"Then let's get down to business, Teacher Ye'an."
Gu Kazama clasped his hands, and Erlang's legs were raised high - because it was long trousers, so he didn't have to worry about losing his clothes.
Kazama Gu, who has entered the editing state, looks very serious. Like Ye An's neighbor Matsumoto Sakai who has a time-traveling cat, she is a person who separates work and life very clearly. The gap between the two states in various aspects even makes people I can't help but think that she is not schizophrenic, such a faux pas.
"Teacher Ye An, whether it's private or public, I think you should change your plot." Kazama Gu took out the manuscript from his bag, looked into Ye An's eyes and said seriously.
Ye An looked away a little guilty: "I... I don't understand, hehehe..."
"The role of Ba Mami has already gained the love of many readers. At the same time, her existence is also the hope of Madoka and Sayaka, and she is positioned as a senior who is admired and relied on."
"And this arrangement allowed her to die at the happiest time, and she has already made an agreement with Madoka to recognize each other. Her death will undoubtedly make both of Sayaka Madoka's characters fall into the abyss."
"Besides, Ba Mami didn't die with honor. Her death was too sudden and didn't make me see any special significance. It didn't bring positive growth to the protagonist, and there was no self-sublimation. It was just forced poisoning. "
Kazama Gu's words were sharp and pointed, and Ye An's face almost turned 180 degrees.
"So, I hope, Mr. Ye'an, you can think about it and change the idea of the plot again." Kazama Gu said solemnly, "It doesn't mean that as long as the dead will become a god, the unfolding of a god is not necessarily a good thing. I can give it to you again. You have a week to redraw the next 10 pages of this chapter, and at the same time conceive the following plot."
What Kazama Gu said was not unreasonable, or completely correct.
She didn't go beyond the editor's duty to tamper with the work, on the contrary, she fulfilled the editor's task extremely responsibly - finding out the problems, checking for omissions and filling in the gaps.
The death of Ba Mami is simply the max of persuasion power, and it even makes people wonder what those who persisted think. Such a plot is really unreasonable without seeing the subsequent development.However, Gu Kazama did not intervene further when he raised the question, but only gave time for Ye An to think about it.
Magical girls are supposed to be a symbol of purity and beauty, so forcing them into a dark story seems like a gimmick no matter how you look at it.
Instead of focusing on the quality of the work, it is estimated that it will become the idea of many people to engage in some crooked ways.
But they don't know Ye An doesn't know yet?
This must not be changed!
Is it still necessary for my big magic circle to engage in some gimmicks and topical topics?Can this still be the masterpiece "Magic Circle" after changing it?
If you really change it, then you will really become a young child.so……
"I'm sorry... Editor Kazama." Ye An said apologetically, "This development is not something I did on a whim... In fact, I have already prepared the outline of the plot later on. This work is definitely not a malicious gimmick to attract attention. Readers, but a novella comic with a very compact plot."
Kazama Gu looked at Ye An suspiciously, thought for a while and said, "If you insist on doing this, I will naturally not stop you..."
"But the premise is that you really have an outline? If you really draw like this, I'm going to withstand the pressure from above to help you keep it. If you can't guarantee it, I can't help you."
"Yes! Absolutely!" Ye An hurriedly nodded like a chicken pecking rice.
Kazama Gu looked at Ye An for a while, but didn't see any sign of lying or uncertainty on him, so he nodded and said, "Okay, then I'll believe you just once."
Afterwards, Kazama Gu seemed to be showing her breath, and her tense body instantly relaxed, she was simply a low-profile version of the hamster spirit.
She was back to her usual self again,
Stretching lazily, Kazama Gu stood up: "Hey Yean, you have an outline, right?"
"Ah... yes." Ye An said with some doubts.
Kazama Gu Wenyan smiled: "How about letting me see? I'm super curious!"
"But I refuse! One of my favorite things to do is to say NO to self-righteous editors!"
Of course I dare not say that to Kazama-san who is working~
Relatives at home, update later
As in the title...you don't have to wait anymore, I guess it was past one o'clock in the morning when the dirty demon finished writing...I'm very sorry! (Dogeta) ——————————————————————————
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I have to say that Kazama Gu is indeed a wolf flame. The power of the third chapter of "Magic Girl Madoka Magica" is so terrifying, I didn't expect her to be saved.
Ye An was secretly grateful. Sister Fengjian must have resisted a lot of pressure. Thinking about it, she really feels guilty.
But in fact...
"Ah, how could I be the only one to see this."
Kazama Gu lay on the sofa with his familiar Erlang's legs crossed and said with emotion.
For Ye An, Kazama Gu still has a lot of trust, mainly because of his affirmation of ability. Kazama Gu often communicates with Ye An, and the two of them have many ideas that coincide with each other.
Ye An couldn't be persuaded, and seeing how assured he was, he simply gave him a chance.It just so happened that Gu Kazama didn't want to suffer alone.
So the third chapter of "Magic Circle" appeared on JUMP so smoothly.
So real.
…………
My name is Lu Ren, and I am an ordinary high school student.
Even though the front desk of my hometown is a fried chicken and a cute fake girl in men's clothing, but I am indeed an ordinary high school student, whoever dares to object to me!so I……
I'll beep!
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