My Supernatural Daily Life in the Comprehensive World

Compared with the first volume, the writing style of the chapters in the third volume has improved a lot, the rhetoric is beautiful and gorgeous, and the description is very good, especially the emotional part, which is really worthy of a genius girl.

Chiba Nagisa sighed inwardly. This senior is famous in the school and has a specialty in arts. The skills he has learned are indeed very complicated, but if you really want to write light novels, you may not be able to compare with this talented girl. .

"It's well written. The romance here is very entangled. Naoto, Sayuka, and Mayui." Saeko Busushima praised, and glanced at Nagisa Chiba, who really looked alike.

"Well, thanks to you, you have provided me with a lot of ideas. The Asura Field is still a favorite for readers." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu said generously.

"The Shura field is indeed an important plot that enhances the character of the hero and heroine, and can even promote the development of many plots. Many classic GalGames have the design of the plot of the Shura field. If you make a wrong choice, you will fall into the abyss The feeling will indeed shock the players every step of the way." An Yilun also pushed his glasses, showing a sense of presence angrily.

"That's true." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu nodded, her red eyes were slightly bright, this is indeed very good, the opinions given by the readers are still very pertinent!

She also had a very clear idea of ​​what happened next.

"Haven't you thought about adding a male second?" Chiba Nagisa suddenly asked.

"Male second?" Kasumigaoka Shiwa looked at Chiba Nagisa, and asked with some puzzlement: "The main line of my story is the relationship between Naoto, Sayuka, and Shinyui. If a male second is added, the story will collapse Bar."

"No! I think adding the male second is a very good choice!" An Yilun also raised her hand in agreement. When talking about Two-dimensional, An Yilun seemed to be a different person. With a relaxed tone, he said with a smile: "Qianye is indeed my friend. We thought about going together. What kind of impact the appearance of the second male will have on the emotional entanglement between the three of them is definitely very exciting."

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu frowned slightly, and said softly: "If the male second is added, then the second male should also like Zhenwei? Wouldn't this become two men competing for a woman?"

"No, no, no need at all. I've already finished reading the second volume of Teacher Xia Shizi. In the plot, Naoto has already begun to lean towards Zhenwei. Then the male second can be set to like Sayuka all the time, but because Sayuka I like straight people, and I have always kept my liking in my heart. Now straight people have emotional entanglements with Sayuka and Shinyui. The male second thinks that straight people have abandoned Sayuka, so I stand up and snatch Sayuka with straight people. Then the plot will probably be more exciting. Let's go." An Yilun also looked excited, and said all his thoughts in one breath.

"Lunye-kun is right. If there is a competition between the male second and Sayuka, the conflict will inevitably intensify, and the protagonist will be completely entangled. Whether to choose Sayuka, who is a childhood sweetheart, or Shinyui, who is from the sky. Of course! If the male Second, it would be better if he is a rich man, heir of a chaebol or something like that." Chiba Nagisa nodded and added lightly.

When he was a student in his previous life, he had read a lot of online articles, so it was no problem to give some advice.

"Why?" Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looked at Chiba Zhu curiously, a little puzzled.

"Between money and childhood sweetheart, who will the protagonist of an ordinary person choose? Isn't senior sister curious?" An Yilun also took up the conversation and said.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu nodded, holding a pen and paper, remembering the suggestions made by Chiba Nagisa and An Yilun, her eyes became brighter and brighter. She originally thought that according to her original plot, it would be over in about five volumes, but after two According to a personal suggestion, she can write at least eight volumes, or even about ten volumes of plots.

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked at Chiba Zhu, and asked curiously: "If Chiba-kun chooses, will Chiba-kun choose money, or childhood sweetheart?"

"Well, I don't know, I don't have a childhood sweetheart." Chiba Nagisa shook his head, he didn't have such a thing as a childhood sweetheart, and what else!I beg you authors to let Xiao Shunran go, they are already miserable, don't flog the corpses anymore.

"Then to put it another way, who would Qianye-kun choose between Qianye and the girls around him?" Kasumigaoka Shiyu asked.

Hearing Kasumigaoka Shiyu's question, Gui Yanye and Busujima Saeko both looked at Chiba Nagisa, as if expecting Chiba Nagisa's answer.

"..." Chiba Nagisa looked at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu speechlessly, and said lightly: "Of course I choose them. They are not comparable to money. There can be a lot of money, but they are the only ones."

Hearing Chiba Nagisa's answer, Saeko Busujima and Gui Yanye couldn't help showing smiles on their pretty faces, and their eyes were also touched.

"Mr. Qianye!" Gui Yanye grabbed Qianye Zhu's hand, looked at Qianye Zhu with sparkling eyes, and called out in a low voice.

Although Saeko Busujima didn't express anything, the hand tightly holding Chiba Nagisa's palm and the corners of her mouth that could not help but curl upwards meant that she was in a good mood.

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu's face was uncomfortable, she understood that this handsome junior could hug left and right.

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"The opinions you put forward are indeed very informative. Let's stop here today. The lunch break is almost over." After sorting out some notes, Kasumigaoka Shiyu also said to Chiba Nagisa and An Yilun.

She has gained a lot today. These proposals can at least give her three or four more plots. The main line of the subsequent plots also needs to be overthrown and start over.

"That's right. Let's add emails and line friends to each other. It will be more convenient to contact in the future, and it will be convenient to discuss the plot." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu suddenly said.

Chiba Nagisa looked at Saeko Busujima and Gui Yanye. For him, participating in this kind of plot discussion once is enough, and now that they are his female companions, they have to ask them both emotionally and rationally.

Seeing Chiba Nagisa's probing eyes, Saeko Busujima and Gui Yanye felt warm in their hearts, with a touch of joy. They obviously didn't need to ask for their opinions, but they still cared about their feelings and wanted to ask for their opinions.

Chiba-kun is so gentle.

"It's ok." Gui Yanye pinched Chiba Zhu's sleeve and said softly, "I don't care."

"I don't mind that there are other girls around Xuedi-kun, not to mention that Xuedi-kun wants to get rid of spirits, doesn't he?" Saeko Busujima smiled and said softly.

Chiba Nagisa nodded and responded softly: "Okay!"

After Kasumigaoka Shiyu added An Yilunya's friends, seeing Chiba Nagisa asking Gui Yanye and Busujima Saeko for instructions, she couldn't help complaining: "Just adding a friend also needs to report, Chiba-senior Are you a strict wife?"

Saeko Busujima lightly rubbed the diamond ring on her finger, smiled and said nothing.

Gui Yan and Ye Qiao blushed slightly, and secretly glanced at Chiba Zhu, their relationship has not reached that point yet.

"..." Qianyezhu looked at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu speechlessly, and said lightly, "No."

"Because senior is a beautiful girl, to add senior as a friend, it is the minimum respect to ask the female companions around you first."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's expression was a bit complicated, she thought that this junior was only able to hug left and right because of his sweet words, but now it seems that it is not the case.

After adding Kasumigaoka Shiwa's email address and line friend, after saying goodbye to this charming senior, she walked off the rooftop with Busujima Saeko and Gui Yanye.

Walking downstairs, Saeko Busujima's second-grade classroom is on the top floor, while Gui Yanye and Chiba Nagisa's classrooms are downstairs.

Saeko Busushima gently tidied Chiba Nagisa's clothes, and said softly, "I can also join my junior-kun's club, right?"

Chiba Nagisa scratched his cheek and said, "Isn't Saeko the head of the Kendo club? My club is just for fun."

"It doesn't matter, it's fine just by name, and I can go there once or twice, but that cute school girl doesn't seem to welcome me very much." Saeko Busujima said with a light smile, recalling what happened that afternoon .

"If it's just a name, it's fine. Liuhuajiang is just shy of strangers." Chiba Nagisa explained.

"Liuhuajiang? It's really intimate." Saeko Busushima sighed with emotion.

Chiba Nagisa scratched his cheek in embarrassment, not knowing how to answer.