One Second for My Daughter / One Second for My Daughter

According to the subject matter of the novel written by Zaimuza, it is about the combat of college supernatural powers.The undercurrent of the world is surging, and then an ordinary boy who can be seen everywhere suddenly awakens his hidden ability and knocks them down cracklingly. This is such a gorgeous story.

However, there are many proper nouns with unclear meanings.Fall into clichéd character settings.Blind self-promotion.This guy really committed countless author taboos as soon as he came up.

If Shiwa's writing level is 6 points, Zaimuza's writing level is probably less than 2 or 3 points.The level difference is really too big.Not on a level at all.

"I want to take this to participate in the next newcomer award. Before that, can I ask my best friends to read it for me and give me some suggestions?"

Wu Shen hesitated for a moment, because judging from his rich experience, this light novel was basically hopeless, and Wu Shen was pessimistic about the possibility of Zaimokza winning the award.It would be a miracle if this kind of light novel could be published.But Wu Shen didn't want to dampen the opponent's enthusiasm so quickly.

The more novice you are, the more often you will be beaten to pieces. If you are a little weaker, you may never give up trying to write again.

Wu Shen originally planned to reject it directly, so as to avoid hitting Zai Muzuo with his comments.But holding the manuscript in his hand, Wu Shen suddenly had an idea.

Why don't you take this manuscript to the service department as a test product, and let Shi Yu and Yukino comment on it?Wu

Shin has been worrying about the future while discussing Shiwa's second volume novel.

At that time, what if Xue Nai and Shi Yu disagreed.

Now there are experimental products that can test their actions first, and can also help Zai Muzao relay two more comments, why not do it?

Although it must be a venomous comment with an extremely sharp concept.

Because in my impression, Zai Muzao doesn't seem to be good at talking to girls, so Wu Shen decided not to let him meet Shiwa and the others directly, and just let Wu Shen be the relay station.

And there is another advantage of keeping it secret. If these three friends know that they can get in touch with Shi Yu and Yukino every day, and the relationship is not bad, if they accidentally arouse the soul of their FFF group, give yourself A meal in Aruba is not good.

"A light novel? I've wanted to review it a long time ago."

Lun also touched the black-rimmed glasses, and said impatiently.

"As a well-known light novel review blogger, I am looking forward to Lun Ye's evaluation!"

Cai Muzuo seems to be quite similar to Lun Ye's carefree personality.

"Although I'm still staying up late to browse online game materials recently, I will spare some time to watch them."

Yingqi belongs to the kind of guy who thinks about his friends.Although his schedule was tight, he still couldn't bear to refuse his friend's request.

"I'll take a look too."

Wu Shen held the typed manuscript, "By the way, Cai Muzuo, do you have any other extra copies of the novel?"

"Because I was worried about some accidents, I made three or four extra copies. What's the matter?"

As he spoke, Zaimuza took out a stack of bound and thick copies from his backpack, "It happens that I know some friends who write light novels, if you don't mind, I can take a few copies for them to read for you. By the way, please evaluate."

Wu Shen proposed.

"Really, really?"

Hearing the news, Zai Muzuo pressed Wu Shen's shoulders excitedly, "You are so considerate of me, you really are my best friend! Take all the rest!"

"Well... just don't be overwhelmed by the vicious comments. Come on, Zaimoza."

Wu Shen patted him on the shoulder without saying anything, but simply gave him an "encouraging" look.

At the same time, in Wu Shen's home, Wu Yi, Yu Yin, and Ye Ge were sitting together.

"What's the matter calling me here?"

Yuyin asked curiously.

"Of course it happened last night. You haven't forgotten it, have you? Although your elder brother was attracted attention because of the quarrel between your sisters and temporarily forgot about it. But in case elder brother remembers anytime, we will Don't you still suffer?"

Wu Yi patted the table, looking like a leader.

As the loli leader, Wu Yi has everything ready, except for a pair of black-rimmed glasses.

"The book is made with my brother as the main character, and with such a small eye, if my brother finds out, it will really be over."

Wu Yi twitched her lips, "That's why in order to solve the crisis, I will call everyone to hold an emergency combat meeting!"

Can the matter of scholars be called tearing up tickets?

Asking for a monthly ticket~~I feel like I will be kicked out of the list at any time orz

Chapter 154

"Ah... that is indeed a problem."

After hearing what Mai Yi said, Yuyin finally realized the seriousness of the situation.

Because all morning, she was thinking about the plan to let her mother attack her father, but she ignored the matter of making a small book.

"So what are we going to do now? Isn't the meeting started yet?"

Yuyin asked eagerly.

"Don't worry, there is still a member of the production team who hasn't come yet."

As Wu Yi said, she took out the mobile phone Wu Shen bought and shook it, "I called her about half an hour ago, and it should be here soon."

But as soon as she finished speaking, there was a knock on the door: "Wu Yi, I'm here~~" "Is this voice Yueyin?"

Yuyin froze for a moment, and immediately realized that it was Yueyin's voice.For various reasons, Yuyin should be the most concerned about Yueyin.

When they opened the door, what appeared in front of them was Yueyin who appeared to be well behaved, wearing a lace dress, white children's pantyhose on her lower body, and little red leather shoes on her little feet.