Onmyoji Who Wandered into the Second Dimension

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Friday afternoon.

patio.

Today everyone gathered together to hold a barbecue banquet, the main purpose is to celebrate the successful conclusion of the comic exhibition and the great success of the League of Conquerors.

Of course, the manga exhibition actually ended on Wednesday, but because Takiya, the main proposer, really had to go to work, it could only be postponed until the weekend.

However, because Mito Mito will hold a fan meeting this Saturday, the time is set on Friday afternoon.

There were not many people who came to this barbecue banquet, except for Takiya Makoto and Kobayashi, who were members of the club.

As for the property cafe or Kosaka Kirino, they didn't invite them. After all, they don't know the real identity of Tsuchimodoto and the others, and there is no need to let them know for the time being, so there is no invitation.

Huayuan Lilyling and An Yilun, who knew their real identities, did not come either.

Garden Lily Bell and the others were in Tokyo, and it was too troublesome to come here specially, so they refused.

As for An Yilun, he was trying out a new game in the manga exhibition at home, and gave a review, so he didn't have time to come.

In the courtyard at this time, everyone had almost eaten, and they sat together and chatted, played games and so on.

Yingcao, Kaguya Hime, Fafnir, and Gabriel were sitting in the yard playing games together.

Jinyu Ji and Satania sat together happily looking at the computer screen in front of them.

On the screen was the official website of the Alliance of Conquerors. The two of them flipped through the messages of netizens while chatting with everyone in the group with their mobile phones.

Kobayashi, Makoto Takitani and Erkoya were sitting together and chatting. Thor looked at Makoto Takitani vigilantly while making tea for Kobayashi with a smile.

Wei Naite is learning how to cook with Xiaoyi, and from time to time, he cooks some barbecue for Connor next to him, happily feeding him.

Since the last time at the comic exhibition, Vinette and the others have known that Thor and the others are vicious dragons.

But what if Connor is a dragon?Just being cute is enough

Tushou Sanae, Kotori Yuliuka and Dansheng Gu Morixia are practicing bow and arrow with White Wolf.

Dan Shenggu Senxia didn't know what was going on. When he walked into the courtyard, he happened to see the white wolf practicing archery, so he followed the white wolf all afternoon, wanting to learn archery from her.

Fortunately, White Wolf didn't refuse either. After making her a bow and arrow, he began to teach her archery.

After seeing this scene, Xiaotori Yuliuka and Tomori Sanae also moved over one after another, wanting to play together.

Although the white wolf also felt that they were popular for three minutes, but seeing their expectant expressions, the white wolf felt that teaching one is still teaching, and teaching three is also teaching, so it won't waste much time.

It's good for them to persevere, even if they can't, it's a big deal to play with them all afternoon.

As for Tsuchimodo Dong, he was sitting with the black cat to give the black cat some suggestions for revision.

Next to him, Rafael looked at the two with a smile, claiming that he was supervising the two of them so as not to have an affair in private.

Regarding Rafael's reason, Tsuchimodo couldn't complain anymore, every word of this reason was a joke, he and the black cat were too lazy to talk to Rafael.

But in his heart, Tsuchimodo secretly made up his mind that sooner or later he would make this black-bellied angel suffer.

When there is a chance for the two of them to be alone, if Raphael comes to try to kill him again, Tsuchikado will definitely not let go of the opportunity to take advantage, and he must impress her deeply.

He told Rafael that he is a carnivore, and one cannot be dishonest.

As for the black cat, it was itching for Rafael's teeth, what a good opportunity to be alone, but it was destroyed by this black-bellied angel.

Since you don't want to take down Tsuchikado, then you don't want to make trouble, what's the point of being a light bulb?

Tsuchimodo looked at the latest revision of the black cat, and in terms of thickness, it was already nearly half thinner than the original one.

Although the number of words has been reduced by more than half, the main story has not been reduced, but a bunch of cumbersome and useless settings have been removed, and then the uncommon words have been changed into easy-to-understand words.

Regarding the black cat's reluctance to reduce the fighting scenes, Tsuchimetto has no objection, because if the fighting scenes can be written well, it is indeed a plus point, as long as it is not too bloated.

"Hmm... From the plot of this book, there is nothing that needs to be revised, but there are a few characters who feel like they are dying on purpose, and you can make their deaths more reasonable.

The second is that although the fighting scenes have become much simpler, they still take up too much space. In the case of rich plots, try to simplify them as much as possible.

Especially when zooming in, there is no need to write in such detail every time you zoom in.

As long as you have described it in detail for the first time, you will enlarge the move next time. You only need to write the name of the big move, and leave the rest to the readers to recall and imagine. Don’t limit the reader’s thinking. Then die.

Finally, there is the issue of explaining the setting. Except for the introduction of your own second setting, the setting in the other original anime does not need to be written in such detail, just explain it briefly.

After all, you are a doujinshi, and most of the people who read your book are fellow fans, and they all know these settings. "

Black Cat nodded earnestly. At first she was a little unconvinced by Tsuchimodoto's modification, but after many revisions, Black Cat also found that hers was indeed much better than before.

During this month, Tsuchimodo didn't give her any suggestions related to the plot, but only analyzed the pros and cons of the whole book, and most of them were left to her own subjective choice to modify or keep. , and then continue to give suggestions next time.

After the black cat took note of Tsuchimetto's revision opinions, he took over the computer and prepared to continue the revision.

The suggestion given by Dou Mito for this book is not to submit a manuscript to the publishing house for sale. After all, once the doujinshi is released, it will involve the copyright issue of the original animation, and the share that Black Cat can get is only the minimum standard.

So Tsuchimetto suggested that she use this book as a practice test first, and then on the premise of writing as well as possible, Tsuchimetong helped her to print it herself, and finally participated in the Winter Festival Manga Exhibition and sold it at the Manga Exhibition. .

Before participating in the comic exhibition, Tsuchimodo Dong will also help the black cat to promote through his own channels, trying to make a name for himself in the comic exhibition.