Immediately afterwards, Shiyu of Kasumigaoka taught the second classic writing method.

"Because after going through such a simple but small thing after getting to know each other, Sai-kun, who lives in the countryside, is the only fake friend trusted by Suzuki, who is afraid of life and serious, so Suzuki gradually began to make a little fuss about things that the country didn't understand. Ask Sai-kun..."

After Shiyu of Kasumigaoka perfectly arranged the front end of the story and the plot of the first encounter, he began to focus on describing the anecdote of urban girls who did not understand the daily life of the countryside as the details of the story.

For example, the redness and swelling after being stung by insects are considered to be skin allergies, and the early seedlings in the rice fields are considered to be leeks. This series of daily development with rich daily life and character design is almost like watching a movie. Watching these two living environments far apart The two walked down step by step, and vividly described the beauty and fun of the countryside, almost like a movie in front of everyone...

The description of details is also the top priority of the novel. There is no book that can bring out the interesting content in the setting like the outline. The success or failure lies in the writing and thinking, and it can "write" the beauty of the countryside and the city. The complexity of the people and the contradictions between people's hearts are extremely difficult things, but Shiyu of the Hill of Xia is able to handle it with ease.

This kind of ability to tell the emotional story at will, even Li Yan was a little ashamed, really amazing.

Everyone will have the brain hole of the story, and it may be really interesting, but if the brain hole and creativity are not processed well, no matter how good the gold is, it will become a scrap of iron, not a handicraft. Therefore, the writer is not so much a creation, but a Rather, it is the processor of the story.

As a result, the turning point soon began. The differences between the family and the environment that had been forging ahead began to manifest. The young man surnamed Sakai finally saw his state of mind. The city he once longed for seemed to be the most terrifying battlefield in his eyes. In order to take back Suzuki, who was forcibly brought back by a wealthy family, the power of the village, and his own efforts, sublimated the story all at once. In the end, the story of the village campus continues. It seems that nothing has changed, but the story makes people feel So remember...

"Then, that's it for the story, thank you."

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu bowed slightly and said thanks.

"..."

"..."

"Is there no more, there should be a follow-up, there is still a paragraph?!"

Suddenly, among all the fascinated audiences, the first to break the silence was Koshigu Xiahai, she asked nervously with a very reluctant expression.

"After all, it's a short story, and the story is here for now." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu said.

"...I think, you should just write this material into the next book. It's not over yet, isn't it?" Ying Lili was obviously deeply attracted by the sound, and she just saw it and finally picked it up. Continue to start the segment of life, as a result, "turning over" the next page, it ends, it's like being cut in half.

"Really, if I write it, will Sawamura-san want to buy my book?" Kasumigaoka Shiyu glanced at her and asked.

"Buy, buy, buy, I'll pay for it!" Ying Lili was a little unwilling, but still said with a somewhat helpless annoyed expression.

"It's really amazing..." Fujinomiya Kimi thought in horror.

It should be said that she is like a professional creator. If this story is a novel, she may really buy the whole set.

"It's a wonderful story, but it's a short story after all. If you're interested in the future, you can ask Kasumigaoka-san to continue creating, then..."

Fujinomiya Mimi smiled, looked at Li Yan, and said, "It's the teacher's turn to fight back. Can the teacher tell a story that surpasses Kasugaoka-san?"

"..."

Li Yan was silent, and Ying Lili on the side stared at Li Yan with a complicated expression with worried eyes, always feeling a little dazed.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu stood up, also waiting to see what the love novel written by Li Yan would look like...

Immediately afterwards, Li Yan hesitated for a while before sitting on the cushion. He felt the heat on the cushion, thinking that this was the residual heat of a beautiful girl, Li Yan was a little uncomfortable sitting, feeling that it was too easy to be distracted.

"Cough cough..."

Li Yan looked at them, bowed slightly, and said, "My story is called 'Little God'."

"Little god?" Yuegu Xiaoju asked for a moment, taken aback.

"Isn't it a love story?" Koshigu Xiahai asked, holding her cheeks.

"But I always think it's a cute name." Ichiko said with a smile.

Kang Na's face darkened, she raised her head to look at Li Yan, and said, "Isn't it about Jehovah?"

"No, no, it's the god of a Japanese shrine. I'm going to tell a story based on Japanese culture." Li Yan shook his head and explained.

"..." Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looked at Li Yan suspiciously, what kind of story did he plan to tell?

"There was a serious traffic accident on a highway in a bustling city."

Li Yan began to speak.

"A female middle school student named Tsuruta accidentally got into a car accident when she was on her way to the final exam of the second grade. The reason was because Tsuruta saw a passing kitten, and in a hurry, she wanted to get out of the wheel of the car. I rescued the kitten and was seriously injured..." Li Yan said while thinking about it.

In the palace, Lianhua, the Koshigu sisters and others all felt that this opening was a bit too sad, and they all looked serious.

"Hetian was seriously injured and was sent to the hospital. However, after a few days, Tsuruta woke up... But the moment she woke up, she saw her body, she was floating in the air, I saw myself lying on a white hospital bed and could only rely on medical equipment to maintain my life..."

Li Yan's third sentence opened up the core of the story, but in an instant, the flavor of the story changed a bit, which attracted everyone's attention.

However, the progress of this story made Xiazhiqiu Shiyu look at Li Yan blankly.

Why use the setting of out of body?

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looked at Li Yan's eyes, and always felt that he was not making up a story, but pushed out one thing after editing it.

After all, she knew that Li Yan was probably blown up like this by the girl she liked, and then came here after his soul came out of the body. It was unclear what happened in the middle, but this topic would undoubtedly be the last thing Li Yan wanted. stories involved.

"She doesn't know what happened to her, but the human soul is very light, so when she was doing random investigation, she was accidentally blown by the strong wind outside the hospital window, and was blown very close to her body. The far away places are getting farther and farther, and when I come back to my senses, I don't know where I am."

"It seems that Tsuruta's soul cannot float very high because it is not a complete ghost. It seems to feel that he is heavier than some air and can only float in a very low air. As a result, that kind of person doesn't know anything. A place, very lonely and helpless, this lively and cheerful girl misses her family's soul wandering in the endless forest, looking for a way out."

The rain was rustling, the dim environment, and the cold environment seemed to be quite similar to Tsuruta's situation.

"Finally, one day, her call was answered. To my surprise, at the edge of the forest, I met an uncle who had been dead for decades. He took her out of the woods to a place where Streets where ghosts live and humans can't see..."

Li Yan thought for a moment in silence, and said, "At that moment, the kind-hearted ghosts began to help her go back, because it is only a vegetative person who has lost her soul, so as long as she persists and can resist the difficulties and return to her body, she will be able to return to her body. He came back to life and returned to his family, and as a result, Harada... No, Tsuruta's journey to find his body started like this."

"..." Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu looked at his eyes quietly, and seemed to have noticed some terrifying possibilities.

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