2d Empire

And wanting to write the heroine well, this term is too broad.

Thinking of this, Yi Qing said: "There is no bright spot in your beginning, and the hero's character is relatively routine. You should really start with the heroine."

What Yi Qing said was the truth. Although the hero was described in detail at the beginning, what impressed him deeply was that the hero was ordinary in appearance, gentle and gentle in character, and indecisive.

This kind of personality is too common, and most of the male protagonists in light novels have this kind of personality.

And the male protagonist with this kind of personality is indeed a routine now, and generally appears in light novels of the Battle Academy school.Well, it's the type who claims to be the weakest, but is actually the strongest, and then pretends to flirt with girls.

So Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, who wanted to refute, didn't know how to speak, so he could only nod silently.Although she was writing a novel for the first time, she had read novels before, so she naturally knew that the character of the hero she wrote was very routine.

Therefore, the character of the heroine is needed to highlight the unique characteristics of the article.

After taking a look at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, it is obvious that the other party attaches great importance to the novel he wrote, and he really desperately hopes to get inspiration, otherwise, with the irritable temper yesterday, he might have spoken out again.

Yi Qing didn't bother to tease the other party either, but touched her chin, and said in thought: "If it is written in this way, then this novel will be very ordinary. But you are in this place, Kawen, obviously because you want to make the heroine stand out." . This situation is actually quite simple.”

"Easy?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's face remained unchanged when he heard the words, but his eyes flashed with disbelief.

But she didn't question it. Since the other party said so, there must be something to say next.

"That's right." Yi Qing knew that, as a proud outstanding student, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu definitely wanted to write an excellent novel, rather than being unknown, so she stopped at the length of the heroine's appearance. In fact, this is not counted. Calvin can only be regarded as having encountered a dilemma of thinking.

"If you want the whole article to be brilliant, your heroine's character must show a kind of tension, preferably different from the male protagonist's character, so that contradictions can be shown in daily life, and it can also pave the way for the female character who will appear in the future .” Touching the paper on the table, Yi Qing said lightly.

"Tension!?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's eyes lighted slightly, and a pair of clear eyes were fixed on Yi Qing. The thoughts in her mind suddenly became clear, but after that, her thoughts were still blank, which made her frustrated.

"Is there only one heroine in your outline?" Yi Qing asked suddenly.

There is a reason for asking this question. Nowadays, most light novels are routine and template-based. In order to be favored by publishing houses, most of them follow the harem style of the academy. That is to say, there are many heroines, plus different personalities. It attracts the nerds of the moment.

But Xiazhiqiu Shiyu is struggling with the character setting of the heroine, so there is obviously only one heroine at this stage.

"Yes!" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's eyes flashed, but he didn't expect the other party to be able to guess it.

This is a bit difficult, Yi Qing frowned slightly, and returned to the original topic. Although he analyzed so much, he still didn't help the other party solve the most basic problem, that is, how to solve the other party's heroine character.

If it is a harem style, then this is very easy to solve. Set up a bunch of heroines with different personalities, and let readers choose.

But there is only one in the early stage, and it is difficult to choose if you want to attract people.

Although it was still lunch break at this time, it was obvious that the class was approaching, and the students in the class were basically returning to their seats. Of course, many boys would secretly peep at Kasumigaoka Shiyu every day.

As a result, they were shocked to find that Yi Qing and Xiazhiqiu Shiyu were whispering secretly.

Of course, it's not really quiet, the two are communicating blatantly, but in their eyes, it has become like this.

And Yi Qing naturally didn't pay attention to this problem, and Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu didn't care about such small problems.

Suddenly, Yi Qing's eyes lit up, and he looked up and down Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, seeing the other party inexplicably.

"What kind of novel is yours?"

"Love light novel."

Although she was a little puzzled by Yi Qing's leap of thought, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu still answered seriously.

"Have you ever been in love?" Yi Qing asked.

"No." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu gave Yi Qing a strange look, "Is it necessary to be in love when writing a romance novel?"

"No, I'm just asking out of curiosity." Yi Qing also answered seriously.

These words made Xiazhiqiu Shiyu give Yi Qing a faint look, exuding a dangerous aura.

Suddenly, a standard Japanese class bell rang, making Yi Qing ready to tease the other party, and the desire to avenge yesterday's sweet sword dissipated.

"Actually, you can set your own character as the heroine's character!"

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On the way to Tokyo Disneyland by train, Yi Qing and Nan Qinli also understood why Xiao Bu got lost. txt download 80txt.com

When Sakura Shahi was shopping for clothes for Xiao Bu, the little guy kept getting hungry all the time. After trying on the clothes, he ran out directly while she was not paying attention.

Originally, this was fine, because Sakura Shahi also prepared a mobile phone for Xiao Bu, just to prevent this situation.

As a result, the phone was turned off when making the call, which was the aspect that made her anxious and dumbfounded.

So on the tram, when Sakura Shahi took out his mobile phone from the other party's small pocket, he looked at his mobile phone with a black screen, and said helplessly, "Xiao Bu, I remember your mobile phone's battery is full."

Every time she takes Xiaobu out of the house, she will fully charge the battery, so that when she goes out like today, if she loses it, she can call to find it.

"Xiao Bu doesn't know!" Shaking his head, Xiao Bu blinked his big eyes, expressing his ignorance.

"I probably put it in my pocket, and I accidentally touched the key and turned it off." Yi Qing couldn't help laughing, this kind of situation is also common.

Sakura Shahi nodded when she heard the words, and it was almost the same in her mind.

And Xiao Bu, who was being teased by Nan Qinli, grabbed the phone, looked at Yi Qing and the two cutely and asked, "What's the phone number of brother and sister?"

"Be sure to keep in touch with my sister in the future!" Hearing this, before Yi Qing could speak, Nan Qinli reported her mobile phone number.

Seeing this, Yi Qing reported Nan Qinli's cell phone number after Xiao Buan had memorized it.

Sakura Shahi saw it, and didn't stop it, but was very relieved.