page setting book information book.That's right, it can almost be regarded as the thickness of a published novel, but it is entirely for the interpretation of original terms in that novel.

If you don't read this book first, the content of the story is basically incomprehensible. Relying on your super memory to scan it roughly before reading it, Ye Zheng found that he could only understand more than half of it. He guessed based on the context and couldn't understand it. That part should be understandable after knowing the original work, after all, this is a doujinshi.

Moreover, no matter how she denies it, Wu Geng Liuli is undoubtedly a highly poisoned secondary disease!All kinds of incomprehensible expressions next to each move in the novel, Zaimoza's secondary level is not as exaggerated as yours!

Although one is based on real historical figures, and the other is based on characters that appear in animations, but in terms of the level of detail set in the middle two, Zaimokiza's setting of "Ashikaga Yoshiki" is almost completely defeated by Liuli's "Night Demon Queen" .

Awesome, my neighbor: Five Watches, Fallen Saint, Black Cat, Liuli.

………………

"kindness--"

Hequan Sagiri couldn't feel happy no matter what, not only because of his hunger, but also because his brother delayed cooking, and the reason was that he was reading a novel with the stealing cat next door!

To let your favorite cute little sister starve because of stealing cats, such a big brother is really too bad!

Hiding at the corner of the stairs and the living room and peeking out, although my brother had already entered the kitchen to prepare dinner, Izumi Sagiri didn't feel happy because of it.

Obviously there is such a lovely younger sister, and this younger sister also likes light novels, why don't you read novels with me, instead leave poor younger sister and stay with other girls.

"Idiot...Idiot...Idiot...Big Idiot...Nissan is a Big Idiot..."

At first it was just chanting silently in my heart, but in the end, even Sagiri's very weak voice reached Ye Zheng's ears because of her anger.

Sagiri, who was better after hiding at the stairs and scolded, was not careful, but turned around and ran to the room at her not-so-fast speed.

Although Sagiri was trembling when she walked out of the room, as if she might fall at any moment, when she ran back to the room, she didn't look unstable at all, but walked upstairs quickly.

When Ye Zheng heard Sagiri's voice, he thought it was an illusion at first. After all, the impression that Sagiri never left the room when someone was at home had already been deeply embedded in his mind.

It wasn't until the sound of footsteps going upstairs that Ye Zheng realized that it was really Sagiri's voice.

Recalling what Sagiri said before, he must make up his mind and work hard to be able to walk out of the room. He doesn't know where he seems to be making his sister unhappy again.

"However, Sagiri is really amazing, she can actually walk out of the room!"

Didn't know that my sister's big jealousy was overturned again, Ye Zheng was just proud of Sagiri's behavior, the super squatting sister actually wanted to walk out of the room!

This is the Sagiri who once said, "I think I'll lose if I walk out of the room"!

At this time, he simply thought that the sound just now should be the sound made by Sagiri practicing walking out of the room.

Putting Sagiri's dinner at the door, he didn't think it was strange that there was no response after knocking on the door. He had never understood the changing pattern of Sagiri's mood, and he had no way of knowing what kind of conditions she would open the door on. .

At this time, Izumi Sagiri was lying on the bed sullenly, holding her poor octopus pillow in her arms. Today, she didn't trample on it because she was upset, maybe because she was angry and hungry.