A Salted Fish in the Second Dimension

It just so happened that the two of them were a little tired from typing, so they took the opportunity to relax and find out what boring content Hanyu had made.

So the two girls, one big and one small, just asked politely, then brought Hanyu's computer over, and then brought their heads together, and looked at Hanyu's script with professional eyes.

"Well... what do you guys think?" Seeing the two girls became a little weird after checking the script, not sure if they were smiling awkwardly, Hanyu raised a little hope in his heart.After all, Kato Megumi himself said that he didn't understand the game script. How to read it is more appropriate.If it is replaced by two relatively professional people, there may be a different view.

"Thirty points out of one hundred."

"Bad review!"

Then the two girls didn't care about Hanyu's 'fragile' mind at all, and gave a very bad evaluation mercilessly, which immediately hit Hanyu greatly, and made Megumi Kato, who was on the side, a little embarrassed to comfort him there. Hanyu.

"It doesn't matter. If it's not good, just revise it. Anyway, there is still time. Besides, I personally think that Wang Jun's writing is OK. Maybe the fairy and Shi Yu are stricter."

Kato Megumi felt that if she hadn't had to read her own script, Hanyu would not have been criticized by the Yamada Goblin and Kasumigaoka Shiyu in front of everyone.Although this kind of thing is actually going to happen sooner or later, it can't stop Megumi Kato's heart from feeling a little bit of guilt towards Hanu.And Hanyu felt a little better because of Kato Megumi's comfort.

It's a pity that Hanyu just felt a little bit better, and Yamada Goblin and Kasumigaoka Shiyu ruthlessly trampled on Hanyu's slightly better fragile mind, and even rolled them for a few laps.

"Hanyu-kun, your steps are not described as bad, but very bad. If you hadn't written the scripts of Misaka Mikoto and others before and I had read some of them, I couldn't believe it was written by you? The language is very beautiful, and the words and sentences are also very helpful, but in terms of content, it is simply empty. Hanyu-kun." Shiyu Kasumigaoka pointed to the document on the computer screen, and criticized very rudely. De Hanyu felt very ashamed and lowered his head in embarrassment.

And it wasn't over yet, Kasumigaoka Shiyu said a bunch of words, took a breather and took a break, the Yamada Goblin took the big stick of criticizing Hanyu and continued talking.

"Hanyu-kun, you are so boring. The plots in it are very old-fashioned, and they have all been used badly. Of course, it does not mean that those plots can't be used, but you have made them a little new, Or something interesting. And you see…”

Halfway through, the Yamada Goblin deliberately found an example in the document, turned the computer over to Hanyu and said, "Look at what you wrote about Kato-san, what kind of reaction is that?"

"Um... what's wrong with this?" Hanyu followed the words of the Yamada Fairy and looked at the contents of the computer.However, after watching it for a while, Hanyu thought about it and felt that he had not written anything wrong. After all, according to what he knew about Megumi Kato, when he encountered the passage he designed, he wrote it quite realistically.

"What's wrong?" But the Yamada Fairy became very dissatisfied when she heard Hanyu's answer. "Are you still a light novel writer? Kato-san in your writing, this reaction is not interesting enough. Is Kato-san such a boring person in your heart?"

"That..." As soon as the Yamada Fairy's voice fell, Kato Megumi raised her hand in embarrassment, attracting everyone's attention.

"Actually, if I really encountered that kind of thing in the script, my reaction should be similar to what Wang Jun wrote..."

Chapter 84: What are you going to write next?

"Well..." After hearing Kato Megumi's self-explaining short speech, the Yamada Fairy was stunned.

And Hanyu is in line with Kato Megumi nodded and said: "That's it, I also respect reality, and I wrote it in consideration of Megumi's character."

"..." Faced with such a result, the Goblin Yamada lowered his head speechlessly and looked at the computer, and then carefully thought about the plot designed by Hanyu in the script. The Goblin Yamada realized that if he was at the same angle as Hanyu, it might be possible He would also make the same choice as Hanyu.Immediately, the emotions that the Yamada Fairy finally found an opportunity to criticize Hanyu in an open and fair manner were immediately cut off by Kato Megumi and Hanyu, which made the whole person a little depressed.

On the other side, Kasumigaoka Shiyu watched the Yamada Goblin counterattack by Kato Megumi and Hanyu, and almost laughed out loud.But fortunately, she knew that she was on the same stance of criticizing Hanyu as the Yamada Goblin, so Kasumigaoka Shiyu resisted the desire to bring down the Yamada Goblin, and then took the computer next to the Yamada Goblin and carefully examined it. Let's see if I can find something.

In any case, Jiang is still old and hot. Compared with the little girl of Yamada Fairy, who has no knowledge, Kasumigaoka Shiyu has accumulated a lot of experience in dealing with boys because of writing love novels.Although these experiences were all made up by Shiyu Xiazhiqiu with a computer, thinking wildly, but dealing with Hanyu, an innocent little X man who has been single for many years, Shiyu Xiazhiqiu is still not false at all.

So, in Hanyu's eyes, "I see what else you can say", Kasumigaoka Shiyu didn't look carefully at the examples that the Yamada Fairy found, but simply glanced at Hanyu with a smile, faintly. "Even if Hanyu-kun respects Kato Megumi's character in consideration of the reality, it's still your fault that the script is written like this!"

"Um..." Hanyu may be because of the reason why the Yamada fairy was turned back through Kato Megumi. He was a little dissatisfied with the evaluation of Kasumigaoka Shiyu at first, and even put on a pair of 'You say it first, I will refute you later. ' expression.

However, with Shiyu of Kasumigaoka's elaboration, Hanyu couldn't calm down, and even started to break out in cold sweat.

"Since Hanyu-kun, you know Megumi Kato's temperament and her reaction when she encounters these similar things. Then why do you still use such a plot in the script? Are you a novel writer? Wouldn't you create a story that suits Kato-san based on her character? Or would you make the story more interesting by making other changes? Is your brain so rusty now that you can only pick up people's wisdom and use some old-fashioned bridges? I don't know how to improve it. How can Kato-san's charming charm be reflected like this..."

"Charming..." Kato Megumi whispered a little embarrassed after hearing Shiyu's praise from Kasumigaoka, but she looked at Hanyu more worriedly.

"I...I..." Facing Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's aggressive questioning, Hanyu's face turned pale, and after opening his mouth a little embarrassed, he found that Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was right, and he had nothing to refute. .In this case, Hanyu could only helplessly open his mouth, but in the end he didn't say anything.

However, Shiyu of Kasumigaoka did not let Hanyu go, but continued to train Hanyu while the iron was hot. "Hanyu-kun, do you think it's good to write the story? It doesn't matter if it's not that interesting? Are you really doing it with your heart?"

Having said that, Kasumigaoka Shiyu pushed the computer away, then leaned back on the back of the chair, and scolded Hanyu with both hands around his chest. "If it's just this level, Hanyu-kun, you said that you want to make the best game and make Kato the best heroine. I don't think you're just joking. If so, I think we are so There is no need for multiple people to play games with you."

Facing the rebuke of Shiyu of Kasumigaoka, Hanyu couldn't help feeling very ashamed.

But in fact, after listening to the words of Shiyu of Kasumigaoka, Hanyu felt that he had indeed been a little slack recently.In other words, because of the existence of the system, Hanyu copied novels, and casually copied comments such as popular and anticipation, which made Hanyu unconsciously become a little complacent, and also caused Hanyu to produce his own level of writing novels. Very high illusion, I feel that my ability is still very strong, and everything I write must be interesting.Especially in the case of Shiyu Kasumigaoka and Goblin Yamada who stopped staring at Hanyu after reading several scripts of Misaka Mikoto and the others before, and after the absence of 'supervision', Hanyu became more and more complacent and gradually relaxed towards himself. requirements.

And now that such a thing has happened, the attitude of Shiyu of Kasumigaoka and the others is like a thunderbolt that suddenly wakes up Hanyu.After realizing what he had done wrong, Hanyu quickly took the computer back and looked at the script he had written. Then Hanyu's face turned red and black.The more he looked, the worse his complexion became, and the more ashamed he became.

Even originally, according to custom, the Yamada Fairy would add a few words of schadenfreude after Shiyu of Kasumigaoka finished talking about Hanyu.In the end, after seeing Hanyu's expression, the Yamada Fairy finally silently closed her mouth and said nothing.However, in her heart, she silently felt some admiration for Shiyu of Xia Zhiqiu, and felt that the other party was still a bit powerful.

"Wangjun..." As one of the parties, Kato Megumi looked at Hanyu's appearance and couldn't help calling him a little worried.

"Ah, Megumi..." After hearing Kato Megumi's voice, Hanyu glanced at Kato Megumi subconsciously, and then responded somewhat blankly.

"It's okay, I believe Wang Jun's. It's just a failed writing. I believe Wang Jun will write better in the future." In order to cheer up Hanyu, Kato Megumi cheered Hanyu very gently.

"I'm sorry, it's true that I'm a little too relaxed this time. It's my fault that Megumi has become so boring. I hope you can forgive me..." Compared with the other two girls, Kato Megumi's gentleness is combined with their aggressiveness. In stark contrast, Hanyu felt a little better, so he sincerely apologized to Megumi Kato.

"It's okay, it'll be more interesting next time..." Kato Megumi didn't refuse Hanyu's apology, but just put forward his request with a faint smile.

"Don't worry, I will definitely write the best story, write a plot that makes people fall in love with Megumi at a glance, and make Megumi the best heroine!" Facing such a considerate Megumi Kato, Hanyu's heart Impressed, I could not help making a promise to the other party directly.

"Wangjun..." Facing Hanyu's oath, Kato Megumi didn't know if Hanyu contained some of his own feelings, and felt a little complicated for a while.

The Yamada Fairy on the side was even more appetizing when she heard the words, and couldn't help but scolded Hanyu in her heart. 'People help you find mistakes and give you advice, don't you know and thank me? '

And Shiyu of Kasumigaoka seemed more straightforward than the Yamada fairy, directly interrupting the interaction between Hanyu and Kato Megumi, and asked aloud.

"Then Hanyu-kun, what are you going to write next?"

Chapter 85 Why Can’t You Think Out

"Eh...that I haven't thought about it yet..."

The question that Shiyu of Kasumigaoka suddenly interjected made Hanyu, who was being moved by himself, stunned for a moment, and directly interrupted his emotions.However, everyone was watching the issue of Shiyu of Kasumigaoka, and Hanyu had no choice but to choose to tell the truth after hesitating for a while.

"Qi...you thought you had some good ideas, who wouldn't talk big..." For some reason, the Yamada Goblin and Kasumigaoka Shiyu seemed to put aside their previous prejudices on the matter of 'bullying' Hanyu. reached an agreement.Without any hint from Kasumigaoka Shiyu, the Yamada Fairy jumped out and raised the bar just as Hanyu's voice fell.

"You bastard..." Hanyu felt a little annoyed at the sight of the Yamada Goblin making a face at him.