After eating some snacks, Li Yan's work soon began.Yukinoshita Yukino, who came back from the school auditorium, has officially entered the summer vacation time. She took her schoolbag and began to put all her high school textbooks and teaching materials on the table, preparing to enter the first day of tutoring and review.

While eating snacks, Li Yan released Teacher Cat out to eat breakfast together, so that Yukinoshita Yukino, who had originally maintained an indifferent attitude, was instantly breached the inner defense line, which was also considered to resolve the oppressive atmosphere that permeated the living room.

After discovering the magical effect of Teacher Cat, Li Yan stared at Teacher Cat for a while, as if he was thinking about something, so that this rounded cat monster began to be more wary of this cunning old thief.

After Yukino Yukino packed the cup, she smiled and looked at Yukinoshita Yukino who was quietly kneeling at the review table and said: "Then, sister, I'm going to work in the room, Yukino-chan, do your best. "

"..." Yukinoshita Yukino didn't answer. Instead, she closed her eyes again and didn't intend to pay any attention to her sister's words.

Li Yan, who was sitting across from Xuenai, returned to his room after seeing Xuenai saying hello, and he began to take out the materials he had prepared yesterday, and said to Xuenai, "Then, Second Miss, let's start reviewing. According to some of the questions you sent me before, I have briefly analyzed the knowledge points that are difficult to understand, and I hope these materials can help you..."

Yukinoshita Xue Nai took over the materials, and she flipped through it, and found that Li Yan's science was truly amazing, and many of his understanding and problem-solving ideas were written in great detail.

She felt that the international student in front of her was indeed a science student at Dongda University.

"That, senpai."

"Ok?"

Yukinoshita Yukino was sitting on a sunny soft cushion, with a delicate face, long black hair that fell beautifully in front of the table, and a white and somewhat hazy shirt and school uniform that revealed a little girlish atmosphere, all of which showed the beauty of a girl. Ultimately, she put the review materials on the textbook, her eyes were as calm as the sea, she looked at Li Yan, and asked, "Is my light novel really that funny?"

Li Yan and Teacher Cat's heart suddenly froze, she actually still cares about this matter.

Yukino Yukino then continued: "Please don't get me wrong, I didn't plan to be angry at the beginning when you read the novels I wrote, novels are for people to read, I can accept any comments, but feel free to read other people's stories. A bookshelf is a very rude behavior."

"But, are the novels I wrote really that bad? Seniors, don't admit their thoughts after laughing, so I hope seniors can tell me what they think after reading them." Yukino Yukino asked.

Li Yan was silent for a while, and finally after a little tangled, he understood what Yukinoshita Yukino meant, nodded a few times, and began to say, "Understood, since you really want to understand, let me tell you my point of view. "

"Second miss should rarely write light novels, but I have to praise second miss's writing is really good, although it can be seen that there is a copy of the narration method in "Super Power Academy", but the writing is more than the original author. excellent."

Li Yan took out the paper and began to write the simple structure of Yukinoshita Yukino's story, and said earnestly, "However, it is easy for new writers to misunderstand one thing, that is, their proud works must be acceptable, in fact, writing requires a lot of Accumulation, such as the emotional capture of the characters, the active but not boring plot, and the character design. Many people design the plot first and then design the characters. This is an easy mistake to make. Be sure to let the set characters go. Promoting the plot is the most basic way of writing.”

"Well……"

Yukinoshita Yukino sat opposite, looking at the draft's professional analysis of the plot structure. She looked at the draft in surprise, but couldn't help but glance at Li Yan who wrote the plot branch. Why did this moment make her feel To the sense of difference.

"Second miss's story was too limited from the beginning, I wrote everything that the characters should be written, a strong female knight, and a follower who is always full of negative energy, a female follower who adds trouble but is very kind, if Combat stories should not be written so clearly in one breath. You should let readers see growth. This is the first point. The second point is the logic of the story, which many people make mistakes, even It's an old author. There are contradictions in the paragraph you wrote. Second lady, you must have not taken notes at all times. When you were writing, you forgot what the protagonist did before. It's easy to spot this bug with a quick read."

Li Yan listed the bugs written by Yukino Yukinoshita and showed them to Yukino Yukinoshita, and said.

"So that's the case, so it's really written wrong here..." Yukinoshita Yukino quietly looked at the plot tree diagram listed by Li Yan, nodded and said calmly.

Li Yan said with a smile, "If you try more, you will definitely improve a lot. It turns out that you like to write, Second Miss. You can communicate with each other more when you write in the future..."

"...Is it really possible, will it bother you to write the eighth volume?"

She was sitting upright in front of Li Yan, her expression was calm and focused like clear water, and she looked at the plot chart listed by Li Yan, that kind of beauty, as if thousands of years of vicissitudes in the world could not erase the fresh and refined, delicate and beautiful rather than square things.

The casual questioning was not loud, but the delicate and cold words shocked Li Yan slightly. Although Li Yan had a hunch that she knew his identity, he still couldn't help but look at her in embarrassment and amazement. .

"In any case, all the evidence collected so far proves that you are Uesugi-sensei... Sure enough, I guessed right. My sister's words must have been known a long time ago. In the cliché and messy world of light novels, I admit the senior. The stories created are quite good, so, Mr. Uesugi, the genius, if possible, I plan to add a subject of writing to the study subjects taught during the summer vacation, is it possible?"

Yukinoshita Yukino raised her head, her black pretty bangs swayed slightly in the morning wind, her beautiful eyes looked at him quietly, her calm face seemed quite firm, and she did not hesitate to add to her lessons. He has learned a special discipline and expressed his own demands.

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After a day of math, physics and chemistry tutoring, soon, it was dark.

"Look, this is what everyone expects, this is a curse, if you don't write the eighth volume well, you will meet readers everywhere." Teacher Cat ate the sea fish, stared at Li Yan and said hypnotically.

"Be quiet a little, I'm thinking about something!"

Li Yan saw at a glance that Teacher Cat was trying to hypnotize him and turned him into a [novel code machine]-like being. While thinking and eating, he glared at it angrily and said.

"Who told you to be so fond of cheating and procrastination, the seventh volume is very well written, I really want to see how the eighth volume develops, other monsters have pushed this responsibility of supervision to me It's not easy for me." Teacher Cat ignored Li Yan's resistance and continued.

Li Yan was silent for a while, looked at Teacher Cat on the floor, and said thoughtfully, "Actually, I'm not good at writing, but I'm good at telling stories. In fact, in terms of writing, just like my Mandarin, it's somewhat unacceptable... …it’s just that light novels have a high tolerance for writing and grammar mistakes, and the story is interesting, but the instability factor in this line is very high, and readers’ interests will change. I can’t guarantee that I can keep writing and let Xuezhi Is it really okay for Yukino to deepen his interest in this area?"

"Well, people only have dreams to match life. People are not monsters. There is not so much time to wait to verify which one is suitable and which one is not suitable. You can let her learn it. It can be regarded as a common sense to shorten the path of confusion. , what's more, the other party doesn't seem to intend to write for the purpose of making money." Teacher Cat said.

"I don't write for the purpose of making money... Maybe I smell like copper. I don't think unpaid writing will last for a long time, and there will be better quality and content guarantees. Writing is also a kind of human labor. , no matter what, the mentality of writing for free will not progress. If you deny the value of your own work at the beginning, how can you make readers face up to the value of the author's work? It must be aimed at a certain reward and purpose. It is right to write."

Li Yan denied Teacher Cat's point of view, and expressed his thoughts about his writing all the time.

It should be said that Mr. Li Yan noticed that Yukinoshita Yukino was really just trying, but he seemed to be really thinking about it...

At this moment, a doorbell rang from the door of this house.

"Mr. Li, are you still eating?" Yukinoshita asked at the door.

"It's over, wait a moment."

Li Yan was slightly taken aback and replied.He was a little curious about what Yukinoshita Yang was looking for at this time.

The cat teacher immediately jumped onto the table, bit a fried squid, and ran inside to enjoy it.

Li Yan looked at the cat teacher who ran into the room, he opened the door, and only saw this Yukinoshita Yono with a signature smile on his face.

"Yeah, Mr. Li," she greeted.

"What's the matter, Miss?" Li Yan asked.

"Hee hee, your customary greetings are so outlandish, can't I look for you if I have nothing to do? Well...I have already eaten, by the way, I heard someone talking to you at the door just now, and someone else came over. ?"

Yukinoshita Yono leaned over, looked inside the house with a smile, and asked.

"...No, it's just a phone call, the voice is a bit loud." Li Yan was startled, and immediately lied and said.

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