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He picked up the manuscript drawn by the other party and watched it carefully.

Every time I look at Shiina Mashiro's paintings, Yi Qing feels as if he is looking at world masterpieces.

Obviously, these four drawings are amazing without exception, but this is a comic, so it is necessary to distinguish between the primary and the secondary.

Yi Qing read the four manuscripts very quickly.

There are no mistakes or omissions in the plot, or Zhenbai has shown almost all the plots of his novels.

Of course, there are only four sheets of drawing paper, so it's hard to say what happened next.

"Mashiro... There is one thing you have to change." Pointing to the background of the original manuscript, without waiting for Shiina Mashiro to speak, Yi Qing said, "Manga is a carrier that is very particular about primary and secondary, but your shortcoming is that you don't distinguish between primary and secondary. In other words, whether it is the background, the characters, or the supporting characters on the road, you draw too detailed, so that the male and female protagonists cannot be highlighted, and this will make the main characters secondary and marginalized...

So, the first thing you need to change is the background... And my novel is about the love of ordinary people, so the overall tone is mainly simple, and it doesn’t need to be too bright. The most important thing is not to show flowers like girl comics background, you have to keep that in mind..."

Yi Qing took four sheets of drawing paper, and explained to Shiina Mashiro one by one.

In terms of comics, he may not be qualified to guide Mashiro in his previous life, but he has accepted the memory of his previous life, acquired painting skills, and coupled with some theoretical experience he saw on the Internet when he was bored in his previous life, the combination of the two gave him a very profound experience. .

And Shiina Mashiro is still a beginner in manga, so it is extremely easy to teach.

After explaining some details and the shortcomings of Shiina Mashiro's painting style in detail, after the other party nodded, Yi Qing smiled and asked the other party to change it.

As for the details, Zhenbai did a very good job, basically there are no mistakes or omissions.

In other words, with the serious attitude of the other party, it is very difficult to miss paintings on characters and objects.

Of course, the sudden disappearance of the other party's comic pet dog before, it is probably because Zhenbai didn't care too much about the comic status of a pet dog.

Seeing that Zhenbai began to revise, Yi Qing began to think about the suspense comic contest.

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While thinking, Yi Qing opened the search tool and entered the Suspense Comic Contest.

Although an entry appeared, I looked at it slightly, and there was basically nothing wrong with what Ying Lili said.

Habitually tapping on the table lightly, Yi Qing looked pensive.

When it comes to suspense reasoning comics, two of them appeared in his mind almost instantly.

One is "Detective Conan" and the other is "Kindaichi Boy Case Book".

However, in this world, the "Kindaichi Case Book" has already appeared, so it is naturally impossible for him to copy it.

But "Detective Conan" has no shadow. Thinking of "Detective Conan", the biggest murderer in "Detective Conan", the elementary school student Reaper and the anti-Japanese hero Conan, Yi Qing couldn't help but smile knowingly.

This comic in the previous life was once a psychological shadow of many post-80s and post-90s generations.

There is no way, there are many cases in it, and the man in black with only two eyes exposed is really scary.

The animated version has added BGM, which is more exciting than watching comics.

However, after thinking about it for a while, Yi Qing gave up "Detective Conan". There is no reason, simply because "Detective Conan" is not finished yet, and it is too long!

A detective reasoning manga, the animation version has not finished until 837 episodes, and there are more than a dozen theatrical versions, the manga is not yet finished until 965 pictures, and even the main plot has not revealed too many clues, you can imagine this manga , How long will it be over.

For the Lifetime series, even Yi Qing doesn't know, can he wait until the end of Conan if he lives in this world until he dies?

I hope Teacher Aoyama can finish the painting before he dies!

With this in mind, Yi Qing picked up a pen and white paper and wrote two comics.

"Future Diary", "Another"...

The ball of the pen tapped the white paper lightly to form black dots, her eyes were fixed on the names of the two comics, but Yi Qing's attention was not here.

"Future Diary", this is a manga with an amazing setting, and after reading this manga, it is also called a masterpiece by most of the manga, but after thinking about it, Yi Qing still silently crossed it out...

Finally, when the line was about to cross the expanded dash, Yi Qing stopped.

Stopped on "Another", this "Stand-In" novel was adapted into comics, animation, and even a movie, which once caused a sensation.

"Another" grasps the so-called suspense very well, and it arouses the reader's appetite at the beginning. Under the extreme confusion, it slowly reveals and solves the puzzles, achieving the best sudden realization.

However... After a while, Yi Qing still silently crossed it out.

It is undeniable that whether it is the stunning setting and world view of "Future Diary", or the suspense at the beginning of "Another" and the various ways of death, they are all amazing.

No matter which one is presented in the eyes of readers, it will be a hit, even a sensation.

But... Yi Qing still crossed it out, because these two comics will be popular, sensational, and even memorable, but they cannot become phenomenal.

"Detective Conan" may have the ability to create phenomenal levels, but this manga is too long. It is composed of cases that cannot exist in reality, but it is convincing... But the progress of the main line is slow, even if it can create imaginative levels. The influence of the book also needs to be fermented, and it is a long story, so Yi Qing gave up on him.

Folding the paper in half, Yi Qing wrote another comic...or a series.

When the chilling cicadas cry! ! ——

When the Cicadas Cry is a fan AVG text adventure game produced by the Japanese fan club 07th-Expansion.

At the same time, "When Cicadas Cry", "Tsukihime" and "Touhou Project" are called the three miracles of the Japanese fandom.