Onmyoji Who Wandered into the Second Dimension

"What are you looking at?" After Gabriel left, the black cat looked at Tsuchimodo and looked at himself with a smile, and said unhappily.

"Nothing." Tsuchiyamendong shook his head and said, "Is there anything wrong? I have to come out and say it."

"I wouldn't dare go into a teenage man's room alone."

"It's not like you don't know how many people there are in my family." Tsuchimikado rolled his eyes at the black cat and said, "Okay, let's talk about things first."

"This." The black cat took out a very thick book from his pocket and handed it to Tsuchimetto.

"This is?" Tsuchimodo asked curiously as he looked at the white book with completely incomprehensible English on the cover.

"Aschera's doujinshi, I want you to read it for me, how about it?" the black cat turned its head away, and said embarrassedly.

"Doujinshi?" Tsuchimodoto looked at the book in front of him, and the corners of his mouth twitched. How could this be so thick? Are you planning to finish it in just one book?

Hearing this, he also remembered that in the anime, Black Cat likes to write, especially aschera, a fan of the anime.

However, there is a shortcoming of the black cat, that is, it cannot be read.

That's right, because the setting of the black cat is very complicated, and there are so many words, people don't have the desire to read it at all. In Kirino's evaluation, it is "self-satisfied and self-satisfied".

Of course, although Tsuchimodo knew about the black cat's problem, it was impossible to point it out without reading it, so Tsuchomido endured and quickly opened the first page...

"Ah! I admit defeat." Tu Yumendong put down the book before he finished reading a page, looked at the black cat with a confused expression, and thought to himself.

"How is it?" Black Cat asked, looking at Tsuchimodo with anticipation.

"Hmm..." Tsuchimodo thought for a while, but decided not to directly hit her confidence, so he asked, "Well, Black Cat, before I comment on this book, I have a question to ask."

"If you have any questions, just ask."

"Are you planning to read this book yourself, or are you planning to let anime fans read it, or are you planning to sell it so that everyone can read it?"

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Hearing Tsuchomito's question, the black cat was also taken aback, then looked at Tsuchomito with firm eyes, and said, "Of course I want to sell well, there is no light writer who does not want his book to sell well.

Although I can't be called a writer yet, if I can publish best-selling books, this income can reduce the great financial pressure on my family. "

Hearing the black cat's frank answer, Tsuchimetto also wanted to laugh, "I understand your goal, then what I say next may make you angry, do you accept it?"

"No problem." Black Cat nodded earnestly. The reason why she consulted with Tomito Tsuchikado today was because she wanted to know how she compares herself to others.

You must know that this book is already the third time to contribute to the Newcomer Award. Let alone the publication, it has not even entered the selection competition, and was eliminated in the first round of preliminary review.

Then, Tsuchimetto carefully analyzed the problem of the black cat, and put forward some fundamental suggestions.

Although Tsuchimodo's writing skills are indeed not very good, but he has a lot of knowledge in his previous life, coupled with some comments and experiences seen on the Internet, he can speak clearly and logically.

Many of the suggestions are really useful, just like the suggestions to Kasumigaoka Shiyu. I don’t know how to write them specifically, but it’s completely fine to give you some suggestions so that you can find inspiration.

"In short, you have to understand one thing, that is, no matter how good your writing is and how perfect your settings are, if you can't interest readers, everything is written in vain.

The key point of lightness lies in a light word. No matter what type of lightness it is, you must be able to make people look at it.

The writing is almost okay, as long as you can understand it.

It doesn't matter if the fight is not exciting, the plot must at least be smooth.

It's okay to have a complicated setting, but at least it should be easy for readers to understand, and there should be something for them to read on.

But if you have more settings than the text, is there a problem?As long as the vast majority of people see the length of this setting, they will no longer have the desire to read it, let alone completely understand it without reading the setting.

After Tsuchimodo's conclusion, the black cat's face was extremely gloomy, as if it was about to drip water.

"Is it really that bad?" Black Cat resisted the thought of rebuttal and questioned.

"If you just plan to read it yourself, or show it to fans of this animation, your book is not bad, but if you want to sell it, or even sell it, then this book is still far away." Tsuchimikado Dong told the truth.

"why?"

"?"

"Why can't it be mine." The black cat stood up angrily and said, "After all, what is the work, why should we cater to the public? How is this different from the crudely made ones on the market?"

"That's right, if the readers don't like it, it's useless to write it well." Tsuchimodo said with a shrug.

The black cat sat down discouraged, and said disappointedly: "Then how should I write?"

"How to write it depends on you, everyone's writing method is different, I just give some suggestions.

But the most basic thing is to take your book as an example. First of all, the settings must be greatly reduced. At most two pages can make people understand all the settings, meaningless and uncommon words, and self-created words should be reduced as much as possible.

You have to know that this is writing, not archaeology, and it is also creating a new language.

The key point is the content, the content must be interesting, and you must pay attention to the segmentation. Your paragraph is almost one page. Who can read it? "

The black cat looked at his own in silence, and Tsuchimetto continued: "You can try to rewrite this book with the suggestion I just made.

Doujinshi or something, the setting is the least important thing, because the main setting is just based on the anime, there is no need to waste time on it, all you need is to tell the story you want to tell clearly up. "

"I understand." The black cat nodded, put away the bag, then looked at Tsuchikadodo, and suddenly said a little embarrassedly: "Well, are you free this afternoon?"

"You're free, why, do you have anything else to ask?" Tsuchimodo asked curiously.

"They are going to have a party in the afternoon, and they say they haven't seen you for a long time, and they want to ask if you can go." The black cat said with a blushing face.

"Oh? They want to see me?" Tsuchimodo looked at the black cat scrutinizingly. He is not very familiar with Kosaka Kirino and the others. Even Kosaka Kyosuke, a classmate, usually chats only a handful of times. Party or something, why don't you think of yourself!