After hearing what the black cat said, Chu Yue sighed.

"Is the original manuscript of the novel of the two of you there? Can I have a look?" Chu Yue asked.

The black cat handed over the manuscript of the two people's novels, and Chu Yue opened it to read.

After reading for a while, Chu Yue put down the manuscript, and then said to the black cat, "Hey, black cat, do you want to hear my opinion?"

"You can speak directly," said the black cat.

"Yes." Chu Yue nodded, "The novels of both of you have their own characteristics, but both have shortcomings."

"This, I know this..." The black cat blushed immediately.

This is an objective fact, black cat and Kirino both know it, but they don't want to admit it.

"If you want to improve, if you want to improve your writing level, you can learn from each other's strengths." Chu Yue said, "The so-called seeking common ground while reserving differences, learn from each other's strengths."

"..." The black cat was silent for a moment, then said, "Continue."

"If we talk about the writing industry affected by the current commercialization, although Tong Nai's has some shortcomings, it will be more popular and more likely to succeed in commercialization." Chu Yue said.

"Hmph, the aesthetics of mortals." The black cat said disdainfully.

"However, in my personal opinion, I appreciate your novels more than black cats," Chu Yue said.

"Oh?" The black cat smiled strangely, "Tell me."

"Tong Nai's novel is, after all, the novel of the younger sister's protagonist. There are too many plots that are deliberately cute." Chu Yue said, "But in today's situation... there is nothing we can do. Your novel has never deliberately been cute, but the plot is complicated. , I flipped through it roughly, and felt that there were a lot of foreshadowing and a lot of content information. I am afraid that you have to read carefully to understand the charm."

The black cat was stunned, and nodded, "That's right..."

"It's a pity, readers nowadays like fast food, and many novels that need to be savored slowly are not popular." Chu Yue said.

"Huh?! What do you mean?" At this moment, Kirino appeared at the door.

Chu Yue glanced at Tong Nai, and replied: "The literal meaning, don't you understand?"

"What did you say?!" Tong Nai walked up to Chu Yue angrily.

"I'm just stating my opinion." Chu Yue said, "If you don't believe me, just show your novel to your friends and you'll know..."

Tong Nao didn't answer for a while, she also knew this, and if she showed it to others, the comments would probably be similar.

"Hmph, have you nothing to say?" The black cat mocked at this moment, "Your novel is like a pumpkin still rotting in the trash can, ugly and smelly."

"Huh?! What about your novel?! It's like a stone in a latrine, even a dog would hate it!" Tong Nai said.

"Uh..." Chu Yue suddenly felt, did she upgrade the firepower of the two of them?

The two quarreled again, and Chu Yue had no choice but to persuade them from the side.

However, in the end, they just sat on both sides of the sofa and stopped talking.

Chu Yue sat in the middle of the sofa, speechless for a moment.

After thinking about it, Chu Yue said, "By the way, since it's Mei Lulu's appreciation meeting, why don't we watch "Stardust☆Little Witch Mei Lulu"?"

"En!" Tong Nai nodded, and immediately took out Mei Lulu's DVD.

As soon as I said I wanted to see Mei Lulu, I became excited...

After Mei Lulu's DVD was reflected, Kirino and the black cat immediately quarreled again, but this time it was replaced by Mei Lulu's animation plot...

Chu Yue originally wanted to dissuade her, but she really felt powerless...

It's just that I can't hear anything at all...

Otaku are really scary... Chu Yue thought to herself.

This appreciation meeting ended only in the quarrel between the two of them...

In the end, Kirino sent the black cat to the subway station, all the way to the subway gate.

As for Chu Yue, she stayed at home and tidied up the living room messed up by the two of them...

"Speaking of which, your brother's aesthetics is much higher than yours." Black Cat said.

"What? Are you envious? Hahaha." Tong Nao said suddenly.

"Yes, I'm really envious." The black cat responded unexpectedly.

"However, I envy you for having a younger sister." Kirino said, "Sister... so cute!"

"Hehe." The black cat smiled and said nothing more.

The subway arrived soon, and the black cat got on the subway. The two said goodbye and went home.

After arriving at home, Tong Nai immediately called Chu Yue to his bedroom and began to revise his novel.

Tong Nao had actually been eavesdropping outside the living room, and heard everything Chu Yue said to the black cat.What Chu Yue said was very reasonable, and she seemed to understand it very well, so Tong Nai called Chu Yue over to help her revise the novel.

After finishing the revision of the novel, Kirino sent it to Black Cat to read.But the black cat immediately guessed that it was Tong Nai who changed the novel into this form with the help of Chu Yue.

The first novel was praised by Saori and Black Cat, and Kirino began to write the second novel.Because of Chu Yue's help in the last novel, Tong Nao's level has improved a lot in this novel.

After the second novel was completed, Kirino sent the novel to the Leijian Library...

Surprisingly, this novel was appreciated by the editor of Leijian Bunko, so he contacted Kirino to publish it.

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