They All Want to Attack Me

Shinomiya Kaguya restrained her smile slightly, and said in an elegant and dignified manner, with strong confidence and vitality exuding from her red eyes.

"Really?"

There was a sneer on Ai Hayasaka's face.

【Miss Huiye has become more and more arrogant recently.Before the horoscope is written, I have already assumed the posture of a winner, and even put on such a posture for me, who is doing my best and devoting myself, it is really uncomfortable. 】

In Hayasaka Ai's heart, a small flame called mischief was slowly burning.

"It seems that it is also necessary to let Xiao Ai experience the taste of love, otherwise it will only play a meager role in stealing the president's confidential information."

Shinomiya Kaguya glanced at the slightly displeased Hayasaka Ai beside her, and said with a smile.

"Miss Huiye, don't worry, I will take care of this matter."

Ai Hayasaka smiled and said meaningfully...

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A few white pigeons with neat and clean feathers chirped crisply in the air and soared around the seashore.

For a while they are lined up as a T and then as a J, which seems to imply that all pigeons are TJs.

Inside the coffee shop, business is booming as usual.

Today's employees are only Takenaka Hakuba and Kasumigaoka Shiwa.

"Senior is really energetic."

Thinking of Hikawa Okasaka, who has never asked for leave before, asking for leave again today, Shiraha Takenaka sighed softly and thought to himself.

As a man, the senior did not want to work part-time to make money and study during college, but was addicted to his children's affair, which made Takenaka Baiyu very disdainful.

Seniors should still learn from their juniors, and have life goals, study hard, work hard, and aim at Xiuzhiyuan University and the CEO of a big chaebol!

"call……"

After finishing all the orders at hand, Shiraha Takenaka let out a heavy breath, and sat in front of the bar to relax temporarily.

"Where am I, have I met my senior?"

Looking at Kasumigaoka Shiwa beside him, Takenaka Hakuba fell into thinking and memories.

In my impression, junior high school was only in an ordinary school that couldn't be more ordinary. During the senior high school entrance examination, he passed the excellent academic performance and entered Xiuzhiin Academy with Bai Yingui.

So, when exactly did you have a relationship with Xiazhiqiu Shiyu?

With my own memory, theoretically speaking, unless it's amazing, I shouldn't forget it.

Just looking at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's performance, it doesn't seem like a hasty passerby, but the two of them seem to have made a childhood promise.

"What are you thinking?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu pulled her hair, looked at Baiyu Zhunaka beside her and asked.

"Missing your business."

Takenaka White Feather said lightly.

"Is it an unreasonable idea?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's tone was slightly playful.

"It's a confusing thought."

Takenaka Hakuba spread his hands and said.

"Could you do me a favor after get off work?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu hesitated for a moment, looked at Baiyu Takenaka and asked.

"What are you busy with?"

"Help me read the latest content of the novel, I have encountered some difficulties."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu said hesitantly, showing a rare posture and expression.

"Okay, but it's better to start now. It's too late to start later. Anyway, I have nothing to do."

Takenaka Hakuba nodded slightly and said.

In his previous life, Takenaka Hakuba also tried to be an internet writer, but he quickly failed, so he gave up this path, but he still has a little understanding and insight.

Originally, after Baiyu Takenaka was reborn, he considered Wen Chaogong.

It is difficult to succeed if you just want to write it out by yourself based on what is in your memory.

"Do you want to execute me publicly in public? Do you want to gain pleasure by looking at my twitching posture because of embarrassment? What a ghost!"

Hearing Baiyu Takenaka's words, Kasumigaoka Shiyu said with contemptuous eyes.

"Customers won't notice it, and it's impossible to hear it, and you have misunderstood me."

Takenaka White Feather said lightly.

"Wait a mininute."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu nodded, then turned and walked towards the lounge.

Two or three minutes later, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu came back with a thick notebook and handed it to Takenaka Baiyu.

"Help me see how to improve it. The editor said that according to this situation, it will be cut in half soon, and the second book will basically not be considered."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu handed it to Takenaka Baiyu, and said in a somewhat complicated tone.

She has the reputation of a literary genius, but even publishing novels and living on royalties seems so out of reach.

Although he has quite outstanding literary attainments, it is so difficult to publish the first book. This is because the other party published it with the mentality of trying.

"Well, I see."

Takenaka Hakuba nodded lightly, opened Kasumigaoka Shiyu's book, and read it quickly at the speed of ten lines at a glance.

For Baiyu Takenaka, even with the method and speed of one eye and ten lines, he can understand the content in more detail.

During this period, some female customers saw that Takenaka Hakuba was busy, and they could only look at Kasumigaoka Shiwa with [regret] eyes, and turned back to their seats with desserts and drinks.

After about twenty minutes, Baiyu Takenaka roughly scanned the contents.

"Is there something that needs to be improved?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu asked with some expectation.

If it were someone else, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu would not ask for advice, even if it was his father, he never asked for advice.

It's just that the person in front of him is Baiyu Takenaka, which made Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu want to ask for advice.

"No rhythm, no pleasure, no pleasure, you write a hammer, write you a noob! Give up with your editor!"

Of course, these thoughts exist only in the mind.

"The rhythm is slow, the characteristics are unclear, there is no sense of expectation, and the gorgeous rhetoric cannot save the failure. This is a novel, and it is a love novel with supernatural parts, not the kind of hurt literature! You There must be a bright rhythm, and you should be clear about whether your book should be based on stomach medicine or sugar, and at the same time, you should leave some foreshadowing, and learn to break chapters to create a sense of expectation for readers. Breaking chapters is very important! Of course, it is not advisable for some people to break down into TJ out of context, and there are still many problems..."

Takenaka Hakuba sighed lightly, and said solemnly.

Takenaka Hakuba believes that although he has failed to plagiarize masterpieces such as "Horse Breaks the Sky", "Fengzu", and "Sword and Sword", it does not affect him in the slightest.

"Is that so?"

Hearing Bamboo Takenaka's sharp comments and criticizing himself to the fullest, Kasumigaoka Shiyu couldn't help showing an excited expression.

Sensing the excitement of Kasumigaoka Shiu, Takenaka Hakuba couldn't help but sigh with emotion. When Shaking S and Shaking M reached the extreme, there was indeed only a thin line between them.

"That's right, and..."

Takenaka Hakuba nodded lightly, then continued to point to the content of the text, and began to comment on Kasumigaoka Shiu...

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ps: Don’t ask me why the chapter number is like this, I’m also desperate

Chapter 65

"Huh... that's great... Junior, you are still as proficient as ever, which makes senior sister very satisfied."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looked at Takenaka Baiyu with a flushed face, and said excitedly.

Takenaka Hakuba's performance made Kasumigaoka Shiyu very satisfied.

This was the first time in Kasumigaoka Shiyu's life that she was so excited and satisfied.

In the past, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu could easily master no matter what he was doing, and he didn't need special teaching from others at all.

Like today, it is extremely rare in life to be guided by Takenaka Hakuba bit by bit.

Under the careful guidance of Takenaka Baiyu, Kasumigaoka Shiyu suddenly realized what the problems she encountered in writing were.

Now Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu is very confident that she can make her novel, no matter how bad it is, it will not face the embarrassing situation that the first volume will be cut in half, at least it can be cut in half when it comes out in the second volume!

"I always feel that senior sister's compliments are weird, and I'm about to get off work."

Takenaka Hakuba glanced at the coffee shop with only three or two customers left, and said calmly.

【Senior just said it was the same as before, right? 】

[maybe? 】

[It looks like it is, so...has something similar happened before? 】

[maybe? 】

Seeing that the sand sculpture system started to pretend to be stupid again, Baiyu Takenaka gave up his plan to ask about it.

It seems that we can only find some clues on the senior sister.

It would be better if Kasumi Hill Shiu took the initiative to tell the truth, or Takenaka Hakuba himself accidentally found clues in Kasumi Hill Shiu's items.

"I'm very grateful, my junior, for helping me. But—Takenaka-kun, who played with the girl's heart, turned his face and turned away, and was in the middle of the guidance just now, excited like a ghost. It's really terrible."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu said with a smile, but there was an unclear emotion in his eyes and tone.

"Alas?!"