2d Empire

"Why? The heroine's character I set was written according to what you said." With her lips tightly pursed, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu was very puzzled, because she felt very satisfied.

"There is no problem with the heroine's character, it's the plot!" Yi Qing shook her head, thinking of the plot she had just seen, raised her forehead and said, "It's too vulgar! The hero saves the beauty, what a vulgar plot it is. And such a plot Writing about your hero's character will collapse!"

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu opened her mouth, but before she could speak, Yi Qing continued: "You set the character of the hero to be gentle and indecisive, so he can't be too strong in terms of character, so I think If he wanted to save the beauty, he would definitely hesitate.

As soon as you write that the protagonist hears a female voice calling for help, he rushes to save people without hesitation?Without hesitation?Could it be that if it was a man, he would not be saved?

Of course, it is a pretty good character to muster up the courage to stop the gangsters, but there are ninety-nine light novels with this kind of plot in a hundred light novels. You want to write a boutique, this kind of vulgar blood The scenario is obviously unnecessary. "

Lightly opening her pink lips and opening them slightly, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu found that she couldn't refute, and finally choked out a sentence: "Then how should I change it?"

"Reverse! Mei saves the bear..."

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Chapter 79 You fall in love, I have no objection...

"Beauty saves the bear!"

When Yi Qing said these four words, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was originally nervous, but when he heard this, he pursed his pink lips and couldn't help showing a hint of a smile.

"What's so funny!" Yi Qing nodded seriously at the table.

Seeing this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu snorted softly, but also sat up straight.

After all, she was asking Yi Qing for advice, so the other party's status was that of a teacher, and she naturally couldn't belittle the emphasis on her own work.

Yi Qing nodded in satisfaction. This guy had filthed him to pieces when he just transferred to another school. Now is the time to seize the opportunity to take revenge, but what he said about the other party's works was not wrong.

Heroes saving beauty is a beautiful topic in itself.

There are extraordinary romances at all times and in all over the world.

But by the time modern novels became popular, hero saving the beauty had become synonymous with dog blood.

Whether it's Chinese web novels or Japanese light novels, it seems that they can't escape this cliché.

But Yi Qing also knew that this was the general trend.

Because web novels, like light novels, are fast-paced.And the author wants to speed up the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine, and let their feelings heat up, the basic method is the hero to save the beauty.

Then it led to the hero saving the beauty and becoming extremely bloody.Basically every novel does not appear once or twice, and I feel uncomfortable all over.

Some books even appear several times.

In this way, readers will not be surprised if they don't read it.Therefore, he is very unfavorable about the plot of Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, a hero who saves the beauty.

This is also the reason why he has ten lines at a glance. Basically, as long as there is a plot where a hero saves the beauty, he can basically guess the direction from the beginning to the end of the story.

"This... How can I change this beauty to save the bear?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu sat sideways, staring at Yi Qing, with a pair of perfect legs wrapped in the school uniform skirt, leaning slightly on the cold table legs, looking soft and beautiful Abnormal, at this moment she faced Yi Qing and couldn't help asking.

Subconsciously, she lowered her head and glanced at those black silk thighs. Because the other party moved a little, the short skirt rose slightly, showing a touch of absolute territory, which made people want to stop.

With a light cough, Yi Qing didn't dare to read more, "It's very simple, but you need to remember two points. The first point is the direction of the plot, which needs to follow the character of the characters. The second point is to avoid plot bugs." .”

"I understand the second point, but what about the first point?"

Although he was asking, the corners of Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's mouth curled up, a smile that was not a smile.Then he moved his thigh lightly, tilted it up slightly, and set up Erlang's legs.

Her thighs were slightly turned up, and she didn't tidy up her short skirts. The black stockings on her legs seemed to be rubbing against each other. As soon as they were put on, her right leg slipped slightly, making it look extremely smooth.

Yi Qing was dumbfounded, but no matter which direction the other party looked at, he couldn't see any scenery, which seemed to be a kind of mental torture.

"You did it on purpose!" Although it was very eye-catching, Yi Qing couldn't help it.

"What?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked at Yi Qing in confusion, the quiet and confused state looked extremely cute and deceptive, but there was a hint of cunning in his eyes.

"What, what?" Yi Qing frowned, and snorted coldly, "I'm giving a lecture here, and you're making small moves next to me, don't think I can't see it. Hurry up and tidy it up, how decent it is!"

Hearing this, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu gave Yi Qing a sideways glance, a strange look flashed in his eyes, but he still tidied up his short skirt obediently, and he did not raise his legs any longer, leaning his legs side by side, his small cherry mouth slightly opened, his eyes contemptuous : "It's obviously a crazy leg-controlling pervert, and you still have to cover up to cover up your dirty psychology, it's really hypocritical!"

Yi Qing pretended not to hear the black line on his forehead, ignored the other party's venomous tongue, tapped the table, signaled the other party to listen carefully, and stopped staring randomly.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu pouted, stopped talking, and listened carefully.

"The so-called plot direction needs to follow the characters' personalities. In fact, it is very simple to understand. According to the hero you set, the protagonist you set is kind, gentle, and indecisive.

Then when encountering a gangster bullying a girl, his kind character will drive him not to leave easily, but will find a way to help the bullied.

But a person is complicated, and his indecision also makes him hesitate, because the protagonist is only one person, so he naturally knows that it is impossible to beat the punks.

You can also use one or two short paragraphs of psychological description to tell readers the psychological entanglement of the protagonist.But in the end, the kind character occupies the top score, so he will still make up his mind to save the heroine.

Instead of rushing forward recklessly and mindlessly as soon as you hear the cry for help like you, the character set in the early stage will collapse directly. How to write later? "

After talking a lot, Yi Qing's mouth became a little parched, and suddenly a bottle of mineral water appeared in front of her, and she subconsciously took it from Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's hand, "Thank you!"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu just opened his mouth and before he could speak, he saw Yi Qing open the bottle cap and started drinking.

Seeing this, she was a little speechless, shook her head, and didn't care that she had also drunk the bottle of water, but asked, "I understand what you said, and it's really incisive to show the plot with character. So how do you design Make the female lead save the male lead."

"Think for yourself!" After drinking the water, Yi Qing was in a dilemma. Seeing that there was still more than half of the water, she didn't know whether to return it to the other party or keep it for herself.

As a result, when he was hesitating, Kasumigaoka Shiyu took the mineral water back and put it in the table.

Seeing this, Yi Qing continued: "You wrote this book, so the plot naturally needs to be imagined and set by you. I'm just helping you out. If you have anything you don't understand, you can ask me. You can write it well." Show me. But the story itself needs to be drawn by you, otherwise how can you improve?"