Hikigaya Hachiman Will Also Become a Current Charge

who I am?where am I?What am I doing?

After a while, Hachiman let go of her lips, looking at Jing Kei who was still in a daze, feeling a little funny in his heart.

It is estimated that this is the first kiss, it is too exciting.

"I have received the reward, and I will go to the wedding with you next month."

Leaving a word in her ear, Hachiman turned and left the rooftop.

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Chapter 185: Unfinished commission

After school time, Ministry of Service.

Hachiman came here as usual, but just as he opened the door, he saw Yukino sitting on a chair and already asleep, with the part of Zaimuza's novel still on the girl's lap, probably because she was too sleepy after reading the novel.

"It's really hard for you."

Seeing the girl's lovely sleeping face, Hachiman's expression also softened.

This is also normal, reading Zaikiza's novels is really exhausting, recalling what he read yesterday, Hachiman couldn't help but twitched his lips.

Looking at the large open window, Hachiman thought about it and decided to close it a little smaller. After all, it is quite windy outside now, and it would be bad if the girl caught a cold.

However, the sound of dragging the window still woke the girl up.

Yukino opened her sleepy eyes, looked at Hachiman who was closing the window, and felt a warm feeling in her heart.

"Are you awake?" Hachiman smiled softly when he saw the girl woke up.

"Ah."

The girl's originally cold voice became soft unconsciously.

"Hello."

At this moment, a signature greeting sounded, and Yui opened the door of the activity room.

"Good afternoon, Xiaoxue, Xiaoqi."

Seeing the two Hachimans, the girl greeted them with a smile.

"Well, good afternoon."

"Good afternoon, Yui."

The two also greeted her.

But what caught Hachiman's attention was that Yui seemed to be fine, with a silly smile on her face.

Before he was allowed to think too much, the door of the activity room was opened again, and the huge figure of Caimuzuo appeared at the door.

This guy was still wearing the white windbreaker that looked very hot, with his hands outstretched, Zhong Er said with a breath.

"I came here according to the agreement. How about my masterpiece, Sarah, please praise me to your heart's content."

It can be said that Zaimoza is full of confidence in his novels.

But for his performance, Hachiman and Yukino looked at him expressionlessly.

Especially Yukino, who looked at Zai Muzao with that icy gaze was sweating profusely, and his tone couldn't help but weaken.

"Well... what do you guys think of my novel?"

"It's too bad, it's hopeless, it seems to turn the meaningful act of reading into a cruel torture." Xue Nai said directly and coldly.

"It's boring beyond imagination. I can't read your novel at all. The first part I took is almost the whole introduction of the setting, and it's too complicated, and there are many typos. After reading it, I don't know what you want. express a kind of story."

"Wow...."

Hearing Yukino's comment, Zaimuko stepped back a few steps, clutching his chest, as if he had been hit.

Taking a few deep breaths to calm down, he looked at Hachiman again.

"Hachiman, you must understand me."

Seeing his hopeful eyes, Hachiman shrugged.

"I want to praise you too, but unfortunately I can't."

"Although some of the settings I got were not many, the stories were too poor and there was no coherence at all, as if several stories were forcibly blended together."

"By the way, you probably plagiarized several works separately."

Hachiman, this guy, smiled and said very hurtful words.

Hearing his words, Zaimoza shed sad tears, and tearfully looked at Yui who hadn't expressed his opinion yet.

Seeing him like this, although Yui couldn't bear it, she still told the truth.

"That... Actually, I fell asleep after watching it last night. I couldn't understand the introduction of Chuangshi God and other gods at all."

"But you know a lot of uncommon words, which is very powerful."

Hearing Yui's words, Hachiman showed such an expression, he said how could the girl be the same as usual after watching it, it turned out that she didn't read it at all.

But Caimuzuo couldn't bear it any longer, the girl's words became the last straw that broke the camel's back. He was so distraught that he couldn't help but made a Neymar roll on the ground.

Because the rolling motion was too big, it hit the wall of the activity room and stopped.

"Is it really that bad..."

Zai Muzao's heart was broken after repeated blows by the three of them, and he burst into tears.

Seeing him like this, Hachiman sighed, squatted beside him, and said seriously.

"Zaimuza, do you really want to write a novel? It's not just a whim."

Timuzuo also got up from the ground at this time, with a serious expression on his face.

"Of course I'm serious about writing novels."

"Although I was criticized miserably by you, I am still very happy that the things I wrote can be seen and evaluated by others."

"One day, I will use my pen to write a story that can satisfy everyone. This is the dream I have been working hard for."

Hearing his words, Hachiman was silent for a moment, then patted him on the shoulder.

"Okay, people who work hard for their dreams are worthy of respect. In this case, let me teach you how to write novels."

"Blocking the name of my great teacher will definitely make your novel reach the standard for publication."

At this time, Hachiman seemed to be radiant, causing Yui's face to reveal a look of admiration, and even Yukino who was on the side looked sideways at him.

"Small enterprise, so handsome!"

"I didn't expect this guy to..."

But after hearing his words, Zaimuzao was stunned for a moment.

"Hachiman, who were you talking about just now?"

"I forgot to tell you, I am actually the author of "Sword Art Online" and "Fights Break Sphere", Mr. Hachiman said with a smirk on his face.

"You...you are the great teacher?!" Zaimuza showed an expression of disbelief.

"That's right, both of them can prove it for me." Hachiman looked at the two girls on the other side.

"Yeah, Xiaoqi is very good at writing novels." Yui nodded repeatedly.

"Although I don't want to admit it, this guy is really good at writing novels." Xue Nai also said flatly.

"Great, then Hachiman, you can definitely help me." After confirming Hachiman's identity, Saikiza grabbed his hand.

"Don't worry, since I promised, I will definitely help you."

Pulling Zaimokiza up from the ground, Hachiman continued to speak.

"What you have to do now is to improve your writing skills. You can read more novels by other people. You can try to imitate their writing style first, and then write your own stories."

"However, whether you can attract the attention of readers depends on whether your story is exciting or not. I will teach you slowly about the explosive points of the plot."

"So work hard, Zaimoza, writing a good novel can't be done in a day."

Patting Zaikiza on the shoulder, Hachiman looked serious.

Not only that, Xue Nai also spoke aside.

"That's right. People who are willing to work hard are worthy of respect. Not only this guy, but we will also help you. Since the Ministry of Service has accepted your commission, we will not give up halfway."

"Although we can't give you too many opinions on writing, as readers, we still make comments on your novels."

"Yes, yes, I will definitely watch it next time." Yui also nodded.

Hearing the words of several people, Cai Muzuo showed a moved expression on his face, and quickly bowed to thank him.

"Thank you so much, I will ask you again when I am done modifying."

After speaking, he took his novel and left the activity room.

As Zai Muzao said, he will come again after he finishes his revision.

Therefore, this commission has not been completed yet.

Chapter 186: Ayaka Practices Hard

At eight o'clock in the evening, Jing's lovely apartment.

Jing Keai, who had just taken a shower, was lying on the bed in a big shape with a towel wrapped around her body.

Fingers caressed his lips, recalling what happened this morning, a faint blush appeared on his face.

She never thought that her first kiss, which she had kept for 29 years, would be taken away by someone like this, by a 16-year-old kid.

"I'm going to die, I'm going to die, being teased like this by a brat, and my heart is still moving." Feeling her hot cheeks, Jing Keai spat secretly in her heart.

"That stinky brat actually stuck his tongue in, but the feeling of kissing is really good..." Touching her lips with her fingers, Jing Keai showed a foolish smile on her face.