The Transformation of the Second Dimension of the Four Lines Is

"Sister Shiyu's "Love Metronome" novel outline should have only one heroine. The type of your novel is almost a love novel. If it is a harem novel that is very popular now, Then you only need to set up a pair of heroines, and let readers choose if they have different personalities. Therefore, if you want this novel to stand out from other novels, you need to clearly define the character of the heroine. Because the heroine’s personality has already It was very exciting.”

Yoshino, as a spectator, directly pointed out Kasumigaoka Shiwa's shortcomings from the perspective of a bystander.Now she is just a novice in the literary world, so she will make more mistakes, and she doesn't know how to correct these mistakes.But Yoshino has read a lot of related light novels and various text adventure games, so she still has enough experience to point it out.And Yoshino and the others were not talking nonsense, but there was indeed such a thing, so Kasumigaoka Shiwa would introduce their opinions.

Kasumigaoka Shiwa looked at the mistakes marked by Yoshino on the desk, thought for a while, and then began to busy type on the computer.Novels are not written by talking, but by writing. Only by writing more can there be progress.As a newcomer, although Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu has several hit works, the total number of words she has written so far is less than one million words. It's just a state of salty fish, novels not only rely on creativity, but also rely on the perseverance of doing it.

Although Yoshina likes to complain about others, Kasumigaoka Shiwa's perseverance is good. Although the mistakes in her novels are completely criticized, she can still adjust her situation in less than ten minutes and start fighting again. This is a very rare quality for an author.

'Right now, Kasumi Hill Shiyu has not yet reached the start of the plot, so she is not the cutting-edge light novel writer who has published the Virgo "Love Metronome" and has published [-] copies.But according to the current speed, it should be able to reach the desired level soon, Yoshino. Looking at Kasumigaoka Shiwa's back, Yoshina nodded in satisfaction. This guy's attitude towards the things he cares about is still very satisfying.

'That's right, but Sister Shiyu's light novel was not very popular when the first volume was released, and because of the poor sales, the editor thought that the third volume would be cut in half.We must find a way to prevent this from happening again. 'Recalling the scenes that appeared in the original book, Yoshino thought she had to do the same thing as in the beginning.

'Well, I remember when you said that.This is also the time when the abandoned house named La Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, named An Yilunya, gained favorability. If history still develops like this, maybe it will end up like that in the end.This is not possible, we have to prepare well in advance.An Yilun also believed that "Love Metronome" became a popular work because of Kasumigaoka Shiyu's promotion in the blog when the second volume was released, so now we have to find a way to become a well-known blogger in a short time. '

An Yilun is also just a simple consumer debt in Yoshina's evaluation. Although he earns money to support his own consumption debt, but to put it bluntly, he is taller than the dwarfs, but it is better than those abandoned houses.It can be said that in the original book, what An Yilun did was simply to use their talents, but he never thought of giving them an answer.They will also use those girls who only like the second dimension, but not the third dimension, as an excuse. This kind of person is really too bad.

'correct!Yoshino!If you want to increase your popularity, just become a light novelist like Kasumigaoka Shiwa.As a time traveler, it would be a pity not to be a good writer!Or you can draw manga, after all, isn't that what you did back then, I believe you have experience. '

The "gosick" manga drawn during "lovelive" received a good response at the time. According to Yoshino's beautiful style of painting, coupled with an interesting storyline, it will definitely get a good response.

'And Kasumigaoka Shiwa's novels need illustrations, so you can also be an illustrator for her novels.Although I am a little sorry for the original Sagara Mayu, a good illustration can also bring a lot of popularity to light novels.You can really give it a try, Yoshino.You're going to be in this world for a long time anyway, so why not find something to do for yourself. '

"Do you want to draw manga again?" Thinking of that "GOSICK", Yoshino couldn't help showing nostalgic expression.Originally, she chose to debut only to prevent Nozomi Tojo from being under pressure because of her stay, but she didn't expect that there would be so many lolicons in Neon, and her Victoria was surprisingly popular.Thinking of what he just drew, Yoshino nodded.

"It's time to do something. Since there is no opportunity called 'Muse' in this world, let us create it." Clenching his fists, Yoshino felt that some cults should appear in this world Members do.The cult called 'lovelive' is only starting from now on.

"Speaking of which, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, you are about to enter the second year of high school, right? You still have so much time to write novels. To some extent, you are quite desperate." They have many times of student experience, but they know How heavy is the blood of high school students in Nihong, but it is really not easy for Kasumigaoka Shiwa to continue to write novels under such circumstances.

"I'm still very confident about this. Although I don't think I'm a genius, I have already completed all the high school courses by myself in advance. Although it is still difficult to enter the University of Tokyo, I have no problems in other universities. I can take the test casually. It's okay, as long as the grades can reach the top of the grade, the teacher won't say anything." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu said without raising her head, her slender hands were dancing on the keyboard, like a dancing elf, light and graceful. Look classy.

Yoshina was a little speechless, although there was nothing wrong with these words, and there was no tone of pride.But if these words are heard by many high school students, they will vomit blood.Be aware that the real neon high school courses are very heavy.Although the education of Datianchao is much stricter than that of Neon, Neon's is also too relaxed. After all, the society has zero tolerance for poor students, and weeding out the weak is a true portrayal of this society.

"Forget it, it's a good thing that you have self-confidence. What you have to do now is to let us see if there are any mistakes, and the change from quantity to quality. As long as you revise the manuscript more times, you can Let the novel become more interesting. We still have a lot of time now, so we don’t need to be too anxious. Kasumigaoka Shiwa.”

Having said that, Yoshino also made her preparations last night.Many tools are needed to draw manga, and these are just in her shadow warehouse, so there is no need to add them.This time, Yoshino plans to release the manga in full color, so that the charm of the nine goddesses of the "Muse" can be fully displayed for the nerds of the world to watch.

She can also show the song about "Muse" in the live broadcast of Neon's NICONICO, and she believes that there are still many people who will accept her account.The UP owner of such a cute little loli, Yoshina imagines that it is also a very exciting thing.

"Then from now on, let the charm of 'cult' be introduced into this world."

007: Done

Time passed little by little like this, and Kasumigaoka Shiwa's work was revised more than [-] times under the strict requirements of Yoshino and the two.With their hard work, such an interesting novel slowly took shape. After nearly half a month, Kasumigaoka Shiyu finally finished the entire content of the first volume, and the number of words reached the common standard of [-] words.

Yoshino spent half a month working hard on drawing, but her manga soon ran out.But she had to go out if she wanted to deliver the manuscript, and she didn't want to go out, so she decided to hand over the manuscript to the publishing house when Kasumigaoka Shiyu finished the manuscript for the first volume.

Before that, there was nothing to do, so she discussed it with Yoshina, and the two began to focus on the anime "lovelive".But they plan to do this with two people. Although this kind of workload is heavy for ordinary people, they are not ordinary people.

In this way, Yoshino is in charge of the graphic part of the animation, and Yoshino is in charge of the computer production part of the animation.Because none of them belonged to the category of normal people, Yoshina changed into a human form to help while they were twitching at the corners of Kasumigaoka Shiwa's mouth.

The two each use a computer, Yoshino is responsible for drawing the required animation pictures frantically, and Yoshino is responsible for combining these drawings into animations that can move.

What originally required a huge team to complete was gradually completed under the partnership of Yoshino and the two.About two weeks later, the first episode of the anime was completed. Although it was very hard work, they became more comfortable after getting used to the process.Because everyone knows the relationship between the original plot, the animation production went very smoothly.

As for the dubbing part, Yoshino said that this kind of thing is not a thing at all.It is enough to use spiritual power to change the voice and then dub it according to the way the 'Muse' speaks. In this way, the two of them have accomplished things that ordinary people cannot accomplish.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu leaned her tired body on the back of the chair and stretched out, making a meowing sound like a meow.

She put her numb fingers on her head and turned around to watch the two of Yoshino's crazily operating. She thought she was tired after doing this, but after seeing the actions of these two inhumans, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu said that her matter is really nothing. "Okay, you two take a break. I'm going to hand in the manuscript now."

"Oh? It's good again? Then let's stop for a while. Anyway, there is no need to be so anxious now, and it doesn't matter if the progress is slowed down. The second episode of the anime can be completed except for dubbing." With a shake of his hand, Yoshina Calculate what you need to do next.

Although they don't have a professional recording studio, they only need to be proficient in computer technology for this kind of thing, which is Yoshina's field of expertise.

Yoshino's power has been a little loose recently, she can try to summon a clone.Although it is just a clone with no combat power at all, she can help complete the animation production work together, so Yoshino's drawing work can be much smaller, and the dubbing is also better matched.In this way, when she wants to join the song in the future, she can summon several avatars to sing together.

"You guys are working hard too. But now I'd like to help you see what needs to be revised. I feel exhausted now. This is the first time I realize that writing a novel is such a tiring thing." Kasumigaoka Shiwa sighed, usually her coding speed is very fast, but under the high demands of Yoshina, many of the paragraphs she wrote would be marked with unqualified underlines, and she had to start revising again.

Be aware that it is very frustrating to re-edit, and it is much easier to write a novel than to revise it.And because Yoshino speaks more directly, the work of correcting the mistakes in Kasumigaoka Shiwa's novel is generally Yoshino's work, and Yoshino is in charge of logistics.For example, draw manga manuscripts, or draw more animation original design drawings, and eliminate the fatigue on Kasumigaoka Shiwa's body when her head is swollen.

When Kasumigaoka Shiwa gave up the seat to Yoshino to sit on the bed, Yoshino came behind Kasumigaoka Shiwa and stretched out her small hands to help massage her temples.At the same time, use the spiritual power on your body to slowly relax Kasumigaoka Shiwa's brain. I still remember that when Yoshino did this for the first time, Kasumigaoka Shiwa slept directly on Yoshino because it was too comfortable. At that time, Yoshito Nana was very angry.

"Cut!" Looking at Kasumigaoka Shiwa who was full of enjoyment, Yoshina began to review Kasumigaoka Shiwa's manuscript.It should be said that she is indeed a person with rare literary talent. Although Yoshina found many problems before, but now she can't pick out any faults with her pickiness.She quickly finished reading the tens of thousands of words that Kasumi Hill Shiyu had just coded, and her progress was really obvious. The content was basically the same as the outline, and she was no longer picky about the details.

Although she didn't want to make Kasumigaoka Shiwa too complacent, Yoshina still had to nod in agreement that Kasumigaoka Shiwa's novel had passed.If the revisions are just superfluous, such redundant things will not add points to the novel, but will deduct points from the novel.Although her personality is relatively bad, she would not do such a thing without a big picture.

"Phew~ I finally passed. This is the most tiring novel I've ever written. But the hard work finally paid off." Kasumigaoka Shiwa stretched her waist, lying limply on the bed, receiving Yoshino's massage .She felt that her energy was fully restored under Yoshino's massage, "I leave the illustrations for the novel to you. I want to follow your animation drawing techniques. The illustrations for novels are just a very simple matter."

"Well~ The drawing thing is Yoshino's business, but the illustrations are not a big deal for Yoshino. Drawing illustrations will add points to the novel, and I believe your light novel will be because of Yoshino's illustrations become more popular."

Yoshino's illustrations are indeed at the level of a master, and it is unmatched among masters.It can be seen from her previous paintings that the characters in Yoshino's works are lifelike, combining the beauty of the second dimension and the reality of the third dimension. It is impossible for others to imitate Yoshino's painting style.

After all, those people have never experienced the feelings of different dimensions, so how can they draw this kind of painting that integrates different dimensions?Yoshino has also seen Kasumigaoka Shiwa's "Love Metronome", and she also has a general idea of ​​the male and female protagonists, so the characters proposed are all in line with Kasumigaoka Shiwa's settings, so this matter is fully entrusted to Kasumi Professionals like Qiu Shiyu did it.

The image of the heroine Sayuka is based on Kasumigaoka Shiwa, so it needs to be roughly modified.Yoshino's drawing speed is very fast, but she doesn't use hand-painted. In order to pursue speed, she prints out directly after drawing on the computer.The advantage of using computer graphics is that it is very convenient to revise the draft, unlike hand-drawing, which requires many steps to be changed as long as there is a mistake.

The drawing software used by Yoshino has the function of layers. If you feel unsatisfied there when you finish it in the later stage, you only need to modify the layer where the error is. This kind of painting speed is much faster than retracting.

After Yoshino finished drawing all the illustrations, Yoshino began to directly use WPS to typeset Kasumigaoka Shiwa's new book, and produced a trial version according to the specifications of the library.After the computer completes the typesetting, Yoshino uses his ability to make out the typesetting trial version.

"As the author of this book, let sister Shiwa be the first person to read it. If you have any different opinions, you can raise them, and the illustrations have already been set in." Yoshino wrote a book with a pure white cover. The library was placed in front of Kasumigaoka Shiwa.Because things like the cover are decided by the library, Yoshino still can't decide what to draw.But Yoshino actually couldn't reach her current level even at the library. This is a kind of confidence in her painting skills.

"So fast? What a powerful ability. As expected of a person who has crossed the world, this extraordinary ability is like a miracle in a world full of common sense. As expected of Yoshino, who has become a god, this kind of Everything can be done." Kasumigaoka Shiwa picked up the library made by Yoshino and flipped through it, and I have to say that Yoshino's typesetting is really amazing.Moreover, the paper made by Yoshino is also very comfortable to the touch, the illustrations are more familiar and impeccable, and the quality of the entire book can be ranked among all published library books.

"However, it seems that the library doesn't allow you to bring your own illustrations, they have to be arranged by the library. Yoshino, your illustrations are perfect, but it won't work if the library doesn't allow it." Kasumigaoka Shiwa suddenly remembered this Come to think of it, knowing the rules of the library is very cumbersome, what should I do if her book is accidentally blocked?

"No, the library is also in order to make money, and the illustrators arranged by the other party are definitely not as good as Yoshino. If they want to get more profits from your book, they can only set it according to the original regulations. Although Yoshino's current strength is not in full strength, it is not a problem to let this city be covered by a snowstorm. I believe that it is still possible to destroy a person humanely."

After becoming a frozen puppet, Yoshina's power can easily freeze the city.The disadvantage is that their whereabouts will be exposed, but no one will be their opponent.But Noyuki Yoshito couldn't agree to her plan, so it's better to think about these things at most.