One Second for My Daughter / One Second for My Daughter

"Shh."

The two lolis walked over to call Zhenbai, but they were stopped by Wu Shen.

"Don't disturb Zhenbai yet, let's take a peek at Zhenbai's manga later."

Wu Shen noticed the folder next to the bed that contained the manga that he had shown to the editor before, so he took it into his hand and started to read it slowly.

During the process of flipping through, Wu Shen's eyes were admiring at first, but turned into a puzzled expression before turning two pages, then full of suspicion, then his expression became a little subtle, and then he frowned.

After reading everything, Wu Shen breathed a sigh of relief, showing a look of sudden realization.

No wonder the editor in charge said it was unqualified, it turned out that there were so many flaws.Wu Shen couldn't help sighing.

How did Zhenbai Miku become a manga artist!

There are no more words, now we are collecting good poems Ov0, by the way, ask for votes orz

Chapter 485 Mysterious Person YY

Wu Shen personally looked at the stories created by Zhenbai, and found that although the style of painting was not the same as before, the eye-catching narrative could not even pass the grade, and it even seemed a bit unclear.

"Wu Shen?"

Hearing the familiar call, Wu Shen turned his attention away from the comics.

"Really, are you done?"

"Just finished a new draft."

Really nodded.

Only when Zhenbai's work comes to an end, will she be so concentrated that she doesn't care about everything around her that she will be relieved.

Obviously, after finishing a page of sketches, Zhenbai noticed Wu Shen, Wuyi, and Yege who suddenly appeared in the room.

"Wu Shen, can you teleport?"

"Huh? Teleport?"

Wu Shen raised his head with a look of hatred.

He could teleport, but he didn't dare to use it under the supervision of Neon Zi, because if he was not careful, he might be abducted.

What made Wu Shen even more puzzled was that he had never told Zhenbai about it. How did Zhenbai know that he would teleport?

"Yeah, every time I take a short rest, I will see Wu Shen suddenly appear in my room."

"Idiot, what is this called teleportation? It's purely because you were so concentrated that you didn't notice me coming in. Otherwise, wouldn't Wuyi and Yege also teleport according to what you said?"

As Wu Shen said, Wu Yi and Ye Ge, who had been secretly hiding in the corner, jumped out as if echoing what Wu Shen said.

"Sister Zhenbai! We're here to see you!"

Wu Yi poked her head out from behind Wu Shen.

"Mom, hug!"

"Daughter, hug!"

"I'll give you a hug too... Cough, let's talk about it when we come back."

Wu Shen originally spread his arms to join in the fun, but when he saw Wu Yi's jealous expression, he took a step back.

Ye Ge walked up directly and sat on Zhenbai's lap.

"Can Wuyi and Yege also teleport? I really want to learn." I said that this is not teleportation at all. "

Wu Shen covered his face and held his forehead, and sighed softly.

teleport?nonexistent!

"Speaking of which, does Wu Shen often read comics?" Zhenbai looked at the sketch in Wu Shen's hand, blinked, thought of something, and said suddenly.

"Manga, I've read quite a lot. How about it, do you want me to help you with some suggestions?"

Wu Shen said while shaking the sketch in his hand.

"All ears."

Zhenbai nodded, looking very serious.

Wu Shen originally came here with the idea of ​​helping Zhenbai, so he didn't dare to be careless, so he immediately opened the drawing.

"Actually, when you were drawing just now, I have already read this manga. How should I put it, it feels a little subtle..."

"subtle?"

"Yeah, Ju Xiaojing doesn't have any logic at all, and she's always been straightforward. It's understandable if it's warm and bland, but look at this passage of Ju Xiaojing..."

As Wu Shen said, he spread the drawing on the table and showed Zhenbai with his fingers.

"The hero and heroine have lived a lifetime of Suwei, and they greeted each other when they met for the first time."

Wu Shen began to describe the plot of the comic.

"Ah."

Really nodded.