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"Well, it's almost finished. Do you want to read it?" Upon hearing this, Yi Qing thought of the previous request from the other party.

"Let's talk about it later. Didn't you mean... you pointed me out before? I wrote something the night before yesterday, do you want to read it?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was still a little dissatisfied, but it was indeed Yi Qing who pointed her out before, which must be admitted .

And when she went back that night, she also chatted with the editor on the Internet, but the editor praised Yi Qing's thinking, saying that he had an unconstrained understanding of the portrayal of the heroine.

"So, you should listen to that person's words carefully, it may be helpful for you to write."

After the editor said so, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu couldn't help but feel depressed for a while, and couldn't accept it. qiushu.cc

As a result, the night before yesterday, she finished writing with great enthusiasm, and after she was satisfied, Yi Qing was nowhere to be seen the next day. She even went to the classroom office to ask Harada Shi, the head teacher, but the strange eyes of the other party made her feel uncomfortable.

Must have been misunderstood!

"Let me see." Yi Qing said speechlessly.

After all that has been said, is the purpose still the same?

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu took out the printed "Love Metronome" manuscript from the table and handed it to Yi Qing.

Putting the schoolbag away, he casually took the manuscript, propped his chin with one hand, shook the manuscript, and read it.This look of indifference made Xiazhiqiu Shiyu grit his teeth, but he didn't say anything.

After all, there is something to be asked of Yi Qing.

"Why did you write so little?" There was only one page more than the manuscript I showed him the day before yesterday.

The other party has been stuck for so long. According to normal circumstances, after this kind of stuck state is released, generally speaking, it is impossible to think like urine for a while... bah... spring, but it is not enough to just write page.

If you look closely, there are not even two thousand words.With this amount of updates, do you have to write until the Year of the Monkey?

And this is still a light novel. The so-called light novel actually has the same effect as the Huaxia web novel.

If you really want to distinguish between the two types.

One is a novel with illustrations, and the other is a novel without illustrations.

So in Yi Qing's eyes, there is actually no difference between the two, and light novels are just a bit taller, because there are illustrations after all.

However, no matter what kind of novel it is, in addition to traditional literature and youth literature, the amount of updates is an unavoidable topic.

Yi Qing understands that Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu wants to write a high-quality novel, but when you write a thousand words in two days, when will you write it?

"Look first!" Hearing Yi Qing's complaint, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu raised her eyebrows slightly, and subconsciously shook her flawless legs wrapped in black silk.

The guy didn't even look at it and started bashing her.

Ignoring Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's tone, Yi Qing began to read again.

He didn't continue to watch it, because he watched some two days ago, and he almost forgot about the plot.

Of course, with the support of bits and pieces of memory, he saw very quickly in front of him, almost seeing ten lines at a glance.After reaching the last page, Yi Qing still had ten lines at a glance.

Yes, it's still ten lines at a glance.

After reading it, Yi Qing remained expressionless, which made Xiazhiqiu Shiyu feel emotional.

Yi Qing arranged the manuscript pages and handed them to Xiazhiqiu Shiyu.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu nervously took over the manuscript, although she was dissatisfied with Yi Qing, but she also knew that the other party's understanding of the novel must be higher than hers.

So Xiazhiqiu Shiyu held his breath at this moment, his legs stopped shaking, and his expression became slightly solemn.

"Just now... I read your manuscript in two states." Yi Qing frowned slightly, pointing to the manuscript in the other party's hand, "One is read from the perspective of the author, and the other is read from the perspective of the reader."

"Is there any difference between these two states?" Apparently, this is the first time Kasumigaoka Shiyu heard that there are two states in reading novels.

Nodding, Yi Qing said: "Of course, reading from the author's perspective is to strictly check, find out the shortcomings of the novel, and then let you correct it.

But reading from the reader’s state is basically not too strict. For readers, their purpose of reading novels is nothing more than to find the refreshing feeling, moving, passion or inspiration of the text.

Every reader has a different emphasis on reading a book, but every reader does not have too high a requirement for a book, and what they want is to be able to read it.

And if they can keep them reading, then the initial stage of a novel is successful. "

"Then what about my book?" Hearing this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's heart tightened, with a bad premonition.

"Change, overhaul! You don't need to change the previous one, just change what you wrote later." Although Yi Qing didn't want to say it, but Yi Qing also knew that Xiazhiqiu Shiyu didn't want a lie, and the other party obviously loved literature very much.

Then Yi Qing will not show mercy.

Wind and rain...to see the rainbow.

"Why? The heroine's character I set was written according to what you said." With her lips tightly pursed, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was very puzzled, because she felt very satisfied.

"There is no problem with the heroine's character, it's the plot!" Yi Qing shook her head, thinking of the plot she had just seen, raised her forehead and said, "It's too vulgar! The hero saves the beauty, what a vulgar plot it is. And such a plot Writing about your hero's character will collapse!"

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu opened her mouth, but before she could speak, Yi Qing continued: "You set the character of the hero to be gentle and indecisive, so he can't be too strong in terms of character, so I think If he wanted to save the beauty, he would definitely hesitate.

As soon as you write that the protagonist hears a female voice calling for help, he rushes to save people without hesitation?Without hesitation?Could it be that if it was a man, he would not be saved?

Of course, it is a pretty good character to muster up the courage to stop the gangsters, but there are ninety-nine light novels with this kind of plot in a hundred light novels. You want to write a boutique, this kind of vulgar blood The scenario is obviously unnecessary. "

Lightly opening her pink lips and opening them slightly, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu found that she couldn't refute, and finally choked out a sentence: "Then how should I change it?"

"Reverse! Mei saves the bear..."

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